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Title: ch22 Kandya8806@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: KanSol On: October 02, 2004 21:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She's pregnant isn't she? I really love this story. So sorry this is the first time I'm reviewing. I had so many great thoughts and comments to write, but alas! Any ways this is JUST the story I'm looking for. I'm so tired of reading those BV get togethers were they are all lovey dovey. Finally some pain, and I think you're doing an excellent job with the BDSM. One thing is every so often you also 'typo' "her," but other than that your spelling is on the money. I'll probably end up reading this story many times over, and thanks for doing such a great job for writing. P.S. Please update. Oh yeah, now that I think about, I'm really not a songfic kind of girl, but I see your purpose of putting lyrics in so, I guess I'll just have to get ove it. That's it for now.
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Reviewed By: Mely On: October 01, 2004 01:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I didn't see that one coming. Very interesting.
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Title: holy crap
Reviewed By: alexandrea romanzesco On: September 30, 2004 20:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy crap, you reall yknow howto twist a story don't you. well, can't wait till the next chappie. ~alex~
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Title: slave
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 13:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm kinda sad for bulma. vegeta getting married and is with that thing.and know she's pg and vegeta doesn't know about it.and then to top it there going to put another egg in her.this story is going in all kinds of directions...i guess i'll wait and see..maria
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Reviewed By: upset On: September 30, 2004 13:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story used to be really good but the last few chapters have absolutley sucked. I am hoping it improves cuz i'm sick of reading this.
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Reviewed By: Vicious G On: September 29, 2004 19:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow - your writing style changes so much in this story! It's so funny to read your earlier chapters and to compare them with your newer chapters! You become so much more descritive and you begint to really see what the characters are thinking and feeling! Great job and I NEED to read more soon!
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Title: what happened?
Reviewed By: vegetarae On: September 29, 2004 13:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love slave but i need you to update soon. what happened to adultff site? i cant get into it. is it still around or is something up? well keep up the great writing. i cant wait to see what zucchini does
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Reviewed By: blah blah blah On: September 26, 2004 01:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Gettin bored waiting for updates! YOU gonna be long?
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Reviewed By: Lei Lei On: September 25, 2004 18:44 EDT
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dude you really need to update!! and SOON!! this story is soo awesome but you wont update!! pleez do it soon! ttfn!
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Reviewed By: tommmy On: September 23, 2004 22:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry up and update man! I need some more action between B and V!
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Reviewed By: KarineD On: September 23, 2004 21:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE! I NEED TO READ!!!! thanks a bunch!
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Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 23:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, that was really really good. It's good to see an update on this fic again. It really is great. Keep up the good work. And, if you could check out my fic and let me know what you think, I'd be really grateful. The name of my fic is Fallen Angels. It's an origional. Thanks. Ja'ne
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Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 21:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's amazing, I loved how you inserted Zucchini's thoughts into the story, it really added some depth to her. Hm, maybe they should just admit the obvious to one another and be w/who they want. Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: baby snake On: September 14, 2004 00:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on come on come on! Update update update! Don't make me give you the baby snake bite! *blinks cutely* Pwease!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Bethie On: September 13, 2004 22:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats getting really really good ^_^ write more im allways waiting bethie(lunar_storm)
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