| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] |
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Reviewed By: xfalsetruth06x [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 23:53 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT was awesome
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 21:43 PDT
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That was absolutely fantastic and well worth the wait! I'm so glad you updated. I totally didn't expect Bank to be at the door. Jesus...had my on the edge of my seat all chapter. And FINALLY he got the crap beat out of him by Inuyasha. About freekin time! Very well written. Good luck with all that work and try to get some sleep :)
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Title: Woot
Reviewed By: Darksaintofchaos [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 21:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad that ass whoopin had happen that sick basterd bank or Oberon w/e the hell he was had it coming I say coodles to Inuyasha ^.^ poor kagome I really hope she gets out of this bad sisuation.... please update soon Darksaint. p.s. Welcome back and thanks for updating we missed you ^.^
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 00:41 PDT
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I reviewed this story ages ago when I first started reading it but I just wanted you to know that I still love it. While waiting for your next update I decided to go back to the beginning and it's still as fantastic as I remembered it. You have such talent I'm really, truly impressed. I've come to the conclusion that your cafeteria scenes are by far my favourite. Every one has my laughing out loud so please keep them coming. On a random side note, if you get the chance to you should watch this live-action Taiwanese drama called MARS. There are cafeteria scenes in that show that are a lot like the ones in your fic with similar characters too (the cocky, sexually aggressive guy, the shy girl, the lecherous friend, etc). That series was part of what made me want to go back and reread Shades of Gray. Anyhoo...I'm blabbing now but please please please update again soon? Please? and Thank you :)
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Reviewed By: szyszka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 10:55 PDT
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I want more!! please please pleaseee uptade soon! I absolutely love this story:)
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Title: Money making!!
Reviewed By: bored person On: September 24, 2007 18:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you could change a few bits and peices about the demons and names you could have yourself a story there, I know you like to write fan fiction but you could have this published. Just change the demon style and names, just an idea. Otherwise brilliant story, best of luck finding a new place.
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Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 17:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wats the songs name in this chapter??
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Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 17:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wats the songs name in this chapter??
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Reviewed By: Memei On: August 15, 2007 06:35 PDT
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i like the story, but hate the SessRin :( I've never been able to see them as a couple.. mostly because in canon she grew up with him.. and he's like a father/mentor to her. And in this story i get the feeling that she's your Mary Sue.. sorry
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Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 00:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I can honestly say that I LOVED it... a whole lot lot.Hopefully life won't be TOO hard on you...your fans want more more more! lol. Well, still confused on the brother thing, who's kid is Kenren?! Grrr! lol. PLEASE say it's Sesshomaru... oh please please please. Well keep up the super fantastic work ^_^
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Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: August 08, 2007 14:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, that was hot in the fitting room. *_* i so love this story. and miro as always, cracks me up!! i hope things work out for you in the next month. good luck and take care. *hugs*
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 00:11 PDT
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wow!!! O_O loved the chapter! lucky kags, lmao. dammit though i really wanted yash to bring up the Titania issue!!! but i guess thats being saved for next chapter, darn. i downloaded the dropkick murphy song, very nice! as always, can't wait to read whats coming next! keep up the fantastic writing!
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 03:37 PDT
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*gapes like a fish* Holy... holy... cheese.. What an awesome chapter.!. it's got the angst, pissiness, raunchy sex, akward conversation, sibling disagreement, alienated friend.. Damn, I should have popped popcorn! OH DEAR GOD, he almost got the full connection of Kagome and Titiana. He was sooooooo close to making it, why did he have to deny it?! He is on the right track!! He almost made the Oberon/Bankotsu connection too. I'm so excited! Anyways, I'm sorry you have to find another place to live. If you were in Michigan, you could have stayed with me and my houseful of ruffians. Anything happen with that boy toy of yours? If you have that dratted myspace, look me up. myspace.com/Anyah_no_Baka thats me. Oh, and I lost your last email before i had a chance to reply to it, my email is been on the fritz lately. talk at you later :)
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 15:17 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh... um i'm jus gonna keep talking nonsense =p Mostly cuz i guess this will mean am the 300th review? this is like a once in a life time eh =) Am uping on the sex scene... *sigh* In a dressing room no less, that's gotta be so hawt. I mean including how he spoke to her... dammit, it's like watching everything five feet away, or better yet, me being kagome *giggles* LOLZ seriously gotta get some deliverance from this hentai mind of me... >.> Are hell am kidding, i live for this stuff XD Again, update when u can!!! ~*~bubbles ^_~
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 15:14 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I havent reviewed the chapters or anything, but wasnt there some jiro that kagome tlked to or sumn? And if so, does that mean that that jiro is probably Kagejiro, older brother of both inu n sesshy? Well well, the sex part was amazing! I loved it all. I really like your way of writing and the whole background for the Oberon thing it's brilliant... tho everything i read this fic i think of my english class(which i hate) XD lolz... Oh oh, i really thought inu was and will always be the dumb one in fics... but how he put everything about kagome n her night gothic freak ways... amazing! He should stick with it... it could be her, and bet when he finds out their sex would jus go up a notch eh? I'm a hentai for lemons... anything 'tween our fav hanyou and miko =p I kno how the summer is and all too, i mean my school re opens the 3rd of next month and i am not looking forward to that at all >.> Update when you can!!! ^__^
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