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Reviewed By: Mely On: July 26, 2008 04:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing chapter! Great job with the lemon scene. As always you did a great job writing this chapter. I cannot wait to read what happens next.
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Title: YES I AM REVIEWING AGAIN!
Reviewed By: kirara_sango [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 03:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this recent chapter! It was so....LEMONY! I like this lemon its so fricken great! Keep it up! Last night I did not go to bed until I read this whole entire story again! Oh it was worth every minute of no sleep! AND YES THIS CHAPTER WAS WORTH THE WAIT! I dont care that I waited years for this! It was worth it! But please...Please dont do this to me again hahaha another long wait would kill me! LOVE THIS CHAPTER! Keep up the AWESOME writting!
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Title: HAPPINESS
Reviewed By: lafemevegeta On: July 24, 2008 15:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I AM SO GLAD YOU ARE STILL WRITING!!!!!!! I guess that was some honeymoon since it's been a whole year since your last update. That is wonderful. Does your husband enjoy anime also? Is he a Bulma fan? Anyway I am just happy to see this fic will be completed. Great move with the Freiza escape, it took great imagination to pull that off. I can't wait to see what will happen in chapter 51. I haven't read this in so long that I actually read tis whole fic from 1-50 in a couple of days all over again so I can follow your wonderful storyline once aain. Fabulous dialog, can't wait to read much more. Until then...cee ya married teacher lady.
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Title: YOUR BACK
Reviewed By: kirara_sango [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2008 03:09 EDT
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YOUR BACK AND YOUR STORY IS SOOOO GREAT! It has been such a long time since you have updated but I am enjoying every chapter of this magnificent story! I am so happe you are back! And congradulations and marriage and teaching =] I would love to have you as a teacher! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My favorite in the world! Not even lying! I love it and as soon as I get enough paper, I am going to print it and keep it in my room for ever! I love it so much, if I have not said that already! Thank you so much for writting it! The best story in all of the world! ALL OF IT! and again, congradulations!!!!
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Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 16:14 EDT
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and oh yeah...i forget...the updates were great...although, I really miss the bulma/vegeta action...but hey, I'm a hopeless vegeta/bulma fan...I can't help it!!!! Anyway, even without my desired vegeta/bulma...the updates were awesome!! thanks! In dutch--> dikke kus and in english --> big kissies EV
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Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 16:11 EDT
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YOU'RE BACK!! ohh you just deserved a lot of huggies and kissies from me!! I'm SO glad you're updating again!! I admit I had already given up on this story but I'm thrilled you proved me wrong!! I love this story, I am very very happy for you because of your upcoming marriage (I'd really wish to know what your dress looks like..I just KNOW it's perfect) and I, of course, can't help but hope that you update soon!! Much lovies EV
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Reviewed By: Mely On: July 11, 2008 02:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Me doing the happy dance!) Glad you are updating again. I really missed reading your stories. Congrats on all of the good things that are happening in your life :)
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Title: xD
Reviewed By: Maro On: July 10, 2008 14:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing!! In was a little wary when I saw the new chapter notice in my email the first time. But you're really updating! In small, but quick bursts. :P I'm thrilled. I loved reading this story all that time ago and it's still as enthralling as ever. :) I'm looking forward to future chapters and I'm so glad you're back! Haha. As always, it's well written, the story flows well, and despite the length of the chapters the plot continues to advance! (I was starting to wonder if Bulma would ever get away from Frieza myself, to be honest. xD) Anyway, congratulations and welcome back!!
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Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 14:15 EDT
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ahh so Kakkarote finally found them. poor brolly! he was so nice too. well i wonder whats going to happen next. can't wait! keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: TexRLos [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 08:34 EDT
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this chapter is ok, but you could reaally update faster so you can finish it quickly and never worry about updating again LOL anyways, when is the next one coming out?
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Title: Read Me!!
Reviewed By: blue haired beauty On: April 21, 2008 07:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well let me tell you that your a great writer, and have a lot of imagination.. i mean its a beautiful story and i really do hope that you would be able to continue writing it till the end, and expressing all your ideas... i really love the part when Bulma is angry with Ilandra ( She should be, after all she kind of betrayed her right?) Ok,Ok but the Vegeta/Kakkarot part was.... how can i saw.. Disgusting, eww i can t imagin goku and Vegeta... i really am waiting for the ending, when Bulma confronts Vegeta... if you could put in some anger and compressed emothins it would be the greatest ending .I find it kind of entertaining when Bulma fights with someone, they are after all new ideas.. hehe... I really do hope to see more of your writing, they are highly entertaining... Don't keep people waiting the ending, coz belive me its hearthbreaking..lol... Keep it up :P
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Reviewed By: earlsblueeyedangel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 02:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story, definatly different than most that I have read. There were a few spelling errors, but that is likely to happen when you get on a roll. Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: bzgrela On: September 21, 2007 05:05 EDT
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love your story... i see you haven't updated in a long while, your story is too good to be left unfinished. hope to hear more soon. and of course, when is B/V gonna happen again?
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: mynameisevile [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 01:18 EST
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great story u got here... and willl u return the favor by reviewing my fic? its a dbz fic, called unrequited feelings... cool :)
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Reviewed By: guyan0/katie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 10:09 EST
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I've just submitted a fanart inspired by this fic. I would love if you would tell me what you think of it. It nothing too naughty or a particular part of your fic. It just made me feel creative. Love your work
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