| "Live and Let Die (Part 3): Learning To Deal" Reviews/Comments [ 280 ] |
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: July 21, 2006 13:05 EDT
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That chapter was awesome, i loved it. ^_^ Update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: OpinioVana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 22:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehe… Shippou and Jaken… That little fox kit has a hard time not getting into trouble doesn't he? Speaking of which isn't Sess concerned that those behaviors of Shippou's will rub off on Rin? Oh! And the twins at the grocery store… lol… Inu is pretty hot though so who can blame them? I hope you update soon. Isn't the night of the new moon in the next chapter? Kag seems to have a few things planned for that night. So pretty please update soon.
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Reviewed By: nightangel15 not logged in On: July 19, 2006 22:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the stories you write. they are all very well writen and the live and let die series is my favorite! i am definately planning on seconding awakenings. keep up the great job!
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Reviewed By: anime fanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 06:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is turning out really good... ^o^ I wanna find out what happens with Naraku when he discovers that Kagome has got stronger... ^u^ please update soon... pretty please
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Title: Yay!!
Reviewed By: Jalen... On: July 18, 2006 23:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!!....i mean... WOW!!.....sayin it wuz awesome would be an understatement ^_^....well n\e wayz...hope 2 c wat happens......update soon plz!!!
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Title: KONNICHI HA
Reviewed By: .Lady_Kagome. On: July 17, 2006 07:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEA awosme job I lvoed this chapter sorry I would hhave reviewed sooner but my computers jacked up, up-date soon!
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie nsi On: July 15, 2006 23:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome and superbly mastered chapter from the Literary Goddess!! Whoot!! Whoot!! Bravo!! I am quite pleased with the turn of events in this chapter!! Really WOW!! I like that Kikyou seems to have "grown up" in this chapter... Very nicely achieved!! And Shippo seems to just have found a new outlet for his selfish and utterly reprehensible behaviour. Poor Jaken... That was down right cruel to do that to him and that Shippo included Rin in on it the way he did... He needs his butt whipped again... (after he recovers from being crispy that is.) He deliberately put Rin in danger with his thoughtless and selfish stunt and if it wasn't for Kirara being there to protect/shield her.... The scent of burnt hair, clothing and animal fur must have driven Sesshoumaru away before he got sick from it. I wonder what will be his punishment for this. I hope it comes from Rin... I loved the barrier that Inuyasha erects now while they rest. It means he can finally rest a little more fully in the Feudal era than usual. Very nicely done. His demonic aura-his youki or is it jyaki? has included Kagome!! I love it when Inuyasha's essence or core self/powers has also fully claimed Kagome. It's so touching. I loved it when Miroku and Kaede were discussing Inuyasha new ability to merge his youki into a barrier that allows him to move about without getting harmed. I really liked how Miroku had discussed it without making jokes or snide comments about Inuyasha. Looks like he is maturing slowly as well. I like how they were commenting on Shippo and his treatment of girls. I wonder if Shippo will hurt Rin like he did to the one girl in the episode Roar Shippo-Heart Scar. Or will he be too afraid of Sesshoumaru? No one has commented on Shippo being in some ways worse than Miroku towards girls. And that was a very pleasing addition to the story... to have Inuyasha's ablities diminish as he turns while having Kagome's powers increase to compensate for the unbalance. I found this to be pretty realistic in terms of their powers. I had wondered what would happen when he turned human and you answered it brillantly!! And of course Inuyasha reacted true to character... Having a major sulking pout attack. Will we be witnesses to Kagome's plans, ne? Sango really has some issues when it comes to relationships both hers(with Miroku) and Kagomes(with Inuyasha). It is slightly her problem.. she has never been verbally firm with Miroku. She only answered with her hands or weapon. I liked how you had Miroku and Sango finally talk. That was an awesome and masterful touch!! Really great work!! I wonder if Kagome will find out that Sango has held onto secret desire that Inuyasha betray her or if Inuyasha will find out? I was laughing at Kagome eagerness to explain what she thinks of Inuyasha and all his three forms.. Don't think Inuyasha has really thought of it that way before. Hope he starts too, and makes plans for it.. And maybe Inuyasha could throw out the comment to Kagome about her needing to work on her stamina for the full moon or his Youkai self showing up at other times.. I wonder if she would blush? And what a completely shocking but hiliarious ending to the chapter!! Were the twins re-incarnations of Jyakotsu? Makes me wonder... lol!! You really are honouring Rumiko with your protrayal of her characters. I am in awe of your grasp of them. Please keep up the most Awesomely, Exquiste, Masterful and Brillant work!! Thank you for sharing it with us and I can't wait for the next update!! You Totally Rock, Goddess!!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos (nsi) On: July 15, 2006 11:30 EDT
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helloo! i'm back to being a minion. beautifully done. i love how shippou isn't just falling in line, but still holding on to his spoiled nature. the tachi is going to have their hands full. and kikyou...man she's going to go off and confront naraku on her own and cause strife between inuyasha and kagome. i just can't see inuyasha ignoring any news that kikyou is in trouble with naraku. and that i think will test inuyahsa and kagome as well as really bother sango (more in the lines as 'i told you so' than anything else)no one is having it easy in this one. i'm lokking forward to human inuyasha's noises (will that be in the next chappie?)beautiful work.
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: July 15, 2006 02:32 EDT
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Pleh, gay twins, I can only imagine what they might do to each other but that's sick and wrong and well.... just sickly wrong. Anyways update soon.
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Title: KONNICHI HA
Reviewed By: Kagome Sama On: July 12, 2006 08:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH! Nic ejob I really love this story ^_^ I would have reviewed on the first chapter but it wouldn't let me ~_~ but anyway nice job I'm loving it WOOT!
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Title: PJ
Reviewed By: jammies2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 04:52 EDT
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I was reading this series again and I realized in my review of this chapter I mentioned about Kouga and Kikyo being upset when they heard. I forgot that they already know from the previous story and had their "fights" and stuff so this should surprise Naraku especially if they don't do anything but maybe laugh at Naraku or whatever. Plus Sessy is being nice that should surprise Naraku as well. anyway great addition to this wonderful series of stories thx for posting.
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie -nsi On: July 08, 2006 23:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome chapter from the Literary Goddess!! Whoot! Whoot!! Whoot!! Kudos!! Bravissimo!! I liked how Naraku sent off his lackey in hopes of causing a poop fest-nice touch!! I wonder if Koga will go ballastic when he hears about Inuyasha and Kagome 'rutting savagely like animals in the woods'. Will his tiny mind take this as Inuyasha 'forcing' himself upon Kagome and 'molesting' her? Or will he still think Kagome is his woman? Knowing they are mates is one thing but hearing about it is another. I can't wait to see the next chapter!! How is Inuyasha going to handle "the Talk"? I can see a pounding in the future. Poor Inuyasha. And I thought Shippo knew about sex already? Back just before Miroku appeared didn't Shippo ask Inuyasha just how far he got with Kagome while buck naked at the Hotspring. Now Kikyou knowing there'll be a big stink poofed up from this. She will not take it well. I can see her now swooping in stating some nasty comments about Kagome's morales, being 'Easy' and Inuyasha giving into his 'disgusting filthy animal perversions' and something to the comment of 'tainting' and 'purity' just to make certain that they are both feel lower than dirt or try to shoot arrows at them or worse scenario-she joins Naraku. A real shocker with Sango, kind of suspected but to hear her say she wants Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship the worst that is just horrible. Sango should take control of her relationship. Tell Miroku no touching,kissing, nothing until he proves himself to her. I can't wait to see Inuyasha making diamonds for Kagome!! I wonder if he'll be fussy about which one will be good enough for Kagome. How will they explain a raw chunk of Diamond to a jewelery.. No wait even better!! Have Totousai create a diamond ring with special talents along with one of Inuyasha's fangs!! Perphaps he could even have Inuyasha give up a fang to create a weapon for Kagome in case of hand to hand combat. He could this couldn't he? Or maybe Sesshoumaru would know of a Youkai jeweler. It was adorable how they practiced their ablities by their tree and laughed when Kagome started getting silly thoughts. and how true that Kagome's power would be found in the area of her heart... but the treat was where Inuyasha found his!! lol!! Can't wait for the next chapter! Please keep up the most excellent and superb work!! Thank you so much for writing and sharing this story with us!!
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Reviewed By: AnonFan On: July 08, 2006 02:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story - can't wait to see what happens with Kikyo and Koga!
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 20:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did another great chapter. What is wrong with Sango? Is she waiting for Inuyasha to slip and fall so she could say to Kagome "I told you so" I'm glad Sesshomaru set her straight. I like the part where Naraku is sending out an incarnation to inform Kikyou and Kouga what Kagome and Inuyasha is doing in the woods like they will confront them (LOL). Can't wait till next chapter keep up the good work.
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Title: PJ
Reviewed By: jammies2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 18:34 EDT
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Cool chapter I am really enjoying this series I liked the first 2 stories to this. I don't know what is wrong with Sango but she really needs to get her head screwed on straight. I am glad Sessy heard her and explained that Inuyasha wouldn't hurt Kagome. Now I wonder what Kikyo and Kouga will do it would be kinda nice if one of them didn't get mad and supported Inu/Kag that would throw Naraku off (maybe) Anyway thx for sharing this story with us look forward to more.
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