| "The Youkai and the Exterminator" Reviews/Comments [ 221 ] |
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 15:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yikes, sess is gonna be PiSsEd at sango! (or atleast the monster that kidnapped her) what are you thinking woman? ;p j/k. this is sooo good. all of the twists you throw in the plot are getting better each update. i absolutely cannot wait for the next chap. when you have the chance, please post a new one soon.
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Reviewed By: Lavender Valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 15:07 PDT
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Wheezi, this...this is just incredible. Everyone is suddenly figuring out what's going on, but everything is still so messed up. Now you've thrown Big Daddy into the mix and - oh, wow. Sango is going to have to be so strong to survive all of this. I never thought I'd find myself forty-six chapters into a fic and still on the edge of my seat. Write faster, woman! *wink*
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 10:54 PDT
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Inu-koro and Wimpy-wolf going at it again. At least they finally got back on the trail to track Kagome and her kidnapper down. *shiver* Ooooh, double-canine smackdown commin' up! (have I mentioned I love action?) This chapter was fast-paced and very creepy at the end. I have my speculations over who this dark ressurected-dog demon is, but I'll keep them to myself. All you have to do is consider how Naraku loves to find the best way to hurt someone, preferably emotionally, and the possiblities narrow. If he can damage your heart, his ability to control the situation grows. He really is a spider; weaving his intricate webs with gossamer delicacy and misleading deadliness. He never comes right at you, he always attacks from the side or from behind while your distracted by the "pretty threads" of his Machiavellian plots. His tools and creations might be creepier than he is, but they will never equal his level of sheer Evil. -- Great Chapter
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: nise On: July 12, 2005 17:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my gaaaaaaaws this was the best fanfic i have ever read like woah!!!!! i love it!!!!!!!!! i cant even tihn k of anymore praises!! WOW
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE
Reviewed By: whit On: July 07, 2005 12:41 PDT
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OMG! PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY! I have been waiting to read the next chappie to what happens to Sango and if sess will come to her rescue. This is just to damn good to let this story go unfinished with evrybody waiting to see what happens next. SO AGAIN CAN YOU PLWEASE UPDATE THIS STORY!!! IF NOT FOR THAN ALL YOUR LOVING FAITHFUL FANS *HEHEHEHE*.... seriously overall rating: 10
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Title: chapt 22
Reviewed By: Kendrales On: July 05, 2005 10:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been rereading this story and havve to say that when he said 'clear the fucking courtyard' it made me giddy for a day. again bloody hell story is good
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Reviewed By: aka oashisunoyume On: July 01, 2005 17:22 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! Very good story, can't wait to read more...good job! *I'd have more to say, however, words escape me ^^; heehee i like it ALLOT...know anyone that has done any fanart to this?? that would be interesting..(woah really weird the spam filter code was "kuuu"...I've noticed some places that's how people refer to Naraku's laugh..creeeepy..)
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: WhisperingMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 00:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was laughing so hard at this chapter. You really wrote it well. This is a great story and I'm glad I decided to read it. This is the first time I've read anything about Sango and Sesshoumaru and wasn't sure if I was going to like it. Heck, I love it!
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 11:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohdamn, that was a good cliffy. makiko WILL be pissed! sango sure can put up a fight. the action/fight scenes were well written and definitely flowed. nice job. thank god sess didn't give in and slaughter kohaku. that would be bad. geez, i'm hating this walking stench more and more. and i'm sooo curious to find out who the hell he is...@$$hole.
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Reviewed By: inukaglover815 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 21:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting intense! Hey, is the monster an inuyoukai? I keep thinking he must be related to inuyasha and sesshoumaru somehow, but i don't know why. Hope to read more soon! BYES!
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Title: Damnit! Moving has thrown me so far behind...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi) On: June 22, 2005 00:35 PDT
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I'm still amazed at the depth of all characters portrayed here. You are doing so well keeping the originals true with their natural evolution from shared experiences, and your Other Characters have sprung up and shouted, "Hey! Look at me, too! Ain't I cool?" LOL -- That dark and sinister creature is a true horror, even to himself. Now he has slain Jano and taken Kagome for Naraku and Sango for himself. Wow! Totally twisted. InuYasha and Sesshoumaru are both going to "nut up" over that! Naraku may have pissed them off one to many times with this current plot. I even hope that "Nasty-Dog" may get irritated with Naraku himself and do some damage to the Bastid. Poor Kohaku, in Naraku's slimy clutches again. He's beent through so much and still so young. It may be that death would be more a blessing for him, than to continue with all the memories of what Naraku made him do. It doesn't matter that he had no choice, it was still his own hands that did the deeds...and he may never get past that. Sango loves her brother, and he loves her, but maybe keeping him alive was actually doing him a disservice. (There I go, rambling again...) Great chapter and can't wait for the next! -- PS - I knew that Kikyou had to be wrong about Kagome's powers. That arrow may have been a little weak, but that could have been because of her lack of faith. Her next one would have been a lot stronger, that is if she had had time to shoot another.
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE
Reviewed By: whit On: June 17, 2005 10:44 PDT
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this is probably one of the best stories that i have ever read in mylife. it has a great story line. it also keeps you on your feet. one more thing you have to keep updating this story. to damn good to not finish it. please hurry and update it overall rating: 10
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Title: Gah.
Reviewed By: donnie_fae [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 20:38 PDT
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I seriously love this fanfic so far. The idea of Kagome and Inuyasha makes me so tingly inside! (Uh...) Anyways, keep on writing/typing!
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 22:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
double damn. first kohaku, now kag and sango. please please let sango (hiraikotsu) the hell outta that evil (thing) and RUN! i dont know if i can take these cliffies. they make me cringe. yet, i keep coming back for more. oh well. i wont question it if you dont. so, on with the story. please ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lavender (too lazy to sign in) On: May 17, 2005 06:30 PDT
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*dies over the evil cliffie* Wheezi! Don't do this to me! *secretly loves the torment* Marvelous action scenes; you had me on the edge of my seat.
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