| "The Youkai and the Exterminator" Reviews/Comments [ 221 ] |
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Title: Oops! It says "Completed" - Is it?
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 22:09 PST
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Great, absolutely Great Chapter! The greater Youkai blood of the child she carries driving her insane...makes sense since that is InuYasha's problem as well; His tai-youkai heritage is too much for his human half to bear without Tessaiga sealing the power of his demon blood. Nicely done!
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Title: Hiei and a Cherry
Reviewed By: Setsuna923 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 16:57 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still reading it...and im at the chapter where you said u dont get many reviews...so i thought id prove ya wrong! LUV the story!!!!
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: January 10, 2005 17:41 PST
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cool fic! i loved the part with sess atacking miroku. and then, sango coming to save his butt. that topped the story odd beutifully.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 15:07 PST
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Wow, great chapter. ----Poor Miroku, hurting because Sango is hurting...and then the Jealous Sesshoumaru appears! What nerve, to claim she is his after discarding her so publicly. Someone has a harsh lesson coming. -----Way to go Sango! Remind his lordlyness that you are no one to be taken advantage of and are a force to be respected. Show him that you are strong. "I am Woman...Hear Me Roar!"
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Title: Impressive
Reviewed By: Demetz [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 11:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read through the whole thing and I have to say that I am very impressed by your writing. This fic is easily one of the best on this site and you deserve recognition for that kind of talent. Please keep writing!
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Title: Whoa!!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 14:38 PST
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Kikyou?!? What abysmal timing! ...or perfect? Nothing happens without a reason. ----Great chapter! ----I'm really glad that Kagome got InuYasha to fess-up what was bothering him. How upsetting to find it was "her" actions that started his brooding this time. I guess it's time for her to 'hang on his arm' and be very visual with her obviously willing affections so that others will know, without a doubt (especially Kouga), that "she" is his...and visa versa. LOL
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Title: Whew!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 00:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad that Sango is going to be alright (then again, where would your story be without the main character?? LOL) ---Jano shows up...too late! Sess is gonna have his hide. ----Poor Miroku when Sango calls Sesshoumaru's name and not his...so sad. ----BakaYasha needs to cut the crap and talk with Kagome. But then, he was always big in the 'clueless' department. ---Looks like Sesshoumaru is on his way. I don't believe, however, that he will get a warm welcome from the Inu-tachi, father of the pup or not. InuYasha's issues with his brother were reinforced with Sess's callous dismissal of, Sango; his 'mate' and pregnant...boy, this group has more "luggage" than the lost and found at a major airport. --Great Chapter!
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Title: One more thing....
Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 17:44 PST
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Jano walking out of Makiko's office... then saying, "Oh fuck this," and shutting the door again was great. Them breaking the desk was just priceless!!!
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 17:40 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So good so good so good so good!!!!!!!!!! I love this story! Keep on writing!!! I was a bit wary of a Sesshomaru/Sango coupling, but ya got me hooked!
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Title: Yay! I caught up...huh...what do you mean, Cliffhanger? I gotta wait now?!?
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 12:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARRRGGHH!! Cliffhanger! Sango's rampage is stopped by a bear-youkai...will she live? Where is Jano; Shouldn't he be there by now? Where's InuYasha? Arrrgghh! Noooo! ----Well...I guess this is where I tell you how EVIL you are for leaving the chapter like that. Yup, you're evil. (notice how I'm not leaving...) -----Great story. I can't wait for the next chapter. LOL
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 04:29 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ch.32---Poor Sango. Rejected by Sesshoumaru and pregnant. Miroku hurting for her, all of them hurting for her. Very angsty.----Oooh, creepy. Naraku has unleashed something dark, deadly and vile. How typical of him. I doesn't think that Naraku knows that it is growing in power with each victim, but we never know everything that goes on in Naraku's twisted mind. A Dog Demon. Ressurected, most likely with shikon shards (which also increase power) much like poor Kohaku. Naraku's favorite game is "torment" and it's just like him to even mess with the minds of his servents/puppets just so his convoluted plans go just the way he wants them to. We will see. I doesn't look good for the Inu-tachi. Great story.
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Title: Miroku gets taught a very important lesson
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 00:07 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Chapters 27 & 28 - OH. My. GOD. Miroku's "...the evening kind of blurred after a few hours," and the silly grin on his face was priceless. InuYasha confirming his claims of two youkai women with a quick sniff and his stunned admiration for the 'pervy' Monk was hilarious. ---I had a "handsy" friend back in high school...and I was always smacking him, but he was a good friend; a good person. I never hated him for it, but he sure got the foul end of my ire each time he groped. LOL! What revenge for "wandering hands". I loved it! Talk about "asking for it"! ---and Makiko is getting subtle revenge on Jano's rejection...hoo boy! Things sure are heating up! -----Onward....
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: December 12, 2004 14:05 PST
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I found this story a few days ago...I normally prefer cannon pairings...but you have a gift for writing and I found myself captivated from the first chapter. I've made it to chapter 19 and am working my way through the rest. ---Great job. You really have a knack for diologue and I've quite enjoyed all of the character interactions (Inu & Kag are my fav pairings and the tension you have created between them is...delicious! Shame on you! LOL) I like how you have made Miroku kind and understanding (very in character for him) about Sango's relationship with Shesshoumaru. About the Sango/Sess pairing; I can see it happening the way you laid it out. You can't tell your heart who to love, nor can you ever know who you will be attracted to. I feel that Sess is only a little out of character, but then, who knows what goes on behind that impassive mask of his. I was just re-watching the episode where Rin was kidnapped and Sess damn near blew a gasket when Naraku was making his escape. He didn't even get that angry when InuYasha attained Tessaiga. My favorite quote to describe Sesshoumaru is, "Still Waters Run Deep" and that seems to be more true for this solitary TaiYoukai than for anyone else I've seen. Rin is doing a nice job of 'taming' him...LOL! ---Well, ONWARD!!
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Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 *not logged in* On: December 12, 2004 13:58 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Tear* I know your gonna put sesshy smelling her blood and then him saving her and her telling him *I hope* YOU CANT KILL SANGO!
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: December 11, 2004 14:59 PST
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COOL!!!!!!!! i loved that chapter! and i loved how you put jaken in his place with rin! could you please hurry up with the next chapter? please???? *pupy eyes!*
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