| "The Youkai and the Exterminator" Reviews/Comments [ 221 ] |
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Title: taku mou
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 22:41 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww does she really have to lose her powers cause she because she became Inuyasha's "wife"...man oh man...I just don't like the idea of that, but I'm sure it will make for an interesting twist *sigh* I'll bet she'll keep it from Inuyasha and sulk for a couple of chapters...ooooooh and Kohaku, what was she thinking leaving the jewel with the boy...Kagome no baka. I'm so glad I decided to read you other works. It seems there really is a glut of bad storys out there, and I just couldn't find any good ones to read until I came apon possesion, and loved it so much that I just had to see what else you've written. I'll be waiting for an update on all the story's I like from you.
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Reviewed By: Ran-Chan (prinsess_serenity59 nsi) On: February 15, 2005 13:55 PST
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wait I thought she hadent lost the priestess abilaties woah @,@ this is so confuzing even so I still love the story hun its fun and loving and LOTS of tension hehe thats funny too specially the sexual tension lol ~,^ Lav ya hun keep goin yerre goood Ran-Chan
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: February 15, 2005 00:04 PST
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Strife amoung friends...not good. I'm sure that things will resolve themselves in time. But Kikyou's cautionary conversation with Kagome is a true concern. I'm wondering how much of that is really true, that Mikos lose their powers when they lose their purity. Is it fact or just belief. I personally think that inner purity of thought and deed is more important than physical purity. It's the heart that determins your strength, and I have always believed that Kagome is stronger than Kikyou...Kikyou only had full training. Whatever Kagome has managed to do has always been just as impressive as anything that Kikyou has done. Yes; Kagome is Kikyou's reincarnation but there is almost 500 years spanning the death and current rebirth of their soul. Many incarnations and periods of spiritual growth and maturation must have occured in that time. I believe that Kagome has the capacity to equal, no...surpass Kikyou. --- Of course, you will reveal the path you will choose for your story and I know that I will enjoy it...whatever it may be! Great chapter!
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Title: Nice chapter
Reviewed By: missy_bee(not logged on) On: February 07, 2005 21:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Remember me well that was one hell of the chapter. What happen to Kikyo though? For a second I thought Kikyo was watching Sess/Sango. Well I can't wait to read what happens when Inuyasha learns that Sessh/Sango are mates again. Plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: February 04, 2005 19:13 PST
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great chapter! please tell me that naraku isn't going to break up sess and sango, though! that would like totally suck!
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Reviewed By: Manda On: February 03, 2005 19:45 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooo!!!! good chapter!!!! i liked it...damn stupid naraku...cant just leave the almost happy couple alone...grrrrrr! oh well...u will kill him wont you? well...w/e! good chapter again!update soon!!!! please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: demetz (not signed in) On: January 30, 2005 08:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When you finish this story you should start another one centered around sessh and the civil war time period you described. Enemies around every corner makes life interesting after all. I still want longer chapters!
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Title: Oh...my...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: January 29, 2005 18:38 PST
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I really enjoyed Sango and Sesshoumaru's 'kiss and make up' session. I also found Jano's confrontation with InuYasha quite interesting. But to have Naraku appear in the shadows, watching the reunited couple, with new plots and schemes to torment them whirling in his head...I was not expecting that. Damn him...sick and twisted bastard! Looks like they're in for a real rocky road ahead. --- Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: kikilala On: January 29, 2005 16:50 PST
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Wow, you really have a demented mind, lol, the out of characterness that Sesshomaru revealed was very scary, i have to agree with Sango on that. You really have as my english teacher would say, good syntax and diction strategies and the imagery is phenominal. Making Naraku watch them was so like his character though, we all know that he was probably pleasuring himself in that baboon pleat, he's such a sick nasty little bastard. To tell you the truth, now that you put Naraku as the main antagonist again, instead of the abomination it kind of makes me weary, but I hope that he dies in a horribly gruesome fashion.
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Title: amazing!
Reviewed By: OhJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 13:18 PST
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Wow... this story is an epic tale! That insidious Naraku... oh, what a great plot point. And InuYasha learning of what Sesshomaru went through when their father died... Oh, my. Your mad talent for weaving a spellbinding tale amazes me. I am most definitely looking forward to the next chapter. By the way, I love 'Possession' too! :) Joy
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Reviewed By: Hiei and the Cherry On: January 23, 2005 17:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finished reading it! AWESOME!!! please update soon! me luvs it!!!! awesome writing and plot...now, what will Sessh do? Ahh...the horro of a good cliffe!!!! evil evil evil....update soon plz!
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Reviewed By: kikilala On: January 21, 2005 15:34 PST
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I was kinda angry at you for a while because for some strange reason only users could review, and then I was like oh well, her choice right. I really like this chapter and that's the only reason I'm trying this again, I want to pay you respect because you are an artist and what you scuplt with your words are the most engaging descriptive details imaginable. Never stop writing and doing what your doing.
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: January 19, 2005 04:30 PST
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great! the return of sesshoumaru is perfect! and he aplogized, of all things! it almost throws the story off of the tracks, but it doesn't, it just throws it into another gravity defying loop.
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Reviewed By: the sorceress(not signed) On: January 16, 2005 11:18 PST
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O_o whats miroku gonna think???? will he hear???? AHHHH!!!!! T_T WHRITE MORE!
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Title: You Tease!
Reviewed By: de.metz On: January 16, 2005 08:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I demand longer chapters!
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