| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: gaga4ue On: November 14, 2003 17:32 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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wow...this is something I've never seen written about so freely before! Yayness!
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Title: Umm..
Reviewed By: Ithilwen-as-guest On: November 14, 2003 16:49 EST
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When you say Ilandra, don't you mean Zucchini? It's a bit confusing.
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Reviewed By: coolies okayness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 07:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know what i think of your work, you're brilliant and you have the guts to write about things which others do not.
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Reviewed By: bimbo_ditz On: November 13, 2003 06:51 EST
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hiyaz this is 1 gr8 fic just printed off first 3 chaps will du the othas asap coz im in a geo lesson will review em laters coz i aint gt time 2 read em proply yet, cyaz an gud work so far! bye byez
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Reviewed By: yaya On: November 11, 2003 22:57 EST
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Wow! This is good. I did notice a few spelling errors but as you said it wasn't beta read! You wacky australians and your spelling!
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Title: Slave
Reviewed By: Starbrella On: November 11, 2003 19:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey, i just wanted to say nice job in the story...hope u update soon. I thought that this story was really...u could say unique and different, it's not like u get many stories about about a crazy vegeta and stories with Brolly in it. just not u're typical V/B story and also the fact that you added les. in this i just really wanted to congratutate u on the good job that u have done on this story...it was my first time reading somthing so dark and different. But u're story chaught my interest from the frist page that i read...keep up the good work! ^_^ u should also just check u're spelling error in ch. 27.
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Reviewed By: quira [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 18:07 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good
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Reviewed By: Lecta On: November 10, 2003 17:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE YOUR STORY! ITS GREAT! AND I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT YOU MET THE GUY WHO DOES VEGETA'S VOICE! *DROOLS* LOL. I WISH I WAS YOU THEN HEHE. ANYWAY, GREAT STORY. KEEP THE CHAPTERS COMING! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! WILL VEGETA FIND BULMA AND SAVE HER? WILL THEY END UP STILL HATING EACH OTHER OR WILL THEY FIND EACH OTHER AGAIN AND LEARN TO LOVE THE OTHER? KEEP GOING. YOU LEFT ME ON MY TOES AND I CAN'T WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER. MUCH APPRECIATED! LOL ~LECTA
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Reviewed By: geena On: November 09, 2003 04:41 EST
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nice, very nice
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Reviewed By: Geta-Chan18 On: November 08, 2003 18:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! i love ur fic. sorry, i dont really review fics...im really lazy...but im juss confused by one little thing...isnt Ilandra frieza's daughter? u kept writing her as vegeta's fiancee in this chapter...maybe im reading it wrong...ive had a long day. lol. anyway, love tha fic! ja! -geta
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Reviewed By: FRIENDLYCAT On: November 08, 2003 17:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: GMP Wolf On: November 08, 2003 13:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm lovin this fic! Sooo cool! I've never read a fic that had Vegeta act like that! Excellent style too! Great way of having an A/U and songfic at the same time! Muy bien!
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Reviewed By: mona On: November 08, 2003 13:34 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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please update asap... i totally want to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Jackque On: November 08, 2003 04:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow---thats all I'll say about this!
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Title: hellooo?
Reviewed By: d_whitesilver On: November 08, 2003 01:33 EST
Comment/Review:
Knock knock, anybody home?
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