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| "Live and Let Die (Part 3): Learning To Deal" Reviews/Comments [ 280 ] | | Pages (19): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 › » ] | Reviewed By: Crc31789 On: December 29, 2006 21:40 EST
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YAAAAY. New chapter!!! I had forgotten about what Kikyou did to him. There really is a downside to reading as many different fanfictions as I do. It's hard to keep them straight. Actually, if I read the entire thing all at ONCE it's easier. But I start getting a little confused by the ones that are still being updated. ^^" MEAN Kikyou! Those 'bands' are awesome. But I admit I had some trouble understanding your description of them. I don't know that you could have described it better, so I think the problem lies with me. I just can't quite picture the rings. But I'll take your word for it. Rings that look like Goshinboku. Very interesting. And I hope this will be the last time Kagome worries about his feelings for Kikyou, that stupid girl. :/
| Title: Great chapter! I eagerly await the next one!
Reviewed By: Phoenix7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 14:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear, Shippo just keeps getting himself into more and more trouble. He really pushed his luck this time when he tried to keep Inuyasha and Kagome's rings away from them, especially trying to blackmail Inuyasha. I can't wait to see the final chapter where Naraku finally gets what he deserves.
| Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 13:49 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. When the time comes, I think Shippo's punishment will be well deserved!! Update soon please because I can't wait for more!!! ^_^
| Title: I love your writing!
Reviewed By: Yukiinu On: December 17, 2006 21:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I began reading this story only about 3 weeks ago, and I have finished all of the chapters that you have posted so far, and for me, that is unusual, normally I woundnt have the time. For this fanfic though, I made time! It was a very absorbing story and I am dying to see what happens in the end! Thank you for takeing the time to write this wonderful story! I look forward to your next chapter!
| Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 20:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And here we are, on the next part of the reviews!! That makes it Part Two!! Yay!!! So cool!! I am sooo loving the story!! LOVE it!! Whoot!! Bravo!! The chapters are a pleasure and joy to read! Sesshoumaru is right they need to keep training with the knowledge that the final battle with Naraku is drawing even nearer than before! Glad he will give the two mates time together before they start up again. Yay! Giving both of them a nice and deserved break. Did Sesshoumaru just compliment Kagome or praise her? Shocked!!! Ah, I see the connection now from the previous chapter! That little mystery is nicely cleared up. Yay!! I am so excited while reading this chapter!! Like a long and well earned rest!! Poor Sango, can't get a break. Snickers... She should know by now that given the opening he will grope. Loved the parting comments! That was a lucky break that Byakuya only saw the "Attack" and nothing else! Oh!! I am on the edge of my seat!! It's getting more and more exciting!! Kouga told the village the assassin was killed but not by whom... taking credit... sighs... ah well... at least we know the difference! Oh Yes!! I love this... they are debating about Kagome's barrier and Inuyasha's ability to go through it. Hooray! Sesshoumaru was able to explain it perfectly!! I really like how their love makes them such a powerful team! And with each tender moment it only serves to strengthen the bonds and increase the power. How very devious of him! I wonder if Sesshoumaru will concur that they will even surpass him in power (even if it is in his mind only). Loved the way Sesshoumaru asked Sango to teach Rin how to read and write! So very much in character! I am sooo awestruck by your ability to peg this character so perfectly!! Bravo! Kudos!! Oh dear they left Shippou to watch over the meal... giggles. Wow! I mean WOW!! The description of the kiss is really hot!! Fans self... Smart Hanyou for not slicing Kagome's skirt off. Very hot! Very intense! I do hope there are no splinters threatening from the wooden walls. Cringes at thought of splinters in Kagome's butt. Ouch... Oh my, LOVED Kagome talking dirty talk to Inuyasha. Also very hot! So feral and passionate!! Awesomely Amazing!! *Gets big starry Anime eyes* I sooo squirm with admiration at the way you write the love scenes with each intenseness it can be done in!! and the way Kagome said I guess you really did miss me... too cute and funny!! Awesome!! I love it when Sesshoumaru and Kaede talk! Yes! Sesshoumaru is letting another know of his suspicions! Chuckles... Sesshoumaru really needs to understand irony when it is presented to him. Kaede had to explain she was chuckling at the expense of Naraku. ...URK!! Bad Nikkie!! Bad imaginary!! I think my mind went down the wrong road about Inuyasha's fundoushi. Chuckles... Out of curiosity... how many would Inuyasha have? And how does he get one if needed? Lol!! Thank you for answering my concerns about Kagome's butt and splinters... giggles more! Yay!! Kagome didn't mind him snicking her undies!! I still wonder what will become of this little revelation. Loved how tender they are afterwards. Darn it they are my favourite couple!! Nice to add some humour into the moment!! Great work!! Good to hear news about Jaken. Simply beyond Amazing!! How superbly this is written!! I can see Jaken wanting to be away from Shippou as much as he can. Nice, Shippou is still being spoilt. Like that Sango pointed out it to him it isn't just his attitude towards learning that is cause his problems but also his physiology. But he did act like a spoilt brat by burning the pages... I wonder what Kagome will say to that. Oh my word!! Can feel the tension! Even Sesshoumaru can sense it as can Kaede! Miroku has reappeared with Kikyou! I can see a beating for Miroku in the future. Kikyou has brought Kohaku forth!! Oh my!! I'm on the edge of my seat!! Thank you!! This is one heck of a chapter!! I can't wait for the next chapter! Whoot! Whoot!! And now for chapter 16!!
| Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 21:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And now we will commence the next grouping of reviews for you! This is totally Awesome, Literary Goddess!! I have some chapters to catch up on!! Yah!! Scampers off to do this! Okay, first we'll start with Chapter 15. Does the Dance of Joy... Sesshoumaru is rather interested in why Kikyou is back. And that Inuyasha isn't around but Kagome is. Can't say he isn't a curious puppy! I can't wait to see this little meeting. I wonder if Shippou is going to be disappointed that Rin won't be swayed and fall over in love with him like all the other village girls he has run across. Then again he wouldn't mention anything while Sesshoumaru is around. I wonder if Rin will say the same thing to Shippou... that he is immature. Nah... he has been getting better lately. That Rin is sure smart! I am soo thrilled you have kept her so true to the Manga! To Rumiko's creation! Awesome!! Kudos!! I love it!! I love that Kagome and Inuyasha can wrap each other up with their auras and love even though so far apart. I wonder if it will mean that Kagome can go through the well now without Inuyasha... will wait to see. Ah nuts. They are both getting interference... though Myouga and Totousai did leave Inuyasha alone. Looks like they'll have to state it clearly again that they'll want to be left alone to be with each other... intimate or not at times... I laughed at Kagome perspective about phone sex. That was great!! I really enjoyed that touch!! I enjoyed the conversation between Totousai and Myouga when they went back to the Sword smith's dwelling. And I was tickled by "Just what that was we witnessed out there," that was funny considering what Inuyasha was doing earlier. Giggles happily! Bravo! Enjoying this chapter so very much!! Oh my GAWD!!! Inuyasha snicked a pair of Kagome's panties!! That little Hentai Inu!! Never knew he had that in him!! I am quite pleased and thrilled by this devious revelation!! I wonder what other delicious little bonuses will come forth??? Purrs happily!! Bravo!! And many Kudos!! Whoot! The Hentai Inu!! Whoot!! I wonder if Kagome will find out he did this... and I wonder if Kagome will let him continue this or supply him with little "presents" if they can't be together or similar... rubs hands together devilishly!! Sweet, Kaede is still young enough to be a little embarrassed or uncomfortable. I really do enjoy and thrill to the way you make Kaede such a wonderful and important part of your stories! That she is a full character not a cameo type of character appearance of fleshing. Snickering over Kikyou needing two days to get over the blow to her ego. Love it!! Thank you so much Literary Goddess!! I really love and admire how realistically you have Kagome progressing with her training! So very realistic!! Awesome!! Masterfully done!! Looks like Kikyou also is seemingly wanting to (semi) get back at Kagome for the undignified ass landing. But I do agree she will make Kagome push her herself to prove herself to her ex-rival for Inuyasha. Whoot!! Bravo!! Bravo!! I have chills running down my skin after reading that Naraku's spy was watching them! Getting better and better as I read!! Wonderfully sequenced and presented!! Not going too fast nor going too slow!! Brilliant!! Sheer Brilliance!! I think I have it... It has been three days since Inuyasha and Kagome had the Mystically Telepathic Phone Sex. That is... Wow!! Inuyasha went right through the barrier as if it wasn't even there and the barrier becoming solid!! Wow!! Totally Awesome!! Yes!! Inuyasha kissed her passionately in front of the others!! Whoot!! Whoo-hoo!! I am such a need of Inuyasha/Kagome squish!! And this does more than fill that need!! Swoons!! Soooo cute!! (I forgot to mention it but thank you for having Kaede talk like everyone else. I wonder why she spoke the weird way...) Another neat trick by Kagome a solid privacy barrier. That will be really useful when they want to be alone and people seem to interrupt them. Sesshoumaru's loving greeting, sighs...
| Title: *Ditto* to Fyrloche
Reviewed By: MetsukiKaraTen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 16:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now who'd a thunk that Yasha would take care of the shoe 'issue' on his own? Fun chappie! "horny dog" indeed...lmao at that one. Sango's acceptance of Miroku's comfort was surprising, among others, but nice. I enjoyed that. And Kaede's speculation about Sesshoumaru and Rin's relationship was interesting. Where it may go, only time will tell, but she's an observant ol' crone, so it makes sense that she might consider these kinds of things in passing. And what a great day for the Hanyou and Miko, eh? I should have days like that... *sigh* and as always Momma Higurashi just takes it all in stride... what a gal!! It's awesome she doesn't have a bunch of hangups, eh? Looking forward to more! Really enjoying this fic!
| Title: Sex and shopping
Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 07:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sounds like a dream come true for you doesn't it? A day starting out with great sex, followed by shopping to your hearts content and then ending it with more great sex. Even a guy can't complain about that one! At least I wouldn't!! laughs And I know that if you had Inuyasha with you, you would probably just skip the shopping. snorts Later.
| Title: crc31789
Reviewed By: namewithheld [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 22:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I decided to stop being lazy and give you the review you deserve to keep your spirits up. Even if you don't update just for the reviews--the point is that you deserve to get them and I haven't reviewed in a long time. I like this story a lot and I'm really enjoying it. I love the connection between Kagome and Inuyasha in this story, and the writing style, the powers that have resulted from their union, and all the plot developments. It's really good. As for this chapter specifically, I liked it a lot. The scenes between Kagome and Inuyasha were just... nice. So was their day together at the mall. It was very nice ('nice' is my word, I use it whenever something is pleasant and makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside ^^"). Oh. And the part about the shoes GREATLY amused me. Mostly because the guy that has the shoes specially imported has GOT to be Sesshy, right? It's gotta be. They were just talking about him and it's just got to be. But it's funny. And speaking of funny... poor Inuyasha when he knocked over the panty rack. xD But he handled it with a lot more grace than he would've a few years ago, so *thumbs up for IY!* Keep up the good work! This is one of my favorite stories that's still running.
| Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 20:57 EST
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Eowyn Organa stop hatin. Unlike u I LOVE THE WHOLE THING!! Even the sex scences. There is nothing wrong wit it and if u don't like it fuq off. Well LOVE UR FIC and I hope u UPDATE SOON!
| Title: loved it
Reviewed By: cat demon kagome On: November 28, 2006 19:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg not tryin to be rude but HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT FIC please:) ill love u and love u foreva and eva you are like one of the greatest writters ever i am so gonna keep on readin your fic cas it is long worth waiting for but just dont take for ever or i will die my life is in your hands well in you updates well gotta i jus finished blood and tears today and it was really good i love all your fics i used to like kogua untill i read blood and tears and now i dont but im glad that kagome is finally happy i always thought that rin and fluffy would get together i never really thought she would end up being like a daughter to him well gotta go keep up the good work:)
| Reviewed By: Eowyn Organa [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 20:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm gonna be a harsh critic on this...I do think it has an interesting concept, but the many sex scenes do take away a lot from the overall story. Yes, I know Kagome and Inuyasha would be all over each other alot, but do you really have to show it so much? It does get boring after a while reading about it. Instead of inserting a sex scene whenever you need to take up some space, I recommend using to develop the plot. Some people see sex as selling, but I think it lowers the quality of the work when instead a beautiful story could be made of it. You have an interesting idea with Naraku and their new powers and all that, but your lemons are ruining the pace, so you might want to fix that if this is to become a better story.
| Title: It's like the Honeymoon they never had...have'nt had...!
Reviewed By: Pinkit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 15:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such passion, such emotion, such talent, such such such....lovely lust scenes worth every lil minute you take to read them...They way Sesshou is caring about Inuyasha, the way Rin is acting so grown up, the way Sango is reling on Miroku for moral support, and the conversations between Sehhou and Lady Kaede..."Does lil fangirl dance, hopping from one foot to another screaming your name, and "I love your mad writting skillz..." Jrm jrm...ok then, As i always say you are a very talented artist, i admire your ideas, your plots and writting skillz...Take care Cathy...love Pinkit-chan.
| Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 13:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*waterfall tears* so...beautiful...i luv ur stories!! plz continue ^_^
| Title: Great story
Reviewed By: QQ On: November 23, 2006 21:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Graet story i love it, update soon
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