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| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 › » ] | Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 07:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha..."this sesshomaru never got acne". That line had me rolling on my floor like a psychopath. And Miroku just doesn't stop with the cool one liners ("That's Mr.Lucifer..."), lol. Though Sesshomaru's reaction to Rin's news kind of sucked (what a dick!) the update was awesome. I must say I especially love Jak...under all that glamour he's a clever little genius. One question though: will that guy from Japan (Sota's father) come into the picture any time soon? Till next update! ~Amber
| Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 07:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:happy dance: A new chapter! Woot! Okay, first of all, Sesshoumaru is stupid and poor Rin is going to do something equally stupid. Inuyasha needs to just come clean before he gets pounded on by Kagome. Kagome really does need to open her eyes and Kikyo needs to be slapped silly. Jiro is worse than Inuyasha ever thought about being. The scene with him and Jak is some funny stuff. I knew it was going to boil over! It leaves me to wonder how much longer you will torment all our lovable friends before you let the cat out of the bag completely. Inuyasha and Kagome are in for some hell when everything comes to light. Kikyo is going to s8@t a brick. And I know you said something about Kagome's dad coming back. That should be wonderful (note the scarsasm). Well, thank you so much for the new chapter. It was well worth the wait.
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 01:33 PDT
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too many good lines this is just one I picked up "For a college town, this place blows. Where are the college sluts willing to bare all?" GREAT chapter!!!
| Title: Ehhh
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 23:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It doesn't matter to me how long it takes for you to update as long as it's updated right? :] I enjoyed the chapter and I love the story so much that I review on the two sites I found it on, ff.net and mm.org[: Now, I'm off to review on my say0mi saki account. Lol.
| Title: Chapter 30
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 22:54 PDT
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Have I ever told you you write some fucking hilarious dialogue? "Dear Diary, jackpot. Giggity-giggity." Lmao at Miroku and Kagejiro. And I love all the tension, everyone piecing together the clues as Kagome and Kagejiro do. You have to have Jiro stick around for a bit, because he's a riot, I love him. Peace.
| Reviewed By: Feudal Association On: June 19, 2008 02:26 PDT
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| Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 20:14 PDT
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Okay, so I had to read the whole story over again, but I finally figured out who Kikyo was/is :ahem: banging. I had a feeling the first time around, but now I'm certain. Man, you just keep throwing us curve balls. Next chappie, please!!! I'm dying...:cough: must have...next chapter...:hack: cliffie... :falls at your shoes: lol.
| Reviewed By: girl_x_16 (not signed in) On: May 30, 2008 15:07 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely fucking fantastic!!!! That moment sincerely couldn't be better unless suddenly their dad walked in unexpectedly!!! The moment I've been dying for is coming in the next chapter, and never been so happy reading a fanfic!!!! I am literally wiggling in my chair with excitement, and look at all these exclamation points!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anways awesome job and please update soon!
| Reviewed By: HamsterBattalionCommander [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 14:47 PDT
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I absoulutely love this fic. It pulls just about everything I'm interested in into one story. I think I've gotten the identity of Kikyo's lover figured out. Is it Onigumo? He and Naraku are two different people in this story, right? And I'm supposing that they look alike, which is why Kagome would think it was Naraku at the dorms. And when he was blackmailing Kikyo, he said that her dad couldn't ruin him because Inuyasha's dad already did it, so it has to at least be one of Naraku's relatives. And I think somewhere it is said that Onigumo is going to that college. Either way, I really enjoy this fic and I look forward to reading more of it.
| Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 17:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i just finshed re-reading this story again and i fell in love with it all over again! lol i love how it pulls me in so much that i don't want to stop reading and even after re-reading I still can't figure out who's kikyo's mystery Guy is well i keep thinking it's hiten but i'm not sure because he's not in the story so i don't but then i'm thinking it's naruku but in the story you make it seem that its not him so i can't wait to find out who it really is and what goes down with sessh and rin oh the drama i love it! lol and what will happen when inu and kagome see each other hopefuly in the next chapter Update soon hun don't kept me in suspense it killing me lol
| Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 17:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i just finshed re-reading this story again and i fell in love with it all over again! lol i love how it pulls me in so much that i don't want to stop reading and even after re-reading I still can't figure out who's kikyo's mystery Guy is well i keep thinking it's hiten but i'm not sure because he's not in the story so i don't but then i'm thinking it's naruku but in the story you make it seem that its not him so i can't wait to find out who it really is and what goes down with sessh and rin oh the drama i love it! lol and what will happen when inu and kagome see each other hopefuly in the next chapter Update soon hun don't kept me in suspense it killing me lol
| Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 08:19 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I jus finished reading the 2nd to last chapter... I've barely been on with the shit that's been going on in my life... along with school -_- But god was i happen when i saw i got 2 chapters to read!! *grins* It was awesome! and Miro in leather pants? HELL YEA IT COULD HAPPEN!! I jus luv to see guys like that *drools* and the worst part is... where i live dont really have those hot emo studs *sniff* it's jus my punishment huh? GAH!! I'm glad kaggie is free (yea right) lol... i jus cant see it ending like that... i mean, it was jus too easy; and the thing is... you wanna blv it's ova but u jus KNOW its not!! xD ah, i hope you're doing well with everything... best wishes n all that ^_~ now... off to the next chapter *grins stupidly*
| Reviewed By: tamara On: May 11, 2008 11:24 PDT
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well that just cut off about 94% of my comment. :( ehh... basically, I feel like I should slap myself for bad judgment. Reading everything in between makes the lemony moments that much steamier, and sometimes, just the verbal foreplay and the dirty comments are hotter than the actual thing! Kagome has some crazy willpower. Of course she's fending off Inuyasha, which any girl on here would have a problem doing if your Inuyasha came to life, but, I don't know about anyone else, I find Miroku's pervertedness nearly as yummy... haha. Maybe I'm just a sucker for dirty implications, but if I was in Kagome's position... I'll leave that open. I get it - Kagome's supposed to be wholly devoted to Inuyasha, and Miroku to Sango but... that drunken scene had some other possible scenarios running through my mind... BUT, off that topic. Miroku has to be my most favoritest character... I love all his little comments, especially the "You've changed, Kikyo" comment to Kagome, and the "besides, they shape my ass nicely" regarding the leather pants. The shower scene with I/K was yummeh! I would've ripped the shower curtain back, and to hell with caution... haha. But I suppose the scars on her back played some part... and I guess hate can push you to irrationality (cause that's what I'm calling it, cause you have to be irrational to turn down something that gorgeous, egotistical prick or not). I love the little French thrown in... I'm taking French now so I've picked up on some things but I still have to read the translations. :( I find the realness of Kagome's predicament with Bankotsu really saddening, but I think you portray the emotional aspects and the feelings very well. I also think you have a fetish for torturing characters and putting them in impossible situations. :P This reminds me of COTD because of that. Consider me excitedly [impatiently, hehe] waiting for your next update... :) Keep writing! I get giddy just thinking about your next story after this. xD
| Reviewed By: tamara On: May 11, 2008 11:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, I just wanna say I'm sorry for writing a novel, cause I'm just overflowing with comments to make! I'll admit, I read COTD and it was ohmygod drool-worthy, and so when I first saw this I basically just looked through it for the citrus warnings. xD (which didn't work anyways because i only checked the beginning of the stories, not the descriptions >_
| Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: May 09, 2008 08:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhh, i am so ready to see what happens in the next chap. what a way to leave off. you are truly the master at cliffies! 'jiro is too awesome and such a bad ass. i love him! he is just the right balance to inu and sess's personalities. such a bad boy... not that inu isn't. lol i think miro has to be the most hilarious guy ever. gawd, the things you have him say make me laugh 'till it hurts. i swear. how do you do it? effin' funny as hell. and on a side note, that bitch at the daycare. OMG! *rips each limb off and shoves them up her A$$* k, i feel better. well, as expected from you, this fic just gets better and better. i love it and i am just glad that you updated. no need to apologize. i understand that life comes first, even tho we wish it didn't. take care, and update when you can. t.c.
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