| "Live and Let Die (Part 3): Learning To Deal" Reviews/Comments [ 280 ] |
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Title: hurray!!
Reviewed By: anime fanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 15:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!! I read all thre stories of live and let die in 2 days!!! I love them. I'm soooo eager to find out whats gonna happen next... please update soon
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Title: so happy
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 12:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy that you have started posting Part 3 of your story. I didn't know how long I could wait to see what happens; with Inuyasha & Kagome training with sesshomaru. You know the old man got what he desveres. for someone who clams to know everything. And got to love to sex scenes and hopefully it will keep sango out of their business being with the monk. only leaves shippou to worry about. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update very soon. I mean really really really soon!
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Reviewed By: nightangel15 not logged in On: July 03, 2006 15:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea!!!!!! its the third story!!!!!! i'm so happy!!!!!!!!! please update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Michelle* On: July 03, 2006 14:08 EDT
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LOve it!!! Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: July 03, 2006 14:08 EDT
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AWsome!!! Update soon!!
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Title: Fan 4 life!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 18:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read all your fanfics, and I love them all! I love the way you bring your stories to life. I give you props for taking one of the most interesting stories in the anime world, and adding special twists to it! I LOVE your stories! I can wait for your next chapter. ~B reading U!
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: July 01, 2006 21:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that was an awesome start!! Hooray for Literary Goddess!! I love it!! Hooray!! I really like the new technique you are tyringwith Live and Let Die. Making it in several books. It works very well!! I was ticked off with Kagome at the start of the chapter. Seems she has errored again with Inuyasha. Unless she didn't know or chose to ignore the unending harrassment that he was recieving by her grandfather. Poor Inuyasha. being the underdog again. She put Sango in her place when it came to harrassment but didn't even think about defending Inuyasha to her grandfather. Sometimes people will do stupid things and make mistakes. I wonder if the hot love scene was Kagome's little way of saying sorry. I am happy that they did explain why they mated. The lemons were hot!! Deliciously delightful!! And Naraku is in for a real shocker and eye opener. He doesn't know what we know.. And in his words... KuKuKuKuKu... It will be his mistake and I feel ultimately his downfall. Though Kikyou might not take the mating very well. She'll be causing porblems in the future most likely. And Shippo needs another lesson again. HeeHeeHeeHee. Interruptus matetus is not a wanted sickness by any. But the cure is so fast acting. lol... I am hoping that Kagome's prediction will prove correct and Sango will finally lay off her. I wonder what method will Sesshoumaru use to help teach Kagome to protect herself from being used.. Then again.. Naraku just might find out and being who he is take advantage of her. I wonder he he tried using Inuyasha's form or Kikyou's form again would he succeed again in tricking them? I giggled with the comment about Jaken getting tripped by Rin's hyperactivity. Awesome and funny touch!! I enjoyed how Inuyasha reminded Miroku of his responiblity. Looking forward to seeing how Kagome will love her Inuyasha in human form. I wonder if she'll take the opportunity to be the dominant one for a change.. I laughed when Sesshoumaru found them again in the hotspring and when he came into the opening he was shaking his head mental. I was mad when Shippo opened his big mouth and blurted out Inuyasha's time of the month I had my fingers crossed that none of Naraku's minions or servants were in earshot. Again an Excellent start and looking forward to reading more!! Please keep up the most excellent and amazing work!! You Totally Rock!!! Thank you, Thank you and THANK YOU!!!
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Title: Good Read
Reviewed By: Majicman55 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 14:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read the first two, and now have started on the third, so I guess it's about time I commented. It's good. There. I've done it. I've commented on your story. See? I said it is good. Now, hurry up with the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos (nsi) On: July 01, 2006 13:43 EDT
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hurray, you posted early! now i feel the motivation flowing! those two never seem to catch a break without having to jump through hoops to get to it! and naraku knows (not that he's all that bright, he sends others out and misses half the important stuff). why do i get the feeling shippou is still going to be a pain in the butt? he just never seems to understand that grownups need grownup time. i'm sort of curious to see if he ever interrupted his parents that much or if he's really that insecure about being left behind. maybe if he catches them once his eyes will never recover and then he won't be so quick to sneak out looking again! i'm excited for this installment, you're off to a great start!
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Title: Hi!
Reviewed By: Alotta Profit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 12:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you! Im glad that you decided to continue this, your writing is very enjoyable. Until next time, A.P.
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