| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: The_Labris On: March 23, 2006 02:47 EST
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'Sweet Dreams' is totally by the Eurythmics. Otherwise, I'm completely enjoying the fic.
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Title: COOL!!!!
Reviewed By: rdsjr_1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 22:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story, i love it so far, hope you continue soon
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Reviewed By: Divine Vampire On: February 20, 2006 22:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please don't quit! Your fanfiction is the the only stuff I'll read anymore because you actually have talent as a writer!
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Reviewed By: oe On: February 19, 2006 01:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
ppppppppppppppppppppppppppllllllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeezzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzz right more
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Reviewed By: ehu On: February 16, 2006 03:05 EST
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i love your story! please update. it has the most interesting plot line and the hottest scenes *winks*.
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Reviewed By: alexandrea romanzesco On: January 30, 2006 20:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm.. so Nixot seems like a soon-to-be important character.. it was a nice chapter, i like the museum, althugh it was creepy.. i'll be sure to draw you..erm..something.. i'm not that great an artist even though both my brothers, my mom, and my sis are phenomenal at it... i'll probaly get my friend chels to draw something, she drew me a bitchin' picture for my birthday.. ~alex~
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Title: Reunited
Reviewed By: TT On: January 30, 2006 10:38 EST
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I had thought she will be reunited with Vegeta this chapter. Please bring them back together soon. Happy Birthday!
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: January 29, 2006 19:02 EST
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happy birthday for saturday =D
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Lunar_storm(tis me name here forgot to login xD) On: January 29, 2006 17:05 EST
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happy birthday i know im a lil early but yeah ^_^ anywho this story is good and i cant wait for it to be done and i can understand not being motivated enough i think id get tired of writing too so just ummm please finish this story and youll be all done ^_^ update soon please BethieK
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 13:52 EST
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She is brave! I can't wait to see what she does now.
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: thoughtless [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 08:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, happy birthday for saturday hun, have a good one! this fic was a little disappointing compared to the other fics but overall it was still a good fic. i enjoy all of your other fics, it will be sad to not be able to read your fics anymore. make the last of em great babes. xxxthoughtlessxxx
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Reviewed By: Manda On: December 14, 2005 01:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read some of this story on fanfic a long time ago. I finally found it again thanks to mien lil sis xD Anyway, I love your fic. I was never a b/v fan mostly because all the stories are cliche. Anyway, you better update soon because I want to see vegeta and bulma get back together! I can stalk you you know? And become a flamer.. Mmm!
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Reviewed By: White Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 02:21 EST
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AHHHHHHHHHH i may have to jump off a bridge now, IM SO FRUSTRATED!!! jeez...*grumble* freakin' computer *sigh*(-_-;) BE PATIENT WITH ME.............: Okay, this is the and DBZ fanfic I've read, and it's soooo good, I mean usually I just read Inuyasha(Inuyasha ROCKS and I heart him), but this fic is really good:D
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Reviewed By: White Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 02:17 EST
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Jeezums sorry about that, it keeps on cutting off, okay im determind to FINISH MY REVIEW...heh hem, anyways as I was saying...: Okay, this is the first and coolest DBZ fanfic I've read, and it's soooo good, I mean usually I just read Inuyasha fics(Inuyasha ROCKS and I
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Title: you must continue!
Reviewed By: White Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 02:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this is the first and coolest DBZ fanfic I've read, and it's soooo good, I mean usually I just read Inuyasha fics(Inuyasha ROCKS and I
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