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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 22:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the chapter. You left it on a really good note(a little dash of humor after all of "that" was a good touch). I Love the image of Miroku in the leather... (a cute, young man, dressed up in such an outfit screams odd and potentially queer, and kinky.)
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Title: Rage Against The Dying Light
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 22:18 PST
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I'd like to think it was so easy, but I know your stories too well. Part of me kept thinking you were gonna have Inuyasha slip on his power limiter in the club and shock 'em all in a cliffie ending, so glad you didn't. Now Kagome and Bankotsu have a mexican standoff, and I know that's not gonna last long, not to mention how close they all came to discovering the real truth...well, the real, half-dozen truths. Great chapter, I loved it, my favorite non-lemon chappie that far. I really enjoyed seeing that little bastard squirm. PS: If you ever have time, I was wondering if you would mind checking out my "Displacement" story and telling me what you think. It' getting pretty popular. Again, awesome chapter.
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Title: OMG!!
Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 21:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG What a Chapter! I was so on edge read it Kagome was soo awesome man how she stud up to bank like that whoa!and i totally thought Inuyasha was going to get caught When he yelled out Kagome's name In the ally there close call lol And the line where kagome said "Miroku in leather pants,that would never happen" LMAO! I Loved it I really CAN'T wait for the next chapter. after a Chapter like this you can't leave us, me suspense So Update Soo Really Soon =)
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Reviewed By: time for a change [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 21:46 PST
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love it love it love it.. i cant wait to read more.. Kagejiro coming in to the picture.. im so excited..
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Title: hi!!
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 14:58 PST
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hi!! i just want to say that i love your fics and i think you're bloody brilliant. i just finished curse of the dragon in like 16 hours straight reading. i am such a loser. but it was a weekend a week ago. >< i love your fic and i wish you all the best with it!!
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Title: waaaaa1
Reviewed By: iunyashas_dreams On: February 04, 2008 23:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok so i need you to update because mediaminer is nothing without this fic sooooooooooo please (with a cherry on top) update. PS. you are my hero
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Reviewed By: brekay [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 18:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! u r the best writer ever!!! shades of grey is my favorite fanfic ever next to curse of the dragon of course ^^ I can't wait till you update!!! The suspense is killing me!!! Oh and you made miroku so funny!! I like the part when he was telling inuyasha that he looks at his pee!!! LOL oh and the part when he found out inuyasha was a demon!!! And i can't believe all the drama and hurt kagome had to go through...especialy the thing with souta...wow...u really know how to create drama lol I thought it was funny when kagome and inuyasha did it in the dressing room!! I couldnt stop laughing when they came out!!! Oh and when miroku was humping the car!!!! I could go on and on!!! lol well i hope ur doing good and please wen u get the chance update cuz i have nuthing 2 read!!! T^T oh and if u kno of any other good inuyasha fanfic writers please let me know cuz i'm really bored lol keep up the good work!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: szyszka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 14:07 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, we are dying here;) pleeaseeeeeeeeeee update soon
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Title: OMFG! 13 chapters
Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2007 10:42 PST
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I missed 13 chapters!! Soooo much has happened I-I-I can't even begin. Kags and Yash did it! I can't believe I missed that. All the drama finally came out, huh. Wow. I'm still just overwhelmed by the progress this story has gone through. All I can say is that I wish you luck and prosperity.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 09:08 PST
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Great chapter! I love Miroku! I know i've said this before, but you make him so funny! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 11:11 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, am not complaining about this updating taking forever =p... not at all! With a chapter like that, who will argue?? Jiro jiro jiro... *sighs dreamily* I cant stop with how SEXY u made him and all... LOL and how did you picture him per say? ^_~ lol Everythings climaxing so quickly! Dayum! First off, i wanted to gut that bitch who down tlked my Inu Grrrr!!! But i must admit... Miroku was bleeding gothic sexy!!! One of my fav color is black... and guys in black loos so flipping hawt so ya gotta kno my hentai mind xDDD Nowie... I feel sorry for Kikyo.... pity she isnt an evil bitch that i can take my anger out on. lol. So... who is the guy blackmailer her? I feel like he had some contact with bank... cuz he was asking kik ques bout Sesshy and bank n sesshy has some bad blood going on ne? *sigh* I hate having questions with no answers -_- The end of this week will make 2 weeks am on vacation from school... and it's so B-O-RING! >< Ugh! You'd think my mom would let me go out when i want cuz it's VACATION! But noooooo. *Sigh* life sucks >.> Oh oh... jus curious... do you watch Japanes drama films/series?? I'm asking every1 i come in contact with xD And do u kno Jun Matsumoto? Flipping sexy i tell you! and also Shun Oguri *__* *dreamiy sighs* Oh ja!! Keep up the good work, keep the guys smoking hawt and may kagome be safe *dramatic sniff* lol... Oh yea, and happy holiday!!!
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Title: blaccwolf123
Reviewed By: Astrid44 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 03:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter as always.I hope Jiro is in the next chapter I'm lookin forward to his appearance.
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Reviewed By: time for a change [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 11:51 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wow.. This is great I cant wait to see what happens but I'm wondering if inuyasha will ever tell kagome that he is sha
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Reviewed By: time for a change [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 11:50 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wow.. This is great I cant wait to see what happens but I'm wondering if inuyasha will ever tell kagome that he is sha
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Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: December 15, 2007 11:02 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, at first i thought kagome would be at the club in this chap and was ready to freak out and be all nervous the entire time. but, now i am really gonna be on edge when you do write it.lol agh, with your fics, i never know what will happen. will things go all kinds of f*cked up, or just a little. ^_^ i hate to wait cuz i get so thoroughly sucked in to your stories. i am seriously excited about jiro coming into play. i love your o.c.'s like crazy. and that was funny as hell, kagome's like 'why does everyone wanna go with me to see bank??' hahahaha, really. why? they all wanna piece, too. well, thanks for updating. next few chaps should be full of exciting things. as usual, can't wait!! take care.
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