| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] |
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Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 20:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Soooo, just finished, and I am sated. FOR NOW... Yes, it has been almost five years. And I loved them. Lol. I have indeed read Twilight, New Moon, and Eclipse, but I don't feel like reading Breaking Dawn because of the stuff I've heard about it.. I'm pretty excited about the movie, though, me and my friends are all planning to go in a big group. Lol. I'll keep this short, maybe I'll message you on myspace. Lol. See ya!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 20:06 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where in the world to start?...Well, I kind of hoped that Kagome would blow up at Kikyo already. I know Kagome thinks that the way Kikyo acts is all her mother's fault, but really, who in the world says some of the things that comes out of that girl's mouth? I know she's hurting, but she can really be a bitch sometimes. Kagome should have cleaned her clock for the whore remark and espically for the rape remark. It really was rape and I don't care who says any different. As for Rin, I really wish she would talk to someone. I'm really worried for her. Sesshoumaru is a really big ass hat and I want to rip all his pretty hair out. I hope he feels like shit for what he's done. I doubt that, but a girl can dream, can't she. I have come to like Miroku's character the most, I think. He's so funny but also a voice of reason for Inuyasha most of the time. I'm so glad we finally got the story behind the death of Inuyasha's half-brother. Poor 'Jiro. He's not really responisable, but I would feel the same way. How could you not? I hope Inuyasha tells his father off. Then, I hope he finds Kagome and sweeps her off to somewhere far, far away. Maybe they can grab Souta and go off to live with 'Jiro. That would be nice. Thank you so much for the new chapter. I'm so excited to think that we may get another one before the end of the month. This is one of my all time favorite fics. Thank you for sharing it with us. P.S. If I misspelled anything, I'm sorry. I got a little excited...>^.^
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Title: Chapter 32
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 19:27 PST
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Excellent chapter, and good revelations on Inuyasha's part. Kikyo pissed me off, but then, she does that. :p
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Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 18:56 PST
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Oooooh yes. I haven't read it but I wanted to be the first comment!!! I'm so ex-hight-ed!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 21:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I heart Kagejiro!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 05:45 PDT
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So i finally got around to reading this chapter and i have to say...why did i wait this long?! I loved it! I'm glad that Kikyo finally knows about Inu and Kag. And hopefully we can find out soon who Kikyo is deeing on the side. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: eriste [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 18:06 PDT
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OMG you have got to update soon! *has a fan girl moment* *.* Seriously, though, I'm dying for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 06:15 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this'll probably be the worst review from me (because its not constructive and crap) cuz i dont have alot of time and i just wanted to say - I LUV LUV LUV UR FIC!!! (ahem.) so i have to go now - and mum's yelling, so bye. (i swear the other ones will be bettter)
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 21:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful. and sesshy is rude. a like Jiro!. let him get somebody and kill Bankotsu!
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Title: blaccwolf123
Reviewed By: blaccwolf123 On: August 20, 2008 00:08 PDT
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That wuz a great chapter. I never thought Jiro would be a dancer and Jakotsu is a real asshole. Update soon.
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Title: lonely_girl (offline)
Reviewed By: lonely_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 16:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good, i've always enjoyed this story. im not trying to nitpick or anything, just lettng you know that you got hinder's 'Lips of an Angel' lyrics wrong 'its really good to hear your voice, say my name it sounds so sweet, coming from the lips of an angel hearing those words it makes me weak, and i never want to say goodbye, but girl you make it hard to be faithful, with the lips of an angel.'
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Reviewed By: zeveran [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 21:06 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I think I know who Kikyou is cheating on Yasha with. It has to be either Muso or Onigumo. I'm leaning closer towards the latter because in chapter fifteen, you mentioned the Onigumo was a senior at the campus and also member of the frat. I believe in the last chapter, you had Kikyou tell Kagome about the mystery man and she said that he was both a senior and a frat boy. She also said that she always ran into Naraku while she was with the mystery man and considering that you said the two are related - I think they are brothers, but I'm not too sure - it would make sense if it were Onigumo whom she was cheating with. Heh, I hope I'm right. I love this story, by the way. The suspense is killing me!
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Title: OOOOMMMMMMEEEEEGGGGGAAAAAAAAAWWD
Reviewed By: peachkeen14 On: August 12, 2008 19:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i must say when kikyo saw yash and kags i was letting out a mental breath and at the same time thinking...oh fuck! this should be ineteresting...how could Jak do that? awful! and i must say this again SESSHOMARU'S AN ABSOLUTE MORON! god he should be stabbed...and hard! and kikyo can't say anything about kag and yash..not like shes so faithful and loyal..what goes around comes around and u just portrayed that perfectly...so well UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: August 11, 2008 17:55 PDT
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ha!! i just realized sess is prolly still sitting outside by himself. ^O^ he missed out on a LOT of sh*t shingling material!!!! take care!
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Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: August 11, 2008 17:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, everyone thinks they know whats best for everyone else! i love it. just like real life. XD but, i must say, in jakotsu's favor, if these guys could figure things out for themselves, he wouldn't have gotten punched! lol also, i believe kikyo was just as wrong as yash, only he got caught. but, she had a point about kags being her friend/cousin and doing that to her. *sigh* hopefully things will get resolved. curious to see what happens when all of the sh*t/dust settles! i really can't wait.
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