| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Title: Nostalgia
Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2011 16:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been wonderful reading this story again. I've started from the beginning and once again find myself eagerly awaiting updates. If you ever do want a beta, I'd be happy to do it again for ya. |
Title: slave
Reviewed By: eva luna On: June 06, 2011 14:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your writing! I've read the whole story twice now! They way u make Vegeta so evil! its sexy! Love it keep it up!!!!!!! 9000 thumbs up lol |
Reviewed By: Gohansonna On: June 06, 2011 08:18 EDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! I want a hot saiyajin sandwhich! Cant wait! |
Reviewed By: Suspenseful! On: June 02, 2011 23:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am absolutely in love with your work! All I ask is please don't give me this big of a cliffhanger an not write again for a year :( !!!!! I mean it's killing me right now wondering what is going to happen and what Vegeta is going to do with his "broken toy" |
Title: Grand
Reviewed By: Anberlin On: June 02, 2011 15:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Though short, I quite enjoyed this chapter. It seems like a Midsummers night dream is coming but with a twist; she loves Vegeta who wont admit to loving her whilst Kakorot has already admitted it. This fiction has been my most favorite of all time. It is really hard to find a story that catches my dark interests and this one certainly catches them all where the other lack. "Hot Saiyan Sandwich", sounds yummy. ;) |
Reviewed By: VegetaloverLaLa On: June 02, 2011 10:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please please please give me more!! Don't wait months for another chapter!! I only found this story last night and I stayed up all night long reading all of it! I'm addicted!! And it takes a lot to get me addicted to a story but since youve done it you need to post more soon!!!! I love ur stories! Thanks!! |
Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2011 20:18 EDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry about all the stuff going on but you've done a great job with this chapter nonetheless. I'm glad that Vegeta is finally realizing that he did something wrong this time, even if he's always been a bastard it's nice to see him actually being punished for his actions. Very sad for Bulma having glimpses of her anger coming and being swept away by all the fear. I wonder how Vegeta will remedy the situation. Can't wait 'til next time. |
Title: "768 Reviews" says it all
Reviewed By: PrettyLintu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2011 17:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was on the edge of my bed reading this, My heart actually pounding at Bulma's condition and Vegeta's thoughts! "Hot Saiyan Sandwich" Lmao! good forward to it! xxx |
Title: Wonderment
Reviewed By: Zakiyra On: June 01, 2011 04:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, nothing can describe the hurt and anger I feel toward the Saiyans for doing that to Bulma! You have really made a name for yourself in the fanfic history book as one of the greatest authors of a DBZ fic! Such drama and angst, and love and death! Oh Bulma! I can't wait for the nxt chapter and the end. I know what you mean, this economy is not getting anybetter. Im in the South and there are barely any jobs here due to high inflation and many migrants from the North and West trying to look for jobs here. |
Reviewed By: Amazing! On: May 19, 2011 10:39 EDT
Comment/Review:
That is an amazing chapter! I loved it! This whole story is awesome, but ch. 56 is even more so! Vegeta is such an evil little bastard, but that's what makes him so intriguing. I'm so excited for the next chapter! Please, please, please update soon!! :) |
Title: AAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: garbageoftruth On: May 18, 2011 01:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just started reading this fic this week. I've been obsessed with it, and this last chapter was perhaps my favorite. I've been talking to my bf about it constantly. I envy your talent! |
Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Anberlin On: May 09, 2011 00:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I quite enjoyed this chapter. I was totally blind-sided by it. I love the way you keep everything interesting and everything is a surprise to read. When I think the story is becoming predictable, you change it right up. You have a very unique writing style and it's 100% original. This is my favorite fanfic of all time and I hope you continue to keep writing it. Vegeta is quite possessive, but he isn't stupid. He may be considered an asshole in this fic, but that is what Bulma gets for trying to leave him. I doubt this will convince her to never disobey him again, though, but now she knows what could happen if she tries anything. Will this boost her courage on her secret plan with the bombs or will it make her think twice. You leave me with so many questions, Vegeta_Goddess! Anyways, keep it up and I hope to read the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: AmyRose92 On: May 07, 2011 06:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
OoOoOo Vegeta's such a DOUCHE! Bulma's so traumatized that she forgot who ordered Kakarot to do it in the first place! I feel so bad for Kakarot. He honestly does care for her, but he was just a pawn in the way in Vegeta's sick mind games. lol Seriously Vegeta's waaay too possessive of her! xD Great job on the chapter! I wonder what's gonna happen between Bulma and Kakarot afterwards. I hope she can forgive him (if that doesn't sound crazy enough xD) |
Reviewed By: lisara On: May 06, 2011 11:10 EDT
Comment/Review:
pls update I want to know the ending of this fic!!!!! I dont care how manny spelling mistakes you make just UPDATE!!! |
Reviewed By: taneeh On: May 02, 2011 10:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved reading it. thanks a lot -hearts- |
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