| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] |
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 23:00 PST
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Hot damn I love chapter 8 too. Second favourite I think! Though I am a little disappointed that beer pong wasn't actually featured...maybe you could toss some flip cup during a later chapter since it FAR surpasses beer pong on the scale of fun :) Amazing writing as always. Now that I've gone back and re-read from the beginning again I can really see how your characters have matured - especially Inuyasha, Kagome and Miroku. It's amazing what a tragedy can do to age someone. Fantastic work and marvellously funny!
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 21:57 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay...so I started reading this story again from the beginning because I couldn't help myself. I just love it that much. I think I've decided that Chapter 6 may be my favourite light-hearted chapter. The line "like a fat kid on cake" gets me EVERY time. This really is a grand fic. I've never gone back to re-read one this many tmes before so that's definitely saying something :) Good luck with the new chapter!
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Reviewed By: Broken Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 11:08 PST
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I love this story. It is nice to see Kagome in a different light for a change. I really like your style and can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 10:00 PST
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Great chapter! I love Kagome's courage in this chapter. I was so glad that she stood up to him. When Inu and Kag were in the alley, I thought he was going to tell her the truth. I was a few minutes late for work cause I had to finish that part before i left! I can't wait for that part in the story when the light is shone on some of the truth. I am so looking forward to when Kagejiro shows up. And Inu's reaction about him not being the father of Rin's child. So please update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: February 12, 2008 20:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't beleive he pulled a gun on her! You did a great job with this chapter though. I'm glad to see you writing again.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 18:18 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I thought you were going to shoot someone! Well, not you, but Bank. Please tell me he's not going to get off that easy! Where's the justice! I'll trust you to do what you need to do, but you have to, like,...chop his dick off or something! I'm sorry I'm so crazy right now. That was just an excellent chapter and I was almost in 'Shades' withdraw. I can't wait until Sesshoumaru and the estranged brother come to town. I'm so excited!
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: hahahahaha On: February 12, 2008 17:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i actually screamed when i saw you updated. its really good. i have like an idea whats'going to happen, but im in like anticipation of the next chapter. thanks bud.
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Reviewed By: Radhika [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 16:44 PST
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OO i totally forgot that she doesn't knw that Sha is Inuyasha! this might mean troublee
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: February 12, 2008 13:33 PST
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Ooooh, Kagome my dear it not the end. Its just the beginning for all hell to break loose. I hope that the next chapter will involve Sess,Inu, their older brother, Kags and and Rin. Can not leave out Banks. I hope that you will update the story really soon.
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: February 12, 2008 13:33 PST
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Ooooh, Kagome my dear it not the end. Its just the beginning for all hell to break loose. I hope that the next chapter will involve Sess,Inu, their older brother, Kags and and Rin. Can not leave out Banks. I hope that you will update the story really soon.
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Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: February 12, 2008 11:45 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
glad to see a new chap from you... and it was THE chap. man, bank had me going there for a minute. what a bastard. i hope he keeps his end of things. he is the type with too much pride, though, so i'm still worried. and yay, more on jiro and sess coming soon??? i am so ready. when he finds things out, sess will sh*t himself and that will be well worth waiting for. ^_^ lol
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Title: Blaccwolf123
Reviewed By: Blaccwolf123 On: February 12, 2008 11:16 PST
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thanks 4 the update.The d/s world is really deep.U explain it very well.I'm lookin forward to the next chapter and really hopin it has Jiro in it.
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 10:28 PST
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excellent. I hope Bank gets in trouble though. I wonder what's going to go on with Rin...
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 02:14 PST
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Well you didn't quite read my mind but you updated at the worst possible time - had to pull an all nighter just to read this and get my assignment done. But...it was TOTALLY worth it! God what an amazing chapter. It was so wonderfully intense and just perfectly paced. I felt like cheering rounds of YOU GO GIRL! the entire time. And that line about Miroku standing out like a straight guy in the village...hahaha I actually laughed out loud. Perfect comedic relief just when it was needed. You are a fantastic writer and I look forward to the next chapter. This story is really turning into an incredible piece. You should be proud of it :) Good luck on the IYFG awards! I know who's getting my vote ;)
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Reviewed By: Tender Ardor* On: February 12, 2008 01:28 PST
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Amazing. Simply Amazing. Always was and always has been. I've been with this story for ages, it seems, and each time I notice an up-date my heart beats so fast I can't breathe, that's how much I anticipate every miniscule piece of this fic. Just to let you know...this is definately my absolute favorite...hands down! Keep up the good work! The parts I most anticipate include Sesshoumaru meeting up with Rin and realizing he has a son, and Kagome and Inuyasha's further development. Good job. Even now, you still cease to amaze.
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