| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] |
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: April 25, 2008 05:11 PDT
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I have not laugh so much reading a fanfic until I came upon this chapter. I was dying laughing at the very end of the chapter. I hope that you will not wait to long to update becasue this chapter was just excellent. UPDATE REALLY SOON.
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Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 01:06 PDT
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I'm so glad you updatd. I've been re-eading the whoel story a couple times to the point where I pretty much haveall the dialogues between Inuyasha, Kagome, and Sango memoized... and i was just thinking whether you'd update anytime soon. I was so pleased that you actually graced us with another chapter after such a long wait rather than an author' note promising another chapter. And, what ending! That should totally go down in math books as the function "Chaos=2.5(youkai+human)" LOL. Anyway, lookng frward to another chappie,hoping you update soon, since you don't have an escuse like I do... so I'd rathr write more than go through eye surgery... I must be a pioneer, never heard of a twenty-one year old getting cataracts before. Hope ou hear from you soon, and please, try ot to stress out. It's very damaging to one's health. Love ya.
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Reviewed By: blackr0s3[[Not logged in]] On: April 25, 2008 00:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww. I was so happy when I recieved the alert that you've updated! x] I couldn't stop laughing when 'Jiro had that irish accent..I really cannot imagine that. Lmao, but it is an amusing image, haha. I'm even needier for the next chapter! What will happen next? UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN! Please?
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Title: :]
Reviewed By: blackr0s3[[Not logged in]] On: April 25, 2008 00:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww. I was so happy when I recieved the alert that you've updated! x] I couldn't stop laughing when 'Jiro had that irish accent..I really cannot imagine that. Lmao, but it is an amusing image, haha. I'm even needier for the next chapter! What will happen next? UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN! Please?
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Reviewed By: Peachkeen14 On: April 24, 2008 19:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG U LEFT A CLIFF HANGER!!!!!!! HOW DARE YOU!!!! ( but i have to admit yash's mix up was hilarious...^.^) there better be an update soon!!!! i wanna know what fluffy-sama's gonna say!! and i thought jiro was also there to take care of bankotsu or have u just not brought that up in the story yet? hmmm wow and a chapter without kagome, well i tell ya one thing there was soo much drama in this one that...wow i just dont know but UPDATE u horrible cliff hanging author
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 19:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh that was brilliant.... Assuming things makes thing so wrong.. "Actually, he's not an alcoholic at all; Alcoholic's go to meetings and confess their `problems' to their peers, professionals go to bars and have a lot more friends. They have sex more often too." great line!!! "I have conquered fishnet." god now I wanna see a picture of Miroku in leather pants (trousers) and a fishnet shirt... Oh and the grapefruit comment was to DIE for!!!! Toran was a total ****** in this chapter... oh this was great too Sighing heavily, Kagejiro responded, "When I see a call coming in from America, you get my American accent. I never know who the hell is ringing me, so I got ta play the part, you see. When I get a call from Japan, they get a Japanese response, and when I get a call from England, I tell em' to fuck off. The accent ya get depends on where you're calling from. This, however, is a much more relaxed state of mind." What happens if he gets a call from Australia???? (thats where I'm from) Is InuYasha ever gonna "shack up... with his girlfriend's cousin" properly soon?????
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 17:38 PDT
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irish pride *woot woot* oh man why'd you have to stop there?! great chapter!!
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Reviewed By: LOULOU4729 *NSI* On: April 24, 2008 17:37 PDT
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NOOOOOOO!! I just died from that cliffy! Ok... I'm back alive. And apparently you are too. Welcome back missy! *lol* I'm glad to see you are writing again...and this chapter was worth the wait. I got a little confused with the Jiro saying he was Inu's father...I dunno. I'll go back and read it again. Anywho good work and I look forward to reading more. :)
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: NekoReiBaka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 17:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO. That chapter just made my day. Uhm, but what about updating it on Eternal Destiny? lol. Anyways. I really liked those chappies. ahaha.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 16:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Holy crap weasels in hades! I feel like my face might split open from laughing and smiling so much. Everything is going to hell in a hand basket. And the part where Miro says he masterbated into the grapefruit, I had to peal myself off the floor so I could finish reading. Good Lord, you're killing me. I'm going to die of heart palptations. This is my favorite chapter so far. I'm so excited for the next one!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 15:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hc means hardcore. Sorry about that, lol. Nice update by the way. And if you don't mind me asking, how goes with the Harusame (sp?). I looked into it and it looks pretty interesting. Anyways, till next chappie! I'm dying to see how 'all hell' proceeded to break loose ;) ~Amber.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 15:06 PDT
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ROFLMAO *picking herself off the floor, making sure no one was watching, brushing herself off holding her head up with feigned dignity* i had already sent the e-mail about the drawing then i read the update (hilarious, best chapter yet). i now know those little details and made the appropriate changes. *grins sheepishly* now all i need is an address to send it to. ~ delighted, ginny
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Reviewed By: essies On: April 24, 2008 14:38 PDT
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PLEASE PLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSE UPDATE SOON ( get's o knees) PLEeeeaassssse
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi(nsi) On: April 24, 2008 13:54 PDT
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OMG! i love Jiro!!! i swear, hes my new obsession. very awesome character you have created. and i cant wait to see the explosion in the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 12:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha, wow COTD! I haven't thought about that in years! I think I've got some re-reading to do! And whereas I wanted to be your first reveiw for this lovely chapter, looks like I'm going to be number 3 or 4.. But oh well! I'm reeeeaaalllllyyyy lookin forward to the next chapter, BAD! Your writing is like drugs x]
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