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| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 › » ] | Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 21:06 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dun, Dun... Duuun! Oh yesh! The famous, or rather infamous, bro is on his way... shall we set up services now for Bank or sit on it a while longer, lol. :D And Kags isn't the only one with probs I see. Bad Kikyo, bad, hehe. Would still love to see Sha kick his ass tho, and then some, lol. Oh, and thanks much for a quick update, its awesome. Till next time... Update when ya can! ;)
| Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 20:30 PST
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OMG!!!!!!!!! O_O WOW and..... im speechless. fantastic, f__kin fantastic writing!!!!! i am going on to read the next chapter!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 20:06 PST
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Woooo, speedy update! My god, the Sota thing, I never would have guessed...sorry if I missed it, but I'm assuming Sota doesn't know, right? Damn....and the mysterious Kagejiro arriving, nice. And overall, lots of good set-up. But hm...something Sango thought got the wheels in my f-cked up little mind spinning like wild. Naraku. He's here, but you haven't done much with him, he just pops in now and then, but thus far he hasn't had any real bearing on the true plotline. I can't help but grab a baseball mitt and wait for the left-field curveball you're gonna chuck at us when his character inevitably takes center stage. He good, bad, what? You've made him into a real wildcard, and I can't wait to see him ger played. Anyway, now that I've blasted my tank of metaphors dry...oops, one left...I know somewhere in the back of my head there's a real good quote about darkness and evil and blahda blahda blah, but I can't find it. I'm gonna get back to ya, I know I got at least one more good quote in here somewhere, I'm gonna check in back beside the radiator. Anyway, chow, awesome chapter. Drake.
| Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 19:49 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YaY! Really fast updated! Man So much Drama in this Chapter i loved it soo much!! i Felt Like i was watching a soap opera loved it hehe.. cant wait till the next chapter!! Update soon!
| Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2007 19:44 PST
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oh man I'm so happy that inuyasha knows who everybody is, even if it is gonna make his life a lot harder (I'm selfish). Thanks for the update, can't wait for the next one!
| Title: blaccwolf123
Reviewed By: Astrid44 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 00:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah.Bank finally got tha ass whoopin he deserved.I hope Inuyasha doesn't go to jail.that would really succ.Thanks for the update it has been a while.
| Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 07:42 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I saw this update yesterday and i was so mad that i couldnt read it cuz i was out all day since we didnt have school XD BUT!... you really now how to make ppl happy! I thought for sure you might not of updated like roun christmas cuz it's been a while... but now i understand and this chapter was... O.O!! I cant decide if i should hate kikyou or love her! I mean the girl is like a freakin weather! She's folling kaggie, ne? And another thing! What's up with kaggie? Can she really be that much of an idiot?! I mean she puts herself behind others but it's her life dammit! I thought she would of figured out inuyasha to be sha... *sigh* Sha was so fucking hawt! I think i'm messed up but the site of an angry inuyasha is such a turn on; lol. He slick ways--like when he hugged kaggie roun the waist while avoiding kikyo's attention...it was so hawt! And who eva said that inu was slow? He figured out everything so easily... it was all amazing...and the best part about it, is that he's gonna follow kags 2night. So now he's risking his identity, among other shits. Isnt sessy more powerful than bank? or i mean it is THE sesshomaru we're talking about!! yesh it is... lol... kk am done babbling, but know that i so freakin' love this chapter n story ofcourse! I can only imagine what the other chapter will be like and am sure even then it'll surpass my imagination! *__* I hope all things are well with u.. .and sleep well! I know how little sleep can be *sigh* Ja!
| Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 22:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is getting so good! Kikyo isn't an idoit after all! Yay!!! I'm so excited about the next chapter. I can only imagine what's going on it that wicked, wicked head of yours. Thanks for the update!
| Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: November 02, 2007 19:47 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yahoo! The bitch is back better than ever! *lol* Loved the chapter. It has been a long wait but this update was amazing! Kept me on the edge of my seat. I can't wait to see what you post next time. :P
| Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 16:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter had my heart racing ten fold. It was so damn good and totally worth the wait. No explanations needed, life has a way of making us all busy. But I am so glad to see you back. I almost wanted to cry a couple of times while reading this chap. Kagome is seeing her life flashing before her eyes, and part of me while reading it started panicing with her. It was crazy...I kept asking myself 'what would I do?' Damn, Bank is nuts..but I can see how a girl would like to be dominated, there is some appeal in it. But to be beaten, that is just so scary. Part of me doesnt believe that Bank would go to the cops, there is just too much at stake, but threatening Kagome with it, he knows that will work. She always puts others first before herself. I wonder if Kikyou knows what is truly going on between Inu and Kagome. This story is very well thought out, and is so much fun to read. The drama......cant live without it. You take care! Neddi
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 15:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, even tho I actually like Bank as a character, you can really make him a truly evil one, lol. Loved as the scene unfolded on what was what between them all. Now they all know. And tho Bank got the beating of life, can almost bet money on it'll be nothing to what lay in store for him. Nope, don't see Inu lettin this go. Or rather, Sha? ;) Great chap Hun, update when ya can! ;)
| Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: November 02, 2007 11:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you pieced this chap together just fine. i think it's refreshing that inuyasha is the one that found out who everyone really is. usually it's the girl who finds out the truth and has to hide it. i wonder how long he can keep it from her, tho. as for kagome meeting oberon again... ugh, i can't imagine. he's psycho! but, she does want to help her friends. i can understand that. it's just that i have a feeling things are about to get so much worse. every chap i finish, i wish there was more. i'm glad you found time to write, and i'm sorry life is so hectic. hope to see more soon. take care!
| Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 09:12 PDT
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Excellent chapter, it's good to finally see Bankotsu get the shit kicked out of him. I loved it.
| Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 05:40 PDT
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My...I believe the pharse "the shit has hit the fan" doesn't begin to cover what happened in this chapter. We must invent a new saying to correctly convey everything that happened. You get started on that and have it ready by the next chapter. Did anyone else notice that this all comes out after Inuyasha kicked Sesshomaru out so now his brother can't be on stand by for his defense? Everytime I think I'm in Kagome's brain she does something like this. Threats to others aside, where is the natural reflex actions to protect one's self? Kagome's self-estem made be a little tattered but I'm still convienced that she loves herself. Anyone that loves themself would have been selfish enough to make a plan before walking into the lion's den. If she is THAT desperate to do a hell-mary she needs a truimph card. Threatening him or guns would do no good. Tell Kagome to strap a bomb to herself take him and the whole place down. See how he likes that! The only way I can see to deal with a psycho is to become a better one yourself. I'm not sure what Inuyasha's father will be more mad about: that he beat up a rival, let the situation that he could have told someone about and gotten help before it spiraled out of control, or that he wants the pauper instead of the princess and kept his mouth shut. Miroku's right, if Inuyasha had just insisted that he didn't want to marry Kikyo then sure their would have been some hurt feelings but not even Kikyo's dad is dumb enough to break multi-billion dollar contracts because she couldn't have that doggie in the window. Besides wanting to throttle Kagome for her sporadic decisions (that work for and against her favor) I find myself wondering once again why I'm reading this. Yes it is very good but usually I don't do this much angst. Perhaps you are so spectacular at what you do that I can't seem to stay away despite the fact that this isn't my usual stuff. I'll just keep it in my category of exception then leave it at that.
| Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 00:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! i can't believe that just happened. and kikyo's got a devious mind. she's gonna find kagome at the inkwell 'cause that's where she's meeting sango. IF she's meeting sango. omg, i can't believe she's going to go see him. she wants to die?! what the hell, but she's trying to keep inuyasha from harm. ooh, so many things going on. and what' going to happen once inuyasha tells kikyo the truth? is he going to tell her? and will they all find out kagome's dirty little secret? more soon please, pretty please!
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