| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: TFSrules [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2011 11:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A most amazing tale! Vegeta is somewhat more sadistic than I would like, but, that is the intriguing draw of this fic. I hope that continuing isn't a hardship for you, because this is so worth waiting for. Update when you can, please; your enamored fans will be here waiting... |
Reviewed By: Karim On: December 04, 2011 09:06 EST
Comment/Review:
hey please update...I've beenn waiting for half a year now...again T_T |
Reviewed By: Ulla On: November 20, 2011 14:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! I allready read the story 3 times!! and i need to know how i ends! This fic i really my all time favorit :) |
Reviewed By: fuurin kazan On: October 03, 2011 13:20 EDT
Comment/Review:
helloo update please -__- |
Reviewed By: chickenwings On: September 08, 2011 13:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Can't stop reading it over and over again :P |
Reviewed By: tomorrowperfume [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2011 03:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started this fanfic on a Sunday morning around 11AM and I just finished it around 2AM on Monday. The story is just that intoxicating. And do you know how I found your story? It is the #1 viewed DBZ fic on mediaminer - twice as many views as the second-most viewed fic. Think about that: people who have been coming back for years, hoping against hope that you've put up another chapter, given us something more to read. In a way I don't want it to end, but I refuse for there to be nothing more. You have to keep writing! Anything else would be a crime! VG, this story spans years of your life, and anyone can see that you've poured a lot of yourself into it. Your A/N were always informative, giving us a peek into the creative mind that has taken our hearts and minds on this adventure. We don't know where we're going to end up, but it would be cruel to leave us hanging. There are some strangely glaring word choice/grammar errors in a few of the earliest chapters, and I've seen at least two chapters where you used Ilantra's name instead of Zucchini's. If you want or need someone to clean that up, please let them - or me - do it. Fandom has a bigger job for you, and that job is to finish this fic if it kills you! |
Reviewed By: chibiterasu On: August 24, 2011 04:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
hey please update :( your story is great! |
Reviewed By: Reijna On: August 11, 2011 16:35 EDT
Comment/Review:
This chapter made me cry :( you have such a good way of expressing the charas feelings mwuaahh I luvit. Please update soon |
Reviewed By: UPDATE!! On: August 09, 2011 13:06 EDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon :3 I'm sooooooo addicted to this story. |
Reviewed By: mops Ian On: August 04, 2011 16:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice one xoxo please update soon |
Reviewed By: kagu On: August 03, 2011 15:39 EDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon ;) saiyan sandwich....yum yum rawrrr. you did a great job with this chapter! I loved reading it thx |
Reviewed By: Nanatsuya On: August 03, 2011 15:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's wonderful reading this story. You did an amazing job!! Just WOOOOWWWWW!!!! I'm so glad you still keep writing and keep this fic interesting and exiting. You're my godess ~@__@~ Hope you get well soon and have friends and family who support you in bad times (the death you wrote about). xox |
Reviewed By: Maryjean24 On: July 11, 2011 17:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love dis fanfiction it's da best....I love how u write.....so plz don't stop writin fanfics bout bulma nd vegetal....I can't wait until da next chapter....nd in ur fanfic is vegeta gonna forget his pride nd just tell bulma dat he does love dat she is his is life....I don't know but u should do that |
Reviewed By: leah2974 On: June 23, 2011 23:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
You're wrong; you're very good at writing angst. ;) |
Title: Almost Forgotten
Reviewed By: frederickfox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2011 08:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know you are tired and probably don't have a beta but I am a grammar nazi. I had to reread everything and I love, love, love your story. It is very different and I enjoy that it isn't the same old story written by everyone else. Yes, there are many enslavement stories but none like this. I really like the Stockholm Syndrome but she doesn't even realize it. Survival is key. But just wanted to tell you what a joy it has been to read this and hope it never ends |
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