| "Live and Let Die (Part 3): Learning To Deal" Reviews/Comments [ 280 ] |
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Title: hell ya!
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 16:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright bout damn time Sango and Miroku get it on! maybe she wont be as annoying in the future. now we'll see what happens with sesshomaru I can' wait to read how Inuyasha is going to give Shippou the talk. Narku is going to get his ass kick the world is right. lol as always I love the chapter.
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Title: Love it
Reviewed By: The goddess Rhiannon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 22:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story sooooo much. please update soon.
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Title: KONNICHI HA
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome. On: July 25, 2006 10:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THough I have to admit there wasn't much of a plot to this hapter as there was sex it was stil good ^^ Keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos (nsi) On: July 23, 2006 14:55 EDT
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human inuayasha's shy side! it's not often shown in the manga (and only a little in the anime, esp when kouga come around and found out his human night). he's so cute! i really love how you are portraying shippou. he didnt' just learn his lesson and go and make everything smooth and easy. he's still got a long way to go. it seems like he still has some resentment though. he's got to be old enough to know that the couples need time alone and that playing tricks on sesshy's group is not going to yeild him the same simple results that his pranks normally do. he's going to end up seriously hurt if he doesn't shape up. and i'm actually more worried not that sango and miroku have taken the next step in their relationship. sango still ahs a lot of unresolved issued where inuyasha and kagome are concerned and she doesn't understand their particular bond of trust. i worry that if anything goes wrong (or not the way she thinks it should go) with miroku, she'll try and take it out on her friends instead of trying to talk it out. i love the tension and psychological features you have in this one. i can't wait till next time!
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie-nsi On: July 21, 2006 23:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lemonade - that cool refreshing drink. Another Kami-gifted chapter from the Literary Goddess!! WHOOT!!! WOO-HOOOO!!! Bravo!! Bravissimo!! You know there isn't enough words to properly express my joy in reading your storiess. (major squealing of delight going on..) Blinks with astonishment.. That first scene with Kouga, his lackeys and Byakyua (that is too close to Baka... stifles a giggle.. especially since he doesn't know this will make everyone stronger than ever against Naraku) was great!! Awesome. I enjoyed how you have matured Kouga in this chapter. Stating that he has accepted Kagome's choice. Kudos to you!! And thank you!! Your talents just keep getting better and better!! I liked how Miroku chuckled over the singing of Shippou and the way he complained over having a bath. And thank you for reminding us that Jaken is not just for comedic relief. That was sweet. Miroku and Sango sharing a sweet kiss. Well, well, well... Sango is frustrated with Kagome and Inuyasha being close and intimate while she can't have the same with Miroku and it's her idea to have Shippou barging in on them all the time... Methinks me smell a back-firing idea on Sango's part. Just wait til Miroku finds out. I wonder if Shippou will really understand what was told to him and give the couples alone times. Things that make you go Hmmm... Poor Inuyasha, I agree. He is a wanted hanyou by both sexes. Inuyasha could smell their arousal.. oh dear.. POOR Inuyasha. Another brillant example of Inuyasha's maturity and security in Kagome. Awesome!!! I loved it!! He gave Kagome one shining example of his trust in her. I know that she'll understand it fully. Oh dear... And after Inuyasha had warned that silly Monk that Sango is close to her fertile time. What a dumb thing for him to do. A little arrogant of him. He could have asked Inuyasha for some birth control from Kagome's time. I can only hope that he didn't get her pregnant. Especially since Naraku is out there. Though that was a funny line.. That's all there is to it.. chuckles.. And will Sango finally lay off Kagome and Inuyasha now that she had made love with Miroku? They heard Kagome howl!! Lol.. Will she ever get embarrassed when she finds out!! Does Inuyasha blush different colours as a human? I like how the whole family accepts everything about Inuyasha. Including his amplified grouchiness on the New Moon. The love scene with Human Inuyasha and Kagome was touching and tender. How they re-connected and she re-assured him. I was doing the "awwwwweeee...so cuuuttteeeee." when I read the line that Inuyasha was doing his best to scent Kagome. and he sounds more like a puppy when he is human... That was too much!! Loved it!! This is great!!! Always I find new delights to surprise and thrill me with every chapter!! ...as long as we kept the howling down... What a fun line!! and to come from our little Kagome!! The image of the two of them snuffling each other is so cute and sweet... I got a sugar rush!! lol!! Thank you for keeping the characters realistic and true to form. Having Inuyasha retain his insecurities when in Human form. I think Kagome managed to reassure Inuyasha with her tender love making. Though it might benefit Inuyasha even New Moon to be re-assured. Again loved the Love scene, it's so hot and tender, so perfect!! Enjoyed the use of using their marks to increase the sensations they feel. A Brillant touch!! A really pleasant touch with having Inuyasha transform while making love!! Bravissimo!!! Thank you so much for sharing this story with us!! Please keep up the most excellent and Kami-gifted work!! Eagerly awaiting the next update!!
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: July 21, 2006 13:05 EDT
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That chapter was awesome, i loved it. ^_^ Update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: OpinioVana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 22:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehe… Shippou and Jaken… That little fox kit has a hard time not getting into trouble doesn't he? Speaking of which isn't Sess concerned that those behaviors of Shippou's will rub off on Rin? Oh! And the twins at the grocery store… lol… Inu is pretty hot though so who can blame them? I hope you update soon. Isn't the night of the new moon in the next chapter? Kag seems to have a few things planned for that night. So pretty please update soon.
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Reviewed By: nightangel15 not logged in On: July 19, 2006 22:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the stories you write. they are all very well writen and the live and let die series is my favorite! i am definately planning on seconding awakenings. keep up the great job!
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Reviewed By: anime fanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 06:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is turning out really good... ^o^ I wanna find out what happens with Naraku when he discovers that Kagome has got stronger... ^u^ please update soon... pretty please
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Title: Yay!!
Reviewed By: Jalen... On: July 18, 2006 23:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!!....i mean... WOW!!.....sayin it wuz awesome would be an understatement ^_^....well n\e wayz...hope 2 c wat happens......update soon plz!!!
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Title: KONNICHI HA
Reviewed By: .Lady_Kagome. On: July 17, 2006 07:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEA awosme job I lvoed this chapter sorry I would hhave reviewed sooner but my computers jacked up, up-date soon!
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie nsi On: July 15, 2006 23:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome and superbly mastered chapter from the Literary Goddess!! Whoot!! Whoot!! Bravo!! I am quite pleased with the turn of events in this chapter!! Really WOW!! I like that Kikyou seems to have "grown up" in this chapter... Very nicely achieved!! And Shippo seems to just have found a new outlet for his selfish and utterly reprehensible behaviour. Poor Jaken... That was down right cruel to do that to him and that Shippo included Rin in on it the way he did... He needs his butt whipped again... (after he recovers from being crispy that is.) He deliberately put Rin in danger with his thoughtless and selfish stunt and if it wasn't for Kirara being there to protect/shield her.... The scent of burnt hair, clothing and animal fur must have driven Sesshoumaru away before he got sick from it. I wonder what will be his punishment for this. I hope it comes from Rin... I loved the barrier that Inuyasha erects now while they rest. It means he can finally rest a little more fully in the Feudal era than usual. Very nicely done. His demonic aura-his youki or is it jyaki? has included Kagome!! I love it when Inuyasha's essence or core self/powers has also fully claimed Kagome. It's so touching. I loved it when Miroku and Kaede were discussing Inuyasha new ability to merge his youki into a barrier that allows him to move about without getting harmed. I really liked how Miroku had discussed it without making jokes or snide comments about Inuyasha. Looks like he is maturing slowly as well. I like how they were commenting on Shippo and his treatment of girls. I wonder if Shippo will hurt Rin like he did to the one girl in the episode Roar Shippo-Heart Scar. Or will he be too afraid of Sesshoumaru? No one has commented on Shippo being in some ways worse than Miroku towards girls. And that was a very pleasing addition to the story... to have Inuyasha's ablities diminish as he turns while having Kagome's powers increase to compensate for the unbalance. I found this to be pretty realistic in terms of their powers. I had wondered what would happen when he turned human and you answered it brillantly!! And of course Inuyasha reacted true to character... Having a major sulking pout attack. Will we be witnesses to Kagome's plans, ne? Sango really has some issues when it comes to relationships both hers(with Miroku) and Kagomes(with Inuyasha). It is slightly her problem.. she has never been verbally firm with Miroku. She only answered with her hands or weapon. I liked how you had Miroku and Sango finally talk. That was an awesome and masterful touch!! Really great work!! I wonder if Kagome will find out that Sango has held onto secret desire that Inuyasha betray her or if Inuyasha will find out? I was laughing at Kagome eagerness to explain what she thinks of Inuyasha and all his three forms.. Don't think Inuyasha has really thought of it that way before. Hope he starts too, and makes plans for it.. And maybe Inuyasha could throw out the comment to Kagome about her needing to work on her stamina for the full moon or his Youkai self showing up at other times.. I wonder if she would blush? And what a completely shocking but hiliarious ending to the chapter!! Were the twins re-incarnations of Jyakotsu? Makes me wonder... lol!! You really are honouring Rumiko with your protrayal of her characters. I am in awe of your grasp of them. Please keep up the most Awesomely, Exquiste, Masterful and Brillant work!! Thank you for sharing it with us and I can't wait for the next update!! You Totally Rock, Goddess!!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos (nsi) On: July 15, 2006 11:30 EDT
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helloo! i'm back to being a minion. beautifully done. i love how shippou isn't just falling in line, but still holding on to his spoiled nature. the tachi is going to have their hands full. and kikyou...man she's going to go off and confront naraku on her own and cause strife between inuyasha and kagome. i just can't see inuyasha ignoring any news that kikyou is in trouble with naraku. and that i think will test inuyahsa and kagome as well as really bother sango (more in the lines as 'i told you so' than anything else)no one is having it easy in this one. i'm lokking forward to human inuyasha's noises (will that be in the next chappie?)beautiful work.
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: July 15, 2006 02:32 EDT
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Pleh, gay twins, I can only imagine what they might do to each other but that's sick and wrong and well.... just sickly wrong. Anyways update soon.
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Title: KONNICHI HA
Reviewed By: Kagome Sama On: July 12, 2006 08:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH! Nic ejob I really love this story ^_^ I would have reviewed on the first chapter but it wouldn't let me ~_~ but anyway nice job I'm loving it WOOT!
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