| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: 53214 On: September 15, 2008 07:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG. I love the story so far. Keep up the good work. It would be nice to see how it progresses
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Reviewed By: Gardian [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 20:36 EDT
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This story is as fantastic as it was when I first found it, though not as sadistic as some of your other stories. Imagine what google can pull up. I found one of your other sites and I must say, HOLY FUCKING HELL. The "Humans..." one with Frieza and Bulma will most likely haunt me for a while. It was good in a twisted sort of way and I'm impressed, but extemely disturbed. Thanks for all the hilarious, serious, and, yes, even the disturbing fanfics. You're a great author and I think I'm going to continue with reading your other fics.
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Reviewed By: Meowm_ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 22:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is awesome! I've been reading it forever. I'm so glad that you're going to finish it! I can't wait for the next chapter. What's going to happen to Bulma?
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Reviewed By: DanceOfTheHeavens [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2008 03:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANKS FOR COMING BACK!! I read this when I was...what...15 16....but I was soooo sad when it ended but then YOU CAME BACK AND WE LOVE YOU FOR IT :3
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Title: Speechless...
Reviewed By: DanceOfTheHeavens [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2008 03:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm addicted... x3 I love this...as a person who doesn't like Vageta I almost passed on your fanfiction...BUT fate stepped in and I gave you the benefit of the doubt...LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED IT. Bulma and Vageta make BDSM seem sooooo hot~
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Title: Still....???
Reviewed By: darksoulshinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 03:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, the last time I read this was back in High School...!! I didn't think you weren't gonna update anymore...!! =,= Hmm...I suck at reviewing... Great update. Even if I'm not into the bondage, yaoi, yuri etc...=/ It's still great, keep up the good work. (Funny thing is that the only way I could read fics at the time were by printing them from the school library, and chyea, I've got this huge pile of your stuff in my room ^_^;; Meh, i've got a laptop now, so chyea...xD)
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Reviewed By: not a member On: August 10, 2008 22:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To: The Little Author that Could -- You Can! I love this story, it is magnificently well written, and I'd really like to see you continue (as well as everybody that has reviewed). I'm glad to see that you're back after years away...please continue with this, I understand you're a busy woman, but don't leave us hanging...
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Title: Great Lemon
Reviewed By: lafemevegeta On: August 03, 2008 14:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great entrance for Vegeta and fab opening dialog coming from Vegeta. I can't wait for his reaction to Bulma's confession of love. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Meowm_ [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2008 10:32 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is so good! I'm so glad you're continuing this at last - I've been following this fic forever. I can't wait to see what happens!
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Reviewed By: Bretex On: August 01, 2008 16:39 EDT
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Omg, i love this story! Finally they met each other =) Plz continue, addicted ... ;D
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Title: Kick A$$ Story
Reviewed By: Blackhat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 01:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just spent the last 3 hours reading this on a dial-up connection. I hope you get a chance to update soon. This has got to be one of the best A/U fics that I have ever read and believe me I have been reading these for years. Excellent command of spelling and grammar. Keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: jess jess On: July 30, 2008 00:50 EDT
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i've been with slave since the beginning. i've read and re-read is a few times, and it never gets boring. these new chapters are amazing, maybe even better than the last! the relations between b&v and b&k intrigue me. please keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: jess jess On: July 30, 2008 00:49 EDT
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i've been with slave since the beginning. i've read and re-read is a few times, and it never gets boring. these new chapters are amazing, maybe even better than the last! the relations between b&v and b&k intrigue me. please keep writing!!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: hexgoblindancer666 On: July 27, 2008 16:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are amazing! please write more befor i start going through withdrawls.
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Reviewed By: goodknight On: July 27, 2008 14:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story i just started reading it and i went through the whole thing. I just couldn't stop reading it. i really hope you update soon =)
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