| "Live and Let Die (Part 3): Learning To Deal" Reviews/Comments [ 280 ] |
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Title: PJ
Reviewed By: jammies2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 04:52 EDT
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I was reading this series again and I realized in my review of this chapter I mentioned about Kouga and Kikyo being upset when they heard. I forgot that they already know from the previous story and had their "fights" and stuff so this should surprise Naraku especially if they don't do anything but maybe laugh at Naraku or whatever. Plus Sessy is being nice that should surprise Naraku as well. anyway great addition to this wonderful series of stories thx for posting.
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie -nsi On: July 08, 2006 23:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome chapter from the Literary Goddess!! Whoot! Whoot!! Whoot!! Kudos!! Bravissimo!! I liked how Naraku sent off his lackey in hopes of causing a poop fest-nice touch!! I wonder if Koga will go ballastic when he hears about Inuyasha and Kagome 'rutting savagely like animals in the woods'. Will his tiny mind take this as Inuyasha 'forcing' himself upon Kagome and 'molesting' her? Or will he still think Kagome is his woman? Knowing they are mates is one thing but hearing about it is another. I can't wait to see the next chapter!! How is Inuyasha going to handle "the Talk"? I can see a pounding in the future. Poor Inuyasha. And I thought Shippo knew about sex already? Back just before Miroku appeared didn't Shippo ask Inuyasha just how far he got with Kagome while buck naked at the Hotspring. Now Kikyou knowing there'll be a big stink poofed up from this. She will not take it well. I can see her now swooping in stating some nasty comments about Kagome's morales, being 'Easy' and Inuyasha giving into his 'disgusting filthy animal perversions' and something to the comment of 'tainting' and 'purity' just to make certain that they are both feel lower than dirt or try to shoot arrows at them or worse scenario-she joins Naraku. A real shocker with Sango, kind of suspected but to hear her say she wants Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship the worst that is just horrible. Sango should take control of her relationship. Tell Miroku no touching,kissing, nothing until he proves himself to her. I can't wait to see Inuyasha making diamonds for Kagome!! I wonder if he'll be fussy about which one will be good enough for Kagome. How will they explain a raw chunk of Diamond to a jewelery.. No wait even better!! Have Totousai create a diamond ring with special talents along with one of Inuyasha's fangs!! Perphaps he could even have Inuyasha give up a fang to create a weapon for Kagome in case of hand to hand combat. He could this couldn't he? Or maybe Sesshoumaru would know of a Youkai jeweler. It was adorable how they practiced their ablities by their tree and laughed when Kagome started getting silly thoughts. and how true that Kagome's power would be found in the area of her heart... but the treat was where Inuyasha found his!! lol!! Can't wait for the next chapter! Please keep up the most excellent and superb work!! Thank you so much for writing and sharing this story with us!!
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Reviewed By: AnonFan On: July 08, 2006 02:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story - can't wait to see what happens with Kikyo and Koga!
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 20:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did another great chapter. What is wrong with Sango? Is she waiting for Inuyasha to slip and fall so she could say to Kagome "I told you so" I'm glad Sesshomaru set her straight. I like the part where Naraku is sending out an incarnation to inform Kikyou and Kouga what Kagome and Inuyasha is doing in the woods like they will confront them (LOL). Can't wait till next chapter keep up the good work.
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Title: PJ
Reviewed By: jammies2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 18:34 EDT
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Cool chapter I am really enjoying this series I liked the first 2 stories to this. I don't know what is wrong with Sango but she really needs to get her head screwed on straight. I am glad Sessy heard her and explained that Inuyasha wouldn't hurt Kagome. Now I wonder what Kikyo and Kouga will do it would be kinda nice if one of them didn't get mad and supported Inu/Kag that would throw Naraku off (maybe) Anyway thx for sharing this story with us look forward to more.
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Title: hurray!!
Reviewed By: anime fanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 15:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!! I read all thre stories of live and let die in 2 days!!! I love them. I'm soooo eager to find out whats gonna happen next... please update soon
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Title: so happy
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 12:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy that you have started posting Part 3 of your story. I didn't know how long I could wait to see what happens; with Inuyasha & Kagome training with sesshomaru. You know the old man got what he desveres. for someone who clams to know everything. And got to love to sex scenes and hopefully it will keep sango out of their business being with the monk. only leaves shippou to worry about. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update very soon. I mean really really really soon!
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Reviewed By: nightangel15 not logged in On: July 03, 2006 15:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea!!!!!! its the third story!!!!!! i'm so happy!!!!!!!!! please update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Michelle* On: July 03, 2006 14:08 EDT
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LOve it!!! Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: July 03, 2006 14:08 EDT
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AWsome!!! Update soon!!
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Title: Fan 4 life!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 18:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read all your fanfics, and I love them all! I love the way you bring your stories to life. I give you props for taking one of the most interesting stories in the anime world, and adding special twists to it! I LOVE your stories! I can wait for your next chapter. ~B reading U!
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: July 01, 2006 21:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that was an awesome start!! Hooray for Literary Goddess!! I love it!! Hooray!! I really like the new technique you are tyringwith Live and Let Die. Making it in several books. It works very well!! I was ticked off with Kagome at the start of the chapter. Seems she has errored again with Inuyasha. Unless she didn't know or chose to ignore the unending harrassment that he was recieving by her grandfather. Poor Inuyasha. being the underdog again. She put Sango in her place when it came to harrassment but didn't even think about defending Inuyasha to her grandfather. Sometimes people will do stupid things and make mistakes. I wonder if the hot love scene was Kagome's little way of saying sorry. I am happy that they did explain why they mated. The lemons were hot!! Deliciously delightful!! And Naraku is in for a real shocker and eye opener. He doesn't know what we know.. And in his words... KuKuKuKuKu... It will be his mistake and I feel ultimately his downfall. Though Kikyou might not take the mating very well. She'll be causing porblems in the future most likely. And Shippo needs another lesson again. HeeHeeHeeHee. Interruptus matetus is not a wanted sickness by any. But the cure is so fast acting. lol... I am hoping that Kagome's prediction will prove correct and Sango will finally lay off her. I wonder what method will Sesshoumaru use to help teach Kagome to protect herself from being used.. Then again.. Naraku just might find out and being who he is take advantage of her. I wonder he he tried using Inuyasha's form or Kikyou's form again would he succeed again in tricking them? I giggled with the comment about Jaken getting tripped by Rin's hyperactivity. Awesome and funny touch!! I enjoyed how Inuyasha reminded Miroku of his responiblity. Looking forward to seeing how Kagome will love her Inuyasha in human form. I wonder if she'll take the opportunity to be the dominant one for a change.. I laughed when Sesshoumaru found them again in the hotspring and when he came into the opening he was shaking his head mental. I was mad when Shippo opened his big mouth and blurted out Inuyasha's time of the month I had my fingers crossed that none of Naraku's minions or servants were in earshot. Again an Excellent start and looking forward to reading more!! Please keep up the most excellent and amazing work!! You Totally Rock!!! Thank you, Thank you and THANK YOU!!!
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Title: Good Read
Reviewed By: Majicman55 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 14:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read the first two, and now have started on the third, so I guess it's about time I commented. It's good. There. I've done it. I've commented on your story. See? I said it is good. Now, hurry up with the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos (nsi) On: July 01, 2006 13:43 EDT
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hurray, you posted early! now i feel the motivation flowing! those two never seem to catch a break without having to jump through hoops to get to it! and naraku knows (not that he's all that bright, he sends others out and misses half the important stuff). why do i get the feeling shippou is still going to be a pain in the butt? he just never seems to understand that grownups need grownup time. i'm sort of curious to see if he ever interrupted his parents that much or if he's really that insecure about being left behind. maybe if he catches them once his eyes will never recover and then he won't be so quick to sneak out looking again! i'm excited for this installment, you're off to a great start!
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Title: Hi!
Reviewed By: Alotta Profit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 12:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you! Im glad that you decided to continue this, your writing is very enjoyable. Until next time, A.P.
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