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Title: miss
Reviewed By: bulmachan50 On: April 03, 2005 20:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god it only took me 3 days to read please please write more im so hooked on ithurry up te suspence is killing me.its 01:33 03/04/05 and im thirsty for more of this story sharna-marie
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Title: WOO!!
Reviewed By: The Evil WOOHOO [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 15:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story keeps getting better and better... but i think bulma needs some fight in her. and get vegeta and her BACK!!! thanks... love! jessie
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: TKDPrincess121 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 14:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dunno, a little too short and too sweet for my tastes, but good still, a little bit more progressive. Still, what's happened to Zucchini and why is Bulma still 'grateful' to Ilandra for bringing her to Frieza's planet? I may sound a bit feminist, but why is Bulma going to allow her children to be taken without even putting up a fight? I think her character development as stopped. She needs to get some more freakin' backbone. And what's up with Brolly? Is he for or against Vegeta? Too many questions, I know, but I need answers. Update soon Lena.
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 10:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish I knew something about what had happened after Vegeta's marriage to Zuchinni or however you spell it....it was the one thing that I was hoping you wrote about! Maybe in the next chapter? Just a snippet?
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Reviewed By: alexandrea romanzesco On: March 16, 2005 20:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i feel so sorry for bulma, but i guess she's being just atd bit of a drama queen. ....wait.. that sounded rude but... i don't know how to rephrase it. and i realllly reallllly reallllly want a vegeta/goku lemon. i'm a total perve for wanted those two together for some hot sweaty one night stand but a girl can dream!! and imagine.. well loved this chapter, can't wait till vgeta finds bulma. ~alex~
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Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 21:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. I'm glad Bulma came up with a plan and wants to keep the children. The description of differing empires was greatly necessary I believe and thankful for it! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Mely On: March 15, 2005 16:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good as always! I hope that Bulma's plan will work.
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Title: hey, i love it!!!
Reviewed By: cocopuff On: March 08, 2005 20:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this a great epic i love the story can ypu please try and get them up dates out faster i understand if u cant but please try im not the most patiant person in the world :) thanks bye
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Reviewed By: alexandrea romanzesco On: March 05, 2005 19:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chappie! i feel so sorry for poor bulma but she shouldn't of left vegeta, that was a really dumb idea. and doing a trilogy with the stories would be a goood idea. ~alex~
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Title: FINALLY
Reviewed By: TKDPrincess121 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 17:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it but the chapter was too short! By the way, thanks Lena for finally gracing us w/ another chapter. I like the idea of three parts, I think it would be a lot easier for the reader and less stress for you, especially if this is going to be 100 chappies or more!! (That would be torturous, but for this fic I'd endure it!) Please update soon, and tell us what happens w/ Bulma. Please make her leave Illandra and go back to Vegeta. And please kill Zucchini. And PLEASE make Kakarot and Brolly end up together! I will love you forever!
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Reviewed By: Black Princess(not singed in) On: March 01, 2005 18:10 EST
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ok love the stroy i think you should keep it the same dont brake it up if it's over 100 chaps so what you'll have a record for chapters on media miner and mybe one of the top ten for most hits it dosent matter but it would be easier to keep it all together
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Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 01:37 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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I'm lost for words. This fic is so original and daring. I like it.
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Reviewed By: Quogmire On: February 28, 2005 22:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Weird chapter but good.
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Title: Twitch!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 22:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that whole eating your father's organs thing takes the wierd cake eats it and asks for seconds man. That was narsty! But hey regardless of that I liked this chapter alot.
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Reviewed By: Melina On: February 28, 2005 15:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. Poor Bulma! I think it's a good idea to divide the chapters into different stories. I can't wait to read more.
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