| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Title: once again
Reviewed By: jessica spellman On: February 28, 2005 11:30 EST
Comment/Review:
i kinda felt like i had missed a chapter. this fic is the best one of my very favs. so i know that i didnt but i would have liked to have known about bulma finding out and all and the pain she felt. as for breaking it down i think that may be a good idea its is a long fic and what ever it takes to keep you up dating is kewl with me.
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Reviewed By: S. Fujin On: February 25, 2005 22:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!! NOW!!!
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Reviewed By: Zirra On: February 22, 2005 22:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To tell ya the truth, I'm not really into the whole lemon thing, I just kinda skip over those, but your story really is very original compared to the other slave fics...Damn you!!! You ended it right when it was getting good!!! Suffer the wrath of my evil pink flying monkeys!!! Bwahahahahahahahahahahahahaha *cough*...hee hee, excuse me...Please update soon!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sassy On: February 17, 2005 14:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fanfiction iam addicted to it please please update as fast as you can \\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\
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Title: Over already!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 04:22 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. Bondage, blood lust, very nice. I have to say it is the most different and original B/V I've ever read. The whole Brolly Ilandra thing is kinda confusing though. You have to update please!
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Title: 21- Consider This
Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 11:27 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHA! Another great song! I fucking just listened to this song yesterday! Man I love filter! ANd I love your taste in music too!
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Title: chapter 19 Bondage
Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 16:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it. don't feel weird. And also I wrote a NIN songfic and have a mulitparter called slave sream and use the lyrics as chapter titles. A lot of NIN songs remind me of Vegeta.
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Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 18:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your version of Vegeta. It seems he would be like that if he didn't grow up on Frieza's ship. Maybe not the cutting while having sex stuff, and I would figure Bulma to be the type either, maybe likes some spanking- why the hell am I babbling? anyway, I like the fic. I like how Vegeta can just talk instead of having every sentence forced out like he's being interrogated. It's nice.
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Title: Slave
Reviewed By: mlf On: January 19, 2005 12:04 EST
Comment/Review:
ok so she's pg with both saiyan and ice-jin baby and why can't vegeta take his wife like he did bulma...update soon
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Reviewed By: vegetas slave On: January 13, 2005 15:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great chao it would also be GREAT if u could speed up just a smige thanks bye :)
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Reviewed By: ivy rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 00:13 EST
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That was so totally rad! I wait for your next installment with bated breath.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 22:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great ^_^ i had no idea vegeta was really going that lol that was the last thing i exspected man if only vegeta could know that bulmas prego and for that matter did they take trunks out god i hope not if thoughs fuckers did theyed have to deal with me (HAHAHAHAHAHA) lol well anyway hurry and write more please im allways watching for update Bethie
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Title: YAY an update!
Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2004 08:33 EST
Comment/Review:
Thanks for updating. Please do so again soon. ^_^ The chaps was kinda ..... >.< not enough. Need more info... Did Vegeta really do that mind crap to Bulma??????? GACK! need more! **huddles in chair and waits**
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Title: Hmmm
Reviewed By: Laredith On: December 02, 2004 21:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there. I'd just like to say that I've read your story and I think that it's quite good. I really like how you've manipulated Vegeta's character. It makes him much more interesting compared to the ususal "conflicting-emotions lonely guy". Although, I have a couple little suggestions, well rather comments. Firstly, I was just wondering about "suit" in earlier chapters. Did you mean suite? I thought so but I didn't know if you were making a new word for it or something. Also, I'm definetly not a homophob, I just feel that the homosexual relationships in this story are a little clichè and predictable and don't fit into the story all that well. However, other than those two things, I love it. It's original, creative and definitly inventive. I would of never thought to make Vegeta and Bulma SM addicts. So, all in all, great story and please, keep writing! I think I might read some of your other stories. -Laredith P.S...please take Bulma back to Vegeta. yeah, I'm that sappy. He's so gloomy:( Please don't let him stay with Zucchini, it's bad karma. lol. Later
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Reviewed By: come on On: November 24, 2004 02:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on come on! more more more!
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