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Reviewed By: azn-saphirestar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 17:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey... before I didn't mean Ch27... I meant 26, but besides that I finished your sotry. I admit I am a Yuri lover and an insest lover... but then again... I still enjoy the Bulma/ Vegeta lovemaking. I hope Bulma gets out of there... but then again this isn't a mary-sue fic eh? Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: stryderf0 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 15:05 EDT
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dam brolly is so deprived. Just wondering is brolly stronger than frieza?
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Reviewed By: azn_saphirestar On: July 12, 2005 15:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OKay okay... I know I'm not done with your story... but I just wanted to tell you that Ch22 and Ch27 have the same name 'Secrets'. Sorry, and I'm also not logged in... damn MM.org. I'll review as soon as I'm done with the story!! Sorry again!!!
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Reviewed By: Jessica Spellman On: July 09, 2005 20:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES this is finally getting back into some good old dirty sex though if I may say I think it could have been a little more detailed I always wondered about ice-jin and there equipment but hey thumbs up ya gave it a good try... Its a great fic and thanks for updating it... Plus please tell me there's going to be more b and v soon cause I'm kinda jones'n here...
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Reviewed By: Alexandrea Romanzesco On: July 09, 2005 20:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. that was odd and really, really messed up but i totally read it. i have a screwed up mind. i feel so sorry for bulma, she can't find any hapiness in anything. truthfully, if i was her, i'd be with vegeta, other than the fact that he's gorgeuos, he wasn't a deceptive witch. but that's my thoughts. ~alex~
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Title: Uhhhhh
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 19:27 EDT
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Excuse me... *Walks out of the room and has a freak out* Ugh Uhhh Holy....what was that? This plot takes any more twist and I may develop a permanant twitch. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Mely On: July 09, 2005 19:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did not see this coming! So are Ilandra's feeling fake when it comes to Bulma? I'm happy you update and I hope your luck will change soon.
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: July 09, 2005 14:56 EDT
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dear god of the high hevens, that was descusting, ewwwww!!!! poor bulma, brolli get her out of that sick place!!!
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Title: wAHHHH
Reviewed By: The Evil WOOHOO [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 13:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
may i so bodly say, good mother fucking job????? yay! u updated! *snaps for vegeta goddess!!!!!* mucho love for you. UPDATED SOONN!!! por favor!
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Title: Finally!
Reviewed By: DBZBoyLuver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 11:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Finally another chapter! I love this story! I really hope you finish it!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mallie3 (not logged in) On: July 09, 2005 10:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! So that is how they came up with the embryo to put in Bulma was from doing...that!! Now thats nasty to have sex with your Father...I wonder how she could do it! Ew!! I hope Brolly can get her out of there soon!!! Update soon!!!! :)
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: KarineD On: June 06, 2005 01:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! i love it. I know its hard to update, but im so entangled in it all. Please try your hardest! Becuase i simply love this FIC!!! I started reading it a while ago and now im done with what you've written. I find it all fastinating and wonderful. Please update (once more) and i look forward to reading the rest of the fic, and what you write in the future. Thanks! Stay wonderful and keep writing! Love ya!
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Reviewed By: Jenny again On: May 03, 2005 22:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wrote a comment in another one of your storys but it was supose to be in this one. But just like other people have said im hooked keep writing lol. Your one of the best so keep it up. i hope vegeta finds bulma soon. wink wink. lol
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Reviewed By: Jenny again On: May 03, 2005 22:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wrote a comment in another one of your storys but it was supose to be in this one. But just like other people have said im hooked keep writing lol. Your one of the best so keep it up. i hope vegeta finds bulma soon. wink wink. lol
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: B. On: April 13, 2005 23:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fanfic. It's great. I have been reading alot latley and now aday's I don't find any fics I like. I have only found two that I really love. And well your's is just great. It's kinda a shocker, because I usually don't like fic's that have Vegeta as a well...rapist..There's no other way to put it. But the way you have Bulma enjoying it and all..Well it add's light to this whole thing. I don't like depressing story's. So great job so far. I also love how you guy's write. I don't like people who use simple word's and simple stuff...it's just too...well...simple and boring. You's guy's are doing a great job. Keep up the great work...I haven't even gotten close to finishing up the fic so be proud that I liked it and I'm only on the 4th chapter. Good luck with your other fic's and now I'm off to finish it.
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