| "The Youkai and the Exterminator" Reviews/Comments [ 221 ] |
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Reviewed By: hi On: September 10, 2004 05:47 PDT
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hi
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Title: A diamond...
Reviewed By: Lady Xenobia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 04:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...in the rough! I was up all night trying to find a good InuYasha fanfic to read, and this one caught my eye because the summary presentation was well-written, unlike many. I am so happy I found this story...your character portrayals are flawless, and the plot is smooth and believable. The only small mistake I see from time to time in your work is that you forget to start a new paragraph when a different character speaks, so you have a few sentences here and there that run together and make it a little confusing to sort out which character is speaking. :-) Just a touch of constructive criticism for an otherwise flawless story. I will be keeping my eye on this and eagerly awaiting the next update. I've never seen anyone write a romantic story featuring Sesshoumaru without going out of character and turning him into a wimp...you've managed to break the mold and keep him in character where others fail. Bravo!
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Reviewed By: Cookies On: September 09, 2004 16:06 PDT
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^__^ this is good, you need to update moreee!! Wheeeeeee!! u kno, before homework hits hard!
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: Wheezambu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 05:08 PDT
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hi
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Reviewed By: J On: September 06, 2004 21:11 PDT
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uhm, pardon my phrasing but if inu-youkai are, well, more advanced versions of dogs so to speak, then when it comes to mating... *looks extremely embarassed* i know, fantasy and all but there are still factors on instincts. Sesshoumaru's the top dog (no pun intended) here so he would require submission from Sango, her being the... bitch (true term for naming female dogs to those that don't know). *walks away muttering to self on needing a good titanium wall*
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Reviewed By: Superkluck [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 08:24 PDT
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EEP!!! Sango/sesshoumaru-ness!! Yay! i read this whole thing... its so good! no one was out of character!!! I need to read more!! hurry! school is just around the corner!! >___
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Reviewed By: hi On: September 06, 2004 06:43 PDT
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hi
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Reviewed By: ChibiInuFan On: September 06, 2004 00:41 PDT
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OMG...WOAH!!Wow...thats like...well, WOW!!! O.o MORE MORE MORE!! WHEEEEEEE!!! ^_~ Sess/San are my favorite pairings, Thank you soooo soo soo much for making one!!!
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Reviewed By: me On: September 03, 2004 19:02 PDT
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hi
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Reviewed By: ChiisaiShoujo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 12:15 PDT
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^_^ ME likey this. ^_______^ Gots to keep reading!
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Reviewed By: Sock On: September 02, 2004 12:34 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It sucks that good stories like this never get alot of reviews. I like this, keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: +Perhaps it's better you don't know me+ On: August 20, 2004 13:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great so far, I have thoroughly enjoyed the last 14 chapters. Please write the next one soon.
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Reviewed By: Penguins4Sale (not logged in) On: August 19, 2004 12:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful story. I am enjoying it very much.
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Reviewed By: WinterWolf On: August 18, 2004 15:30 PDT
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great so far! are you going to put a inu/kagome lemon in? why didn't shippo smell sango when inuyasha and kirara did?
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Reviewed By: Lumantra On: August 13, 2004 09:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn did I love this. Personally, I think this is one of the best Sango/Sess. None of the characters were OOC, the story line was wonderful, and I really enjoyed it. I can't wait until the next chapter (:
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