| "The Youkai and the Exterminator" Reviews/Comments [ 221 ] |
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Reviewed By: firehairedpixie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 21:54 PDT
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Tease!!! That was a tease!!! ggrrrrrrrrr However it was very well written. I couldn't agree w/ Barou more. :-) And I certainly hope that InuBaka does not do anything stupid w/ that girl. Ugh. She's probably a walking youkai STD. And I think Jano should remember who he belongs too, you are the only one that can give him what he wants. ;-) Please, update sooner!!!
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Reviewed By: narnia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 13:36 PDT
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This is a fun read. Sess/sango good pairing. I love the castle and your original dog-demon characters. Keep it coming.
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Title: :-D
Reviewed By: firehairedpixie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 07:29 PDT
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Yay for the update!!!! :-) And for the yummy InuBaka in the bathtub! *having many baaaaaad hentai thoughts @ work* I don't blame him for wanting some privacy though, I don't think I could stand giggly girls for that long either without getting grumpy! Please, please, please keep updating!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 *not logged in* On: October 09, 2004 17:37 PDT
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nice i really like it you are good at writing fan fics :)
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Reviewed By: hi On: October 06, 2004 21:40 PDT
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hi
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Title: yay!!
Reviewed By: firehairedpixie On: October 06, 2004 19:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story!! It is so very well written and thought out. And I love how you have been able to keep the characters in character. Jano rocks, by the way!! And you need to hurry up and update!! I need to see Fluffy-sama kick Hisuni's pompous butt!!! Thank you for writing, it is so very hard to come across a decent InuYasha story!!
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Title: Me name is Chi!
Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 23:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh oh oh *chi jumped up and down getting attention from all the reviewers and blushed furiously* ...um....well....hi...i...want..an..update..please...well..i love the stiry but we need a little inu/kag in there you know....well...bye?...*she quikly ran into the darkness with gentle strodes*
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Reviewed By: Thornwitch On: September 30, 2004 06:11 PDT
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THis story is so great! It's my must-check-for-updates story these days (The Lucky Ones was my last A-list story). Can we see a little more Kirara and Jano? Its super cute, and I always feel like the firecat doesn't get as much credit as a character as she should. Oh, and I would love to see Lord Baru's reaction to taking a look into Kagome's head. Could be amusing.
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Reviewed By: WinkiesTinklies On: September 26, 2004 20:35 PDT
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^_^ COoollllllllllll! I love that. Poor miroku tho...>_< OOoowell! ^_^ GO FLUFFY! but there was no fluf san in that chappy...V_V ok, so make more peese peese with cheezy cheeze!!!
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Reviewed By: J On: September 18, 2004 22:34 PDT
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oh, erhm, a good bit of advice: some research on Japanese castles would be highly recommended, as well clothing, hairstyles, food, etc.
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Reviewed By: Lady Xenobia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 17:25 PDT
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I about died laughing at InuYasha's reaction to the challenge. Please continue soon, for you've spoiled me for other InuYasha fanfic writers. :-)
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Reviewed By: hi On: September 10, 2004 05:47 PDT
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hi
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Title: A diamond...
Reviewed By: Lady Xenobia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 04:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...in the rough! I was up all night trying to find a good InuYasha fanfic to read, and this one caught my eye because the summary presentation was well-written, unlike many. I am so happy I found this story...your character portrayals are flawless, and the plot is smooth and believable. The only small mistake I see from time to time in your work is that you forget to start a new paragraph when a different character speaks, so you have a few sentences here and there that run together and make it a little confusing to sort out which character is speaking. :-) Just a touch of constructive criticism for an otherwise flawless story. I will be keeping my eye on this and eagerly awaiting the next update. I've never seen anyone write a romantic story featuring Sesshoumaru without going out of character and turning him into a wimp...you've managed to break the mold and keep him in character where others fail. Bravo!
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Reviewed By: Cookies On: September 09, 2004 16:06 PDT
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^__^ this is good, you need to update moreee!! Wheeeeeee!! u kno, before homework hits hard!
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: Wheezambu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 05:08 PDT
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hi
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