| "Live and Let Die (Part 3): Learning To Deal" Reviews/Comments [ 280 ] |
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Title: Appropriate naming... much happiness!
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 22:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this latest update- teehee* My questions were answered but I was more than happy at what happened to Kohaku... I'm going to cry when Kag's and Inu is to say goodbye to the gang... How will they pass the time, Kouga, Ayame, and Shippo I mean? What will happen to Sango, Miroku, and Kohaku? We all know bout Rin and Sesshy now and I couldn't help but sigh as I read their little love story! Absolutely adore this chappie since all my questions were answered somehow... well now you have the questions I stated prevbioously to answer as I wait for the next chappie! Mucho luvs to you and your writing... I can't wait for the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 20:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! so awesome!
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 18:04 EDT
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aw its so cute! thats not the end is it? i hope not. please if its not the end then updat soon this story is amazing you are an amazing writer. keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: theIYobsessed On: May 07, 2007 00:28 EDT
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Ugh. Okay. I feel really sick right now so this review is going to be short. I remember thinking that when Midoriko started talking about Inuyasha becoming human, I did think she meant forever. I was about to get really upset! But I'm glad that's not what she meant. I'd kind of like to see them stay in the past, just because it's weird thinking about them going on and on and on from the modern times on. Staying in the past to the modern times and on takes up a lot more of their lifespan. But eh. This isn't "The Lucky Ones" after all. And once Miroku and Sango die... what's left for them anyway? Sesshomaru, Rin, Shippou, Kouga... But still. And Shippou doesn't belong in the future either, even if he is like a son to Kagome. Anyway, if she stayed in the past she'd have to give up her real family and that'd just be too much in this story! So I'm glad they're going back to her time. It's just kinda weird to think about. xD
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome31 On: May 06, 2007 13:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol u should have seen my face when i thought it was the younger rin wit sesshy. I was about to go out side and punch someone then throw up..no lie. Great chapter! r4k
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Title: Another great chapter!
Reviewed By: Phoenix7 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 22:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been an awesome fic to read, just like all of your others. I loved when you finally had Naraku get wasted in the last chapter, since the disgusting SOB had it coming to him. The way Kouga finally decided to help the rest of the group, rather than being a dense idiot, really changed what I thought about him, and I liked that bit at the end where Inuyasha tells Kouga not to tick off Ayame and cause her to kick his butt. I look forward to seeing the rest of this great story soon, and I will continue to read your future fics, as you are one of the greatest writers I've ever discovered on this or any other site.
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Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-is-best-fuck-the-rest On: April 28, 2007 18:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!this is one of the best fanfictions i've ever read!your writing is exelent and there are few errors.and you've managed to capture the personalyties(?) of the characters, like,almost PERFECT!!!!!!i loved it and i want you to UPDATE THIS NOW BEFORE I GO CRAZY!and you don't want me to become crazy....trust me..lol..anyway....this is great, fantastic, beautiful!
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 17:36 EDT
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Whaaaaaaa!! Poor Kohaku. You know i think i know a way to save Kohaku and purify the jewel at the same time, to make a pure wish, to save Kohaku's life, but wait no, if they do that they cant wish for the well to remain open, but with Kagome's and Inuyasha's now and stronger power they can probaly create enough energy to reopen the well, ummmm unlimited possibilty i wonder whats gonna happen....But i love you work and keep it up. I know your gonna think i'm a big dodo bird but i cant find where you respond to the reveiws on livejournal. DANG! i just thought of somthing else how can you respond to me it i cant find the responds awww tatter sauce BYE@!!^_^
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Title: SO MUCH ANTICIPATION!
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 10:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the latest update and it was right in time for my b-day! Woor-Woot! haha! I loved this chapter so much becuase for a really long time I was hanging in the air as I waited to know what the hell happened to the cast after the battle! And the way you ended the chapter- wasn't there or can't there be another way to convince Kohaku to keep his life- I was sorta making myself disbelieve that he wanted to die and reading that part almost made me cry- As for the rest of the fic I loved how Sesshy told Rin (wait switch that around) of how he came back alive- I was so overwhelmed with anticipation for the next chapter that the rest of my thoughts left my head and the questions I wanted to ask willo just have to wait! Can't wait for the next update- and don't keep me waiting so long! haha! Awesome job and until next time- your fan- Stephanie
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Reviewed By: theIYobsessed On: April 27, 2007 22:43 EDT
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["I'm sorry, Kaede. I know what it feels like to lose a family member," Shippou offered. "I know, Shippou, I know you do. Thank you. Now, will you help me with some of these herbs and to gather some vegetables? ] I like that "i know, I know you do' line. [All Kouga could think as he watched Sango skin and clean the rabbits was what a waste. His wolves would have eaten the entire carcass, allowing none of it to go unused. And as far as he was concerned, she was throwing some of the best parts away. He could almost understand the hide since that was sometimes hard to digest, but still… Kouga thought it was bad enough that the humans cooked their meat. It was really sad to see them desecrate it this way. Then again, if this is what it took for Kagome to get better, so be it.] That's an interesting perspective to get on this. We think of animals as savages, the way they eat their meat. But here Kouga is thinking about how we're /wasters/. *shrug* I just thought that was interesting. [Sango surprised even Miroku when she laid down on his futon with him for the evening. She just shrugged her shoulders and said, "There's not enough room for everyone otherwise," and made herself comfortable.] Heh heh. I'm proud of her for that, actually. [InuYasha woke the next day to the feeling of eyes staring at him. He kept his eyes shut as he tried to pretend that they weren't there, though it wasn't long before Kagome started to stir in his arms. Relieved, he lightly squeezed her as she started to come around. His breath hitched when he felt her reach back to grab his length through his hakama. "Not now," he whispered in her ear.] Urk. Yeah. Awkward moment! ["Kohaku," Sango whispered with a sob. The boy in question stepped into the hut. "I knew that this day would come. I am ready."] Sad. :( This is the only story I read on MediaMiner you know. I mean, there is of course The Lucky Ones and Tales of the House of the Moon and some other stragglers. But all of them are finished or on hiatus except yours. So I totally am just coming here for you. xD That's a good thing though. I'm getting this nostalgic feeling right now because it's been a while since I've been here and I always think about those two stories I mentioned which are my absolute favorites out of all the IY fanfictions out there (at least that I've read). Don't know why I'm telling you this... *shuts up* ^^"
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Reviewed By: r4k On: April 27, 2007 20:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! its all comin together.....wait.. are u gonna keep it goin? or story it. well it would b okay this is the 3rd part. Well loved it! Keep it up ! =] Ro0tin4Kagome
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Reviewed By: Miriam M On: April 22, 2007 13:02 EDT
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this was a great chapter and i hope this wasn't the last as it feels somewhat like a cliffy. i could also see atleast one more chapter to this story if not two. i sure hope write more soon for this story.
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Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 14:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was magnificent.. but does it end here? Even if it does I was happy to see that someone could come up with a reasonable way for it to actually end.. Though I suspect 1 or 2 more chapters,ne? Nice Chpt! Hope there's a least 1 more!
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Title: Brilliance Within A Trilogy
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 10:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved your fic and I'm happy to see that you're bragging rights are well deserved! There's so many surprises that you kept bringing up... I'm kinda sad to think that maybe the fic is ending soon since Naraku is dead, but at the same time I can't wait until everything is resolve... I must a bit I'm a bit confuzzled about the entire time concept since Kagome and Inuyasha returned to the future and encountered the past... What will they make of their decisions to either stay or go? Whatever it is needs more explanation later... Will there be a time loop if Kagome decided to stay in the past? And if she did stay in the future, what happened in the past? I'm also wondering and just waiting to meet Sesshy and Rin's kids! Oh and what happened with Shippo? I think I have more random thoughts/questions but my mind sorta went blank *tee-hee* I read all three of the Live and Let Die series and just started wondering how long will this story go on? I doubt it'll go past 3/4 since it's pretty much tied up right now... Again, excellent job with this fic- I couldn't pull myself to stop reading/thinking about it... major coolness!
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 02:12 EDT
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Nicely done!
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