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| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2010 00:37 PDT
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omg! that's really all i can say... i knew he was going to try to get her back but jeez!!! i don't know what's gonna happen or how inuyasha will find her! how will he find her?! she can't die!!!! more soon please!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Kinky-Hoe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2010 19:42 PDT
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:O Very intense chapter! So much good and so much bad. Dammit. Smells like massive ass kicking as an ending. I wonder how Kagome is going to be saved, 'cause you'll make Inuyasha or anyone save her, right?! Violence is welcomed as long as Bankotsu literally rots in hell in the end. Kagome's luck with men is just that incredible.
| Title: Chapter 38
Reviewed By: ImmoralT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2010 18:43 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTT! This girl cannot get a break!!!! Update soon please!!!!!!!! Totally hooked and CANNOT WAIT to see how Bank's attempt at murder pans out.! OH and I'm really looking forward to Jiro finally being able to fight...Bank? **crosses fingers** I mean, i know you love him but Irishmen just do it better :) XP On a more personal note, I wish you all the best in your life and I do hope that everything sorts itsself out in your benifit. :D
| Reviewed By: Katlady13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2010 17:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOORAY YOU UPDATED! Actually, you updated while I was in the hospital in labor lol! I now have a beautiful baby girl who is napping right now. Sorry it took me awhile to finish this chapter, I've been having to read in bits and pieces but it was excellent. So glad that they've made up and are finally being totally honest with each other about their pasts. Also, I've got to say it's very Bankotsu that he's already come for Kagome. Inuyasha is going to feel like an idiot, I can already see the berating he'll give himself. I hope Kagome can maybe do something to help herself using her miko powers, I feel sort of proud that she fought back so hard too. I'm sorry to hear your life has been hectic in a non-awesome way, I hope it's better now. I also understand how much it can bother the author to have a story that's unfinished. We know you'll finish it, we're just impatient to read your amazing lines is all!
| Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2010 21:16 PDT
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:D Great update, love that you make me nervous with your cliff..... I hope your not having to much troubles in your personal world. :) Hope all is well. Thank you for the update. :)
| Reviewed By: New Fan On: July 14, 2010 12:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! I did not realize its been over four years, but I have to say that everytime you updated, the story gets better and better. I just wondering will we read some more of Rin and Sess. Will Sess be in the fray with Inuyasha and Kagome, since his family secret has been compromised?! It will be great if the brothers come together to defeat Banks and Oni. Update really soon. P.S. whatever you are going through personally, I am sorry and I hope that it will be resolve soon.
| Reviewed By: frenchdiamond_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2010 10:09 PDT
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Sooo happy you updated!!! When I got the email, at first, I was wondering what story it was and then it was like an explosion in my head (YES!! I get to read a chapter!!). So glad that Kagome confessed everything to IY, so they can start a relationship properly (Finally!!). Love Miro and 'jiro, so hilarious. Wish we could see more of them. When Bank showed up, I was so scared!! In my head, I was like: "Not again!! OMG!!!" I was biting my nails (which I NEVER do). So evil for stopping the chap there. I know you like happy endings and like they say "it's always darker before dawn" but, poor Kagome... Anyways, I totally get what you mean about life being crappy sometimes (in May I was in a serious car accident where 2 of my friends died and my grandpa has terminal cancer). Things like that makes you realize what is important and what isn't and to cherish what you have. Anyways, I hope it works out for you and I hope to read another chap soon.
| Reviewed By: ninjagurl512 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2010 09:39 PDT
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This was a wonderful thing to see when I woke up. Loveage. Hah even though you warned us of the violence that didn't stop the "holy shits" coming from me. Great job dear, can't wait for the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling (nsi) On: July 13, 2010 14:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man! Just when IY/K were starting to smooth things out Bankotsu had to come in...and with InuYasha on a hunt for Onigumo, I can't see help arriving too quickly. Poor girl =( I'm kind of hoping Jakotsu has some part in the save. I love him being so protective of her, like when Bank broke into his house and he stayed vigil over Kagome. Whatever you do, I'm eager to find out what'll happen next! Getting updates for this is like finding a present in my inbox and timing is not an issue because its always, always worth the wait. Excellent, exciting update! ~Amber :D
| Title: NO WAY!!!
Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2010 13:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY SHIT!! Damn!! I just can't believe it!! I wasn't expecting an update, so when I saw on my mailbox that you had updated I was nearly pissing my pants! I read like a rabid woman, every word, every sentence!+*+*+* Just when you think things are finally getting better, you drop the F-bomb on us!! Damn girl!! You have some wicked imagination!! And a twisted mind to leave us with this cliffhanger!! I swear, I nearly had a heart attack!! *+*+*+ Love your sense of humor! The scene with Miroku and Kagejiro was priceless!! I love those 2! Damn it!! If I can't have Inu, I want a Kage for myself!! >_< *+*+*+ I'm really sorry to hear that life outside internet has not been quite what we all wish for our favorite writer. I wish I could say something witty or even smart to make you feel better, but all I can say is that no matter how bad it gets, there is always something better around the corner (The problem sometimes lies on making it around the fucking corner!). I really wish for everything to get better in your life. You are a very smart girl, and there is got to be someone out there who is not blind and will see you for who you really are and love you that way. *+*+*+ I would be lying if I said I didn't want you to update soon, but I am hoping that life will get better and you will find your wits to write again in the near future. Take care of yourself, have fun, and don't worry about the things you can't change. We all love you here, and behind each name, there is a person who appreciates what you do! Hugs and best wishes: MidCat
| Reviewed By: HanyouKagome962 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2010 13:18 PDT
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Damn i didn't think Bankotsu would show up again. Figures that just when things start to look up something has to happen to off set it all. I really hope Kagome get her chance to get revenge on Bankotsu its well over due. UPDATE SOON because that was a horrible place to end a chapter i dont know how i will handle the suspense.
| Title: Chapter 38
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2010 12:13 PDT
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Figures, just when everything begins to look up Bankotsu rears his twisted head again. I very much want Kagome to personally get her revenge on him, he's underestimating her now and I want her to show him what she's capable of, and I don't mean physically.
| Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2010 06:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no! I have been reading this story for DAYS and im sooo sad their are no more chapters to read yet!!!!!!!!! This is an AMAZING story. Please never give it up and UPDATE SOON!!!
| Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2010 07:43 PDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the March 2010 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: Ht tp:// groups. yahoo. com/group/ FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: Ht tp:// feudal. animara. org/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: ht tp:// feudal. animara. org/winners. php?a= show&type= Fanfiction&year= March%202010 Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: Ht tp:// feudal.animara.org/ Please pick up "site only" awards here: Ht tp:// feudal. animara. org/pickup_ site. php First place awards will be on permanent display here: ht tp:// feudal. animara. org/gallery. php Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association
| Reviewed By: ninjagurl512 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2010 08:51 PDT
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wonderful chapter! finally kagome stops being a dumbass. can't wait for the next one, keep up the good work!
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