| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Title: slave
Reviewed By: kriss On: April 21, 2004 10:59 EDT
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definately not like anything I've read. Hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: April 20, 2004 22:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is a really great fic, Saiyan Princess threw her computer out of her window, so needless to say she hasn't had internet and neither have I because I've been moving around alot lately. Anyways, This is an awsome fic and you're a great writer, so keep it up, okay? Looking forward to the next update. Koaitan Princess ** A little note to those of you that were complaining about the charecters being 'out of charecter'...It's an AU fic, charecters being diff from the origional is to be expected, so...deal with it.**
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Title: Oh My
Reviewed By: GetaGirl 247 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 22:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the darkness of this fic. I am a big fan of A/U and this is a great example of it. I would like to see you make the story to where Bulma finds out that she is pregnant with Vegeta's baby, and kill Zucchini; I can't stand that bitch. N-E way keep up the good work.
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Title: woah
Reviewed By: alexluvsvbfics [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 21:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn, that's all....damn.... i'm open and i'll read all types of lemons (except tacky ones...bleh) that was awesome, then again i love all teh lemosn you write...this story is so dark and twisted and i can;t wait till the enxt chap!! ~alex~
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Reviewed By: zappy the zebra [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 16:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Lovin' all the lovin!
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Reviewed By: bimbo n ditz On: April 18, 2004 12:11 EDT
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g8 work once agin update soon!!! cant wait for more b/v action all this otha stuff is really freeky.... 00 bring on da b/v!!! surfs up!
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Reviewed By: leonie On: April 18, 2004 07:26 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say.. I still love this fic, although I'm not a yuri fan you still did a good job. But I hope the next chapter will be about Bardock, Kakarrot, Vegeta ect. And because I have nothing better to do I decided that I'm going to read this fic all over again^_^.
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Reviewed By: Non-permanent Marker On: April 17, 2004 19:21 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmm
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Reviewed By: Tomako Briefs [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 18:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not one for yuri, but I've got something to say about homophobic people. On Monday, my entire school district is going to be in a lock out drill because of an entire church of homophobes. They're coming to every single school to denounce homosexuality.. not just gay marriage, but gay existence. BUT there are a group of us who are protesting the protesters! I'm missing out on a trip to my Granny's who I hardly ever see for the sake of the anti-protest. ^_^ Yeah, I know that didn't have to do with your chapter so here I go: not one of your better ones. There were errors all over the place and a few parts were confusing.. I was also hoping for some more about Bardock and Kakarot but what can ya do? lol
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Reviewed By: Poisoned-Tattoo On: April 17, 2004 13:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
0.0 I saw lesbian lovin... What woud mommy think? LOL! Good chapter!
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Title: slave
Reviewed By: bananda On: April 15, 2004 12:27 EDT
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Lots of new shit happening. Don't stop! Please update this twisted story!
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Reviewed By: wowee On: April 06, 2004 22:41 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...all I can say is wow! This is fantastic and original!
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Title: exellent story every time!
Reviewed By: Desi not logged in On: April 06, 2004 18:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Make a 18 and trunks ficcie pwease! Just an request cuase I know you can do it...
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Mmmmump! On: April 04, 2004 07:51 EDT
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Reviewed By: Snormy On: April 03, 2004 12:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI Lena/VG WOW!!! I am definitely impressed! I mean I always knew you had the talent and I have read some of your stuff before but this story is by far the best of the stuff which I have read! I am loving the plot line so far...I want to find out what happens with Ilandra and Frieza, is their close bond going to break over Bulma? I can't wait for your next chapter!!!! Please please please keep writing otherwise my assignment that I sacrificed to continue reading your fic will have been wasted! I hope you find inspiration soon! Good luck!!! Rose.
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