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Reviewed By: marta178 - not sign in (this is all because of hotmail you know...) On: October 22, 2004 15:36 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TAADAAHHH!!! Suspense again né? So that's what sesshoumaru was talking about? Being 'emprisoned' in the future? The blue light again...maybe they can pass throw time using the tetsusaiga? I hate suspense...so...UPDATE SOON!!! :P:P:P **peace**
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Reviewed By: monsterkittie(notloggedin) On: October 22, 2004 15:04 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay. Sorry. I've been sneak reading since Purity. I LOVE THIS STORY!!! (oh, and the others too)! Hee Hee...thirty seconds....Any chance for puppies???? I too have a stupid football game, although I'm supposedly the adult in charge, so I have to "babysit" the band.... Phooy on you, Granola Bar!
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Reviewed By: GranolaBar - Not signed in On: October 22, 2004 14:34 PDT
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That was great! I just read the past 6 chapters because I finally found time. I have to keep this short because of a stupid football game I have to go to, *mumbles* stupid band *mumbles some more*. Well... I can't wait to read what is in store for the both of them!
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: Kagome_chan_17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 14:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
................................... I dun know what to say.... that was really great and amazing and and and .... so many other things. You made me cry again btw... THANK YOU INUYASHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved that really really really, this is not only me but 2 of my friends as well, we read it together and im missing my b-day party to see it but I just couldn't wait especially after you told me that I would forgive you for 63 if I did read it. so.... DOMO ARRIGATO!!!!!!!!!!! It was amazing... i mean REALLY amazing, I can't wait to see the rest of the story and I kinda wonder.... Will Miroku and Sango get their turn in all this? I hope so... and again THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!! I love you Sue I really do ALMIGHTY ONE!!!!! Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: peachykeen(notsignedin) [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 13:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so romantic...i love it! im happy that inuyasha and kagome are finally together!! :O) keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Naeryn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 13:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following your work since Purity, and I have to say, this story is one of your best. I LOVE this chapter! Beautiful angst, followed by one of the most beautiful lemons I've read. *thumbs her nose at the hecklers* Now then, wasn't that worth waiting for? Hmm??? Those who complain about your delay need to learn the benefits of delayed gratification... Inuyasha certainly has. *grins* So... what happens with the diary, now that Kagome and Inuyasha have purified the Shikon no Tama? Since I have this sneaking suspicion that the book the Great Shippouni "liberated" from Norimitsu's castle wasn't the real one. Or was Myoga mistaken about the need to find it before they purified the jewel? Wonderful job, Sue, can't wait to read the next installment.
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 12:30 PDT
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Mission defile the wench? LOL! But about the acutal chapter, well... WOW!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 12:07 PDT
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congrats on another good chapter. your work is wonderful, as i have been saying since i began reading it. absolutly breathtaking romance, props on that. wow...still so much to go on and yet so much has been covered. this story has become a part of my everyday life. i really hope you plan on becomming a writter...the way you can bring together your words, its like flowing magic. girl, you did good. :-)
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Title: yeh
Reviewed By: kikyou_104(nis) On: October 22, 2004 11:18 PDT
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YEH THEY ARE FINALLY TOGEATHER....took them long enough..well great chappie update soon thanks
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Reviewed By: marta178 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 11:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff**sniff* That was the BEST Romance chapter i've ever read ;') The way you descrived the emotions they were felling was stupendous...Girl you got future...Do you ever thought about writing a book?? Well again i congratulat you for the best chapter!! **kisses** ps:ummmm....i still don't understand the thing with the fang and sesshou-kun :P
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Title: Inuyashahanyu@aol.com
Reviewed By: Votuse On: October 22, 2004 10:14 PDT
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damn a spork.... there being harsh for that chappy huh? sporks arent even sharp that would hurt bunches atleast they could have said ill give you a quick and painless demise and it would have been atleast a little pleasent of them. They even went into detail. well although i waas waiting for the chap too i didn't interegate you as to "NOW or else" taktics why... it would be an empty threat...im pacifist...sort of (Now with my comment about the story) will Kagome get another sit charm out of frustration?....Hmmmm will inu get more action??? will miroku and Saingo get married? will the new skill from tetsusaiga will be atained? will i ever shut up? will i find out next chapter? will something happen to you preventing you from updateing????????????????? Ahhh!!! damn people who read this will prob commit suicide..... im not lying i know about 2... although....hmmmm they are annoying........ but then no more reading.... just cancel most things i write because i have a.d.d. and most likely will sound like a dumbass well see ya
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Title: Chappy 64
Reviewed By: blazingnymph7 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 09:45 PDT
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Ok, congrats on the lemon, it was very well done, but what else may weexpect from such a great author as you. I actually understand why you were so peeve when other where pushing you to do a lemon. A true work of art can not be rushed. By the way, Kouga was actually right, Although Yasha does recieve credit for beating his initial time limit of one to two minutes.wonder what Kagome would say if she found out the guys were talk so freely about her?
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: October 22, 2004 09:33 PDT
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Great chapter, beautifully done. Enough said
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Reviewed By: laptawenzell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 08:56 PDT
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Yea! That was sweet and wonderful. Wonderful! The Shikon no Tama thing was kinda creepy, especially when it rose up to hover over them, and Inuyasha's fear that he would vanish was very touching. All in all, a fantastic chapter. I have to be away from my computer until tomorrow night. This chapter will give me something nice to think about until I can get back. Thanks!
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Title: yey!
Reviewed By: Brenda babmidnight On: October 22, 2004 08:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it! loved loved loved it! For a first lemon for this story, not that there will or won't be more, who is to say :) that was good. It came off as someone would feel their first time. Need and then not totally sure about all the new feelings! I like how Kagome discovered the scratches from that cat demon! :) can't wait for more and until the next lemon (if there is one) it's back to ff.net :) Brenda aka babmidnight
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