| "Live and Let Die (Part 3): Learning To Deal" Reviews/Comments [ 280 ] |
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Title: LOVIN IT!
Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 18:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! I LOVE THIS FAN FIC! I LOVE THE SQUELS ALSO! THIS IS JUST THE BEST THING EVER! SO HOW DID YOU COME UP WITH THE IDEA OF THE RINGS GLOWING PINK? AND I LOVED THE PART WHERE YOU WROTE HOW KIKYO GOT PUSHED ON HER ASS. I JUST WISH THAT COULD'VE HAPPENED IN THE SERIES. WELL UPDATE SOON!
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Title: Hell yeah!
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 18:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Anything good when Kikyou is getting her as kicked (sorry kikyou lovers push off) land her undead no good bad smelling to my inu pain in the hum on her ass!!!! Yeah! pumping my fist in the air laughing crazy hum anyhoo! I'm better now. this is such a cool chapter GO INU TAKE CONTROL YEAH! I'll think I'll leave this off with a I love this chapter please write more (update soon or I'll come to your house) Um! that wasn't me who said that. I swear muttering stupid evil twin always gets me in trouble. update soon plz
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Title: She Finally got what was coming...
Reviewed By: Pinkit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 00:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, an author that had the jewels to give Kikyou, what she really deserves...a good dusting off the edges, 'cause dust can really stick to clay neh? by the way didnt her azz crack? LOL Ok then, on to constructive reviewing, I love your work, i love that you put the characters in such different situations, and angst the hell out of them and then make it all better, (se inuyasha as example? aint it alot better than phone sex? Really feeling emotions oh yes)...LOL I admire you and will be looking out for voting period on the IYFG!!! Hugs & Kisses Pinkit-chan!
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Reviewed By: Inukgluvr On: November 04, 2006 19:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! This is like one of the BEST fanfics i have ever read. I was hooked from the first one. U HAVE to continue, soon! Pretty please? NOW! I'll be waiting, so HURRY! Don't 4get it was gr8 and i luved it.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 14:23 EST
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ah, poetic justice of kikyou getting knocked on her ass by kagome. proves the walking undead doesn't know everything. and telepathic sex...i don't think i've seen that one yet, and so nicely done. silly myoga (at least inuyasha would have had a hard time slapping him if he would have tried to steal some blood). i'm excited to see how the rings will enhance their growing powers since the two seem to have managed to breech distance now that they really needed to. will kohaku come to sango? how will she react since she has been so emotionally up and down anyway? will we get a happy reunion moment with inuyasha and kagome or will one of the 'testers' (*cough* kikyou) try and pulll a surprise test of some sort and thoroughly piss them off! i always look forward to more (that's what a minion is for)!
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 13:30 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha! yay! kikyou got knocked on her butt! THAT made me happy! another great chapter!
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Title: update sooooonnn!!!
Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 13:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story and i cant wait 2 see wat happens nxt....yet another amazing chapter ^_^....keep up the good work...
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Reviewed By: sessy_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 10:58 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo you updated!!! does happy dance lalala ;p this is ooone of the best fanfics ever for !!! update soon (by the way i love sess/rin pairing so can you put some of that in there i dont know how so if you cant alls good) love your fanfic sends writing vibes
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Title: plz
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 16:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update update update update update update update update very soon!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 21:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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that was good but Kagome's mom is her grandfatherl's actual daughter, not daughter-in-law...at im pretty sure. other than that it's GREAT!!! update soon plz!!! ~shigome a.k.a. dark irish sorceress
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Title: Yes
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 18:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH I love this story, although I love everything that you write. Sorry for not reviewing. I so could wait to find out about sesshomaru in the future, it's just a bouns that you put in that he's with Rin. thank you plz update soon. I hope you win every award out there.
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Reviewed By: L'amor On: October 23, 2006 16:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I applaud you, I have always loved your stories, but this is my first timre reviewing, sorry fi i never have done it before, and i want to say. YYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYY, FINALLY YAY SESSHOMARU IS WIHT RIN, ALL IS RIGHT IN THE WORLD, *ahem* ok im back now, but yes I am very happy that you made them get together in this fic, I bow to you
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie NSI On: October 23, 2006 14:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes!! I am beating my own record!!! Hooray!! Now this is a moment!! Yay!! Thank you Literary Goddess!! This is an awesome action packed chapter!! I am so thrilled by it!! And now perfectly timed and presented.. we look into Sango's mind and thoughts. So she went and had sex with Miroku because she was jealous of Kagome and Inuyasha. So the wrong reason. And poor Miroku! He thought she wanted to be with him that way because she loved him. He asked her if she was ready, he was gentle with her. She basically used him and now thinks he used her! She is gotten some wires up there in her head confused. "realized that she had done everything in her power to push the monk away from her." Well it looks like she has succeeded. He is going to avoid her now. She has sent off so many conflicting signals to him. I actually feel very awful for him this time. Exquisite!! Love it!! Boy, has Sango ever gone well into the deep end of over-reacting with this. I quite agree with Miroku on this one.. he was being supportive and loving to her. I am very pleased by the level of growth that Miroku has shown in the past couple of chapters! Very realistic and so wonderfully times. He showed compassion to Inuyasha when Kouga was a being a hot headed jerk. And I commend him on his quick thinking in associating the well, separation and getting Inuyasha down the well to safety after having Kaede about the reason why he was holding onto the well. Excellent writing!! The angst between them is palatable! Love it!! They need to work on their relationship as well. Miroku now understands about the depth of love and bond between two people. I like that, this new growth to his character! I was so happy that Miroku sucked it up and went and spoke with Kaede about his problem. I am so happy with his maturity! And Kaede to offer up that bit of advice that Sango is frightened and nervous at the speed in which the relationship has progressed. Simply Outstanding!! Kudos!! And the way they talked it out finally that was beautifully written. And very touching!! Awesome!! Whoot!! Woot!! I really liked this development with them understanding more about the way Inuyasha acted! That they will be together again when both are certain they are really ready. I love it!! And the ending scene of them just holding each other was perfect!! Please keep up the most excellent work!! Thank you Thank You THANK You so much for sharing this with us!! Can't wait for the next installment!!
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Reviewed By: Crimson Reaver On: October 23, 2006 08:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so well organised and written it's like watching the show. It's really an impressive effect. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: October 22, 2006 22:21 EDT
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i think mama is goning to end up seeing much more of her son in law than she ever anticipated at this rate. at least she knows there is no way they could ever live in the shrine. and totosai, i was so not expecting him. i always though he wasnt' quite as dense as he played.sesshy's been buying all the diamonds people have come across? are they really worth something in that time then? i'm glad the girls are sticking by kagome and inuyasha and eri seems to be backing off at least for the moment. it looks as if they have enough to deal with in the past. i don't think sango's questions on inuyasha's and kagome's relationship are going to be over yet since she's having trouble sorting out what she wants. brillant chapter as always.
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