| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] |
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 21:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh your such a tease, letting him get it for ten seconds before he gets sidetracked with bro...I'm a little worried though, about how he'll react when he does find out it is her.
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Reviewed By: veed On: August 05, 2007 21:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it although it pisses me off when someone realizes something but is always interupted before knowing what's happenning. update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 19:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, that chapter had a little bit of everything. It was kinda intense and angsty. Ok, I'm lying, it was hella intense and agsty..lol. The lemon was fantastic and I think Inu with his temper, maybe he will learn just how much dominating Kags is willing to take...might make things very interesting. Thanks for the update, you rawk my sawks!!
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Reviewed By: katie33 On: August 05, 2007 18:56 PDT
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thanks for the update ... its ok if its slow goin' but i was super duper excited to see that you updated! ill hold my breath till you do so again and if i die my death is totally on your hands. totally.
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Title: Chapter 24
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 16:17 PDT
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Hm, no review responses? Oh well. Awesome as always, and a le-mon...oh yes. This was fun. And Inuyasha's starting to figure things out. Good to know the boy's good for more than mind-blowing sex, although he seems to be pretty good at that too...
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Reviewed By: Sam24 On: August 04, 2007 22:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it nand hope you continue and soon hopefully.
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Reviewed By: Sam24 On: August 04, 2007 22:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it nand hope you continue and soon hopefully.
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Reviewed By: ASinnersCurse On: July 09, 2007 08:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I mostly read this story on adultfanfiction.net, but I can't log on and tell you how wonderful this story truly is on that site. I hope you plan to keep going because this is a story that actually got me inspired to even check Inuyasha out. That's right, your fanfic actually gave me the idea, "Why not" so I ended up buy all the seasons I could and I have to say. I am very impressed with you work. Please don't stop writing. You have a skill and a talent. ASinnersCurse
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Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 16:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Miroku almost had it.... darn... I love that Sesshomaru and Inuyasha kinda had a botherly moment... is Kikyo ever going to find out the truth about Kagome? I'm still trying to figure out who the guy in Japan was... possibly Hiten? Anyways, great chapter please update soon!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 12:14 PDT
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Another awesome chapter! I love how Inuyasha went back to Kagome, so cute! I loved Sesshomaru's advice to Inuyasha and I love how it was Sess who was the one to say it. And, as always, Miroku was hilarious! "Oh yes. I love you, I need you, oh baby, oh baby." Classic! And the part with him jumping up and down the couch and yelling, then falling off. I wish I had someone that comedic in my life. Life would never be boring, that's for sure. Anyway, I loved this chapter. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 11:02 PDT
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Well miss FallenAngel, you have done it again. You've written a super awesome chapter, and left us hanging on what's goign to happen next. But no worries, we love you for it. Just one question, does Inuyasha think that Kenren is Kagejiro's child, or Sesshomaru's? I kinda got a little confused about that part, and forgot to ask. and when in God's name are Rin and Sesshomaru going to see each other again?! Please make it soon! The suspense is killing me! and I know it's a LITTLE personal, but are familiar with the bdsm lifestyle? Because you're pretty much nialing it head on, lol. _______ Hope you update REAL SOON, even though I know you probably won't...________ Ja Nae! MistressKagome.
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 01:14 PDT
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i don't know how i feel about yash right now.... hes buggin me. i am really itching to read about rin and fluffy meeting again! im dying here!!!! most excellent chapter and kikyo is a whore. that is all i have to say about that. ^_^
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Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: June 12, 2007 11:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chap had me going a few times. i was sure kikyou would catch them. then, sess giving his 'lil bro advice, wow! i love your way with words and your metaphors. your writing has me wondering how you can be so damn good. it's the little things like, ex: 'cry herself into a water-filled grave'. man, that's so awesome. it tells me how much thought you're putting into everything you write. not just the 'facts' of the story. miro as usual, had me lmao. he's such a nut, and i can totally relate to him... i am a serious spazz! he put yash in his place for sure! i am so ready for the next chap. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Inuluvher151 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 22:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is a really great story it took me a while to finally get to this point in the story but i really like it and cant wait to see what happens next....
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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 00:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay, so she wants to make it work with inuyasha but she "feels" with this other guy. confusion, confusion, confusion! she makes no sense, but hey, kagome is a hypocrite. nice! i liked how she told her to break up with him. but kikyo is not dumb. she just sucks. don't like her. and i can't wait for rin's reaction. and sess... oooh, i can't wait for him to find out about his son. and inuyasha will make fun of him won't he? he'll have fun at his expense? i also love miroku. can we have more miroku/sango moments? pretty please? with sugar and a cherry on top? just what have you planned for those two crazy kids? huh? huh? can we know? hahaha. i don't know why i'm laughin, but have more soon please. and wear padding when you write. that way it won't hurt so much!
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