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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Alora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2010 00:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just following up my Neopets post and saying your fucking awesome and...yeah. That about explains it. WRITE MORE! MUH HA HA!
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Title: in AWW
Reviewed By: VerceraKnight (karas98) On: February 07, 2010 04:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF!!!!!OMG i cannot believe he tore ahole in her throat I mean I have heard that sayians can be bad in mating season but if this is what happed when he ist in mating. Oh my God when he is lock his A** in the gravity Room. but any way So he wanted her So much that he killed her she says "I love you" when shes "DYING" I'm sorry but even for how Vegeta Is that would have to Fu** him up. please,...tell me she doesnt Die,... because i can just imaging vegeta coming out of his rage ( orwaking up After it) to find Bulma Dead next to him. thats gonna Fu*k him up so bad. (you know hell go Balistic change supersayian and beat the Sh*T out of everyone then (because he has enough rage to do it again 100 times over) beat the Living Sh*t out of himself. and after all that hell look down at her lifless body and Final Distruction so he can join her. and i hate that Senorio running in my head so please Silence it. i would hate it to end like this ( i know its hard for someone to belive this but) if after all that she went through with him and she Still has the Abltity to say i love you for her last breath insead of " I'm finally free" then in her eyes he can do nothing wrong. and i say if hes finally found his mate.... please dont let it end like this... Cause i will just put it bluntly as i only can (cause i can't say it any other way)if this was real "This Just Fucking Sucks" for both people in this situation. not just him. i love it no matter what but i'm mindboggled by this. i had no idea that people could write something this Bazzar but do it so perfectly that it makes the person seem its just a Very dark Pert in all of us that we havent ebraced yet and seems so natural. So Human insead of (Holy shit she need to be locked up). i love it i whish to see more i relly do but if it is you wish to keep it like this. I'm not mad I'm honored. cuase of you i have found that we are not all good and just that we do have a dark side that we shy from. and i would rather know that not know because to not know is Truely Madness. Respectively Signed, Kira Lidell
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: msissyburrows [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2009 15:51 EST
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It took a few days But I read it all! And oh god was it hot! Wonderfuly written as well! But sad to see it is over is there going to more? What was his rreaction to her saying those 3 little words?? Many questions??
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Reviewed By: VicMurphy On: November 08, 2009 03:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please finish this fanfic at all costs!!! Vegeta is soooo sadistc that he puts chills into my spine when I imagine him saying or doing what you write about him!
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Reviewed By: Spaz913 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2009 15:44 EDT
Comment/Review:
I just read your fanfic for the third time... i think and update is in order.
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Reviewed By: D@wny On: August 03, 2009 06:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD! I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS FANFIC! IT WAS THEE BEST I HAVE EVER READ! BUT WAIT CAN YOU CLEAR ME ON SOMTHING...DID VEGETA KILL BULMA? I REALLY HOPE NOT...I WANT YOU TO CONTINUE THIS! FOR REALZ! I LOVE IT AND IT CAN'T STOP HERE...IM SERIOUS! YOU'RE MY HERO ^.^
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Title: blimey!!!
Reviewed By: chick from Blighty On: July 07, 2009 18:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh gosh, In the name of all that is good and holy you can not leave it there!!! i'm not going to be able to sleep for a week after reading this!!!! Is some sort of conclusion too much to ask for? Ok, now that I can breath again, on to the serious review. I just read this entire fic in 2 days (that played with the continuity a bit but oh well) and it happens to be at least the 2nd time I have read it. Aside from a few typos, which I am suprised your beta didnt pick up on, the fic is well written. I once read that in order to write a good fiction (be it fan or otherwise) having the ending mapped out is more important than having the begining or end sorted and you seem to have at least some inkling about where the story is heading. The characters attitudes are a little too changeable for my tastes but I guess in situations like the ones you put them in the ability to adapt quickly is essential. Though the whole 'Evil goku' thing seems to be a bit of character bashing but it is well constructed bashing! All in all I feel the same as I did when I watched my 'Dances with Wolves' special edition DVD for the first time and discovered that the second half of the movie was (for some inexplicable reason) on a second disk which the DVD store had neglected to give me. I believe I speak for the majority when I say that an absolution would be greatly apreciated. Afterall who would want to read a book that had the words 'to be continued' written on the last page with no sequel in sight? Oh and I apologise for my crappy spelling, I know you are an english teacher so I'll probably get a bad mark but in my defence (or condemnation) I have had the best part of a bottle of wine before I got the urge to read the last 5 chapters of your story. Your fan-girl from rainy old England. Alexia (insane_saiko@hotmail.com because I forgot my mm account name) ^_^
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Title: OMFFG-Oh my flipping fucking god
Reviewed By: frederickfox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2009 01:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, i completely understand that there was writer's block and you have a busy life. I have been in the same situation. BUT FOR THE LOVE OF ALLAH PLEASE finish this. I would send a million dollars (if I had it) to you if you finished this. i enjoy it much.
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Title: OMFFG-Oh my flipping fucking god
Reviewed By: frederickfox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2009 01:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, i completely understand that there was writer's block and you have a busy life. I have been in the same situation. BUT FOR THE LOVE OF ALLAH PLEASE finish this. I would send a million dollars (if I had it) to you if you finished this. i enjoy it much.
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Title: OMG UPDATE OR DIE
Reviewed By: Spaz913 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 21:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
... Did he kill her? Because that would be an awfully disappointing ending! Obviously, after reading 51 chapters in the span of about 3 days, I'm a fan--and I know how it feels to have some insane writer's block! That's why I stopped posting my stories online... because I was tired of getting all those "OMG UPDATE OR DIE" reviewers. When I actually FINISH my fics I will post them--but since that will take years... yeah. Anyway, less about me, more about you: excellent, superb, 'mazing, and *spills out fury of compliments* The story is so good I don't mind finding a misspelled word here or there--so please, don't worry about editing (which I know can be impossible to get past sometimes, that's why I never get anything finished, but really)! I hope everything is going well for you--having read the span of your author's note from the past, what? like, 5 years?--I get the feeling that things are either really good or they're really bad at times for you. I hope their the former. :) And I hope times are so good in fact you'll find the drive to write this again. Maybe watching a little DBZ? OMG UPDATE!!! -Spaz
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Title: holy crap
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 20:12 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhhhhhhhh write soon please i need to know what happends next and oh god poor trunks >.< leaving him with freeza if that was trunks but god please update soon, i think ive been reading this for what... 3 years now lol but anyway update soon Allways watching Chase aka Lunar_Storm
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Reviewed By: iceyunaleska [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 12:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have only recently started to read this story but found myself captivated! I read all 51 chapters in a few days, I coundn't tear myself away. I love this as a Vegeta/Bulma fic and cannot wait for you to write more - so please do!
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Reviewed By: come back! On: December 12, 2008 18:58 EST
Comment/Review:
please please please please come back and update!!
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Title: Where did ya go?
Reviewed By: kirara_sango [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2008 00:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dont leave us again! PLEASE UPDATE! I AM TRULY ADDICTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If you have a writers block......Oh please dont have one! AHHH!
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Title: where r u ?
Reviewed By: lafemevegeta On: September 26, 2008 10:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read this fic again and you still haven't updated. Please come back to us.....YOUR READERS NEED YOU!!!!! POST....POST....POST....POST....POST....PLEASE...PLEASE....PLEASE!!!!
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