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Reviewed By: Scriptix(nsi) On: January 25, 2011 22:49 PST
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Kagome will be avenged, or get revenge, I have not yet decided ~*~ Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. |
Title: Ch. 39
Reviewed By: Katlady13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2011 16:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. First, let me say Merry Christmas to myself for your awesome update! I hope your holidays were wonderful! Also, yes this was my first child and now she's almost six months. She had a great first christmas and good visits with family all over. A baby does make for some stressful traveling when you're trying to see everyone though. Now, wow. You have some seriously strong female characters in this story. First Kaui goes back and confronts her ass of an ex to try and save her little girl, I love it. Any mother would do anything to save their child and you captured that perfectly. I'm so glad she told all of them about Souta. Next, you have Kikyou who, not only already tried to call InuYasha, but flat out left her family with one hell of a one liner! I love how you built up the suspense of what is going on with Kags right now through everyone she is connected to. Also, I love that Seshy is back in action, and was caught cuddling with Rin and Kenren. That was a much needed dose of cute. More than anything, I love that even after everything all of the people that Kags has connected with are coming together to save her. I really truly hope that you can finish this story, I've been hooked on it for years and can't believe it's almost over. If there is anything I can do to help, please let me know! You are truly a gifted writer and it's been such a privilege to read your work. |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko ((offline)) On: December 27, 2010 21:06 PST
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:) how good it feels to be able to leave you a review! fucking fantastic! your ability to ensnare my full attention is remarkable. you have a serious skill, and yet you leave me with yet another cliff :P lol but then again there is at least one more to come if you have 2 more chapters to go. I think it would be cool to have a spin off story about Kagejiro :P see his life. Considering he may be my all time favorite OC |
Reviewed By: HanyouKagome962 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2010 11:26 PST
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oh and i forgot i loved Kikyou's line “As for shameful indiscretions, I lost my virginity on the back of a school bus in seventh grade to a high school dropout. Sit on that and rotate!” that was great gave me a good laugh i could picture her saying it and her parents reaction perfectly halarious! |
Reviewed By: HanyouKagome962 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2010 11:23 PST
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Happy Holidays to you and yours and a Happy New Year as well. I hope you dont leave us hanging too long before you update but i know life can be very hectic i can only hope that you are able to finish the story, ive stuck with you and this fic for too long for it to be left unfinished lol. |
Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2010 15:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh Merry Christmas/happy holidays or what ever to you and all those who read this story. |
Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2010 15:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You sure know how to keep some one hanging on. I love what Kikyo told her parents “As for shameful indiscretions, I lost my virginity on the back of a school bus in seventh grade to a high school dropout. Sit on that and rotate!” Fantastic line. And Yura's line “When a gorgeous guy parks a million dollar car in the parking lot of this scummy place, you take notice to the comings and goings. Trust me; you’d know if they were back.” the whole thing with Yura was Awesome, very funny, right where you needed it. |
Reviewed By: New Fan On: December 23, 2010 15:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very deep chapter I just read. I can not wait to see/read what Inu's brothers involvment will be like when they saving Kagome. Will daddy dearest know what has happen? If he does, will he get involve? Update really soon!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kinky-Hoe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2010 10:42 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm. Is Inuyasha's theory about Onigumo and Bankotsu right? Doesn't sound so bad to me. Clearly, it's soap opera-ish, but who doesn't like that stuff when it's so well written? Anyway, Kagejiro is still amazing. He says what everyone thinks out loud and makes every other character look moronic in comparison to him, lol. I also loved the first part with Kikyo and Kagome's family. Nice insight. And now that everybody is up to date, I can't wait for this major ass kicking we're talking about! It sure is sad to hear about this story coming to an end, but it's only normal and thank goodness you never gave up! So excited. :) Thanks for the update, you amazing you, haha. |
Reviewed By: shina (-shina-@live.com) On: December 23, 2010 05:42 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I can't wait to see what happens with Bank! Poor Inu! I like the way you brought it all out to Kikyou and Jiro. Jiro's reaction was amazing...retelling it all like a soap opera! lol. Great update! |
Reviewed By: ninjagurl512 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2010 07:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love love love. kikyo pulling through was a bit of a shocker...i liked it. taisho boys to the rescue! in suspense until the next update. keep up the good work dearie! |
Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling (nsi) On: December 21, 2010 13:53 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
“As for shameful indiscretions, I lost my virginity on the back of a school bus in seventh grade to a high school dropout. Sit on that and rotate!”...That was the best! I really loved the change Kikyou made here. Kagome's Mom was pretty awesome, too, and this was all REALLY exciting. I'm on the edge of my seat here wanting to know what'll happen. As always, it was such a nice surprise to see an update for this and I can't wait to see if they'll find Kagome...and if there's anything left of her, though Sesshomaru's idea of how Bankotsu might act makes me hopeful. I wonder what was in the package Kagome left Sango, too. Exciting update! And I hope you have a Happy Holiday!:D ~Amber |
Title: Chapter 39
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2010 11:23 PST
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Chapter was a bit dry aside from Kikyo coming back from the Dark Side ;p. But then, it's an arc chapter, those tend to be such, I know. Eagerly awaiting the next update. :) |
Title: SAAAANNNNTTTTAAAA!
Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2010 09:54 PDT
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Okay....*sighs*....I've been guilty of reading w/o reviewing. Anyways, I love this story it is by faaarrrr the best story in my favorites. Every time I get an email that said you updated, I feel like a little giddy kid opening a Christmas gift every time I see the latest update. I'm glad Inu and Kags made up and she confessed about her past. In the beginning, I was starting to think every thing was slowly starting to turn upwards, but then....fucking Bank...came outta left field and rocked Kags world, man! I was like, "No! Run,girl!" WHO THE FUCK DOES HE THINK HE IS? They're like the mafia or something. I can't wait to see this unfold and how Bank get's taken down. Miro and Kagejiro are HILARIOUS. Oh,I forgot what happened between Sessh and Rin, I'm going to have to read through and find out. Anyways, I love the story even though the updates are few....they're full and satisfying. It's like three good updates in one. Thanks for posting this story and it's been a privilege getting a chance to read it!
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Reviewed By: misato_1471 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2010 09:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! I do hope Inuyasha saves Kagome. I really do! eeeee! I know you're busy with reality but do update when you get a chance. Looking forward to it.
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