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Title: azn_sakura17
Reviewed By: azn_sakura17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 19:47 EST
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Argh! I can't add my pictures to my fics like u did!! I was wondering if you could send me a review showing/telling me how i can do it. Send review to any of the stories by azn_sakura17.
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Reviewed By: Baby Bloom Boy On: November 22, 2004 22:07 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GreaT CanT WaiT FoR MorE!
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Title: sighhhhh.
Reviewed By: Carla121 On: November 22, 2004 16:37 EST
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OMG! Lena we really need an update!! I'm starting to forget how the story goes!! Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: che lee [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 02:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is the best!!!!!!!!!!Iv spent the last 2 months reeding it. I bage you update the story plez O GOD PLEZ well seeya
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Reviewed By: Lady Kimonra [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 20:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome story as of right now. But please update soon im ready to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Leeeeeena On: November 11, 2004 19:02 EST
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Sorry the updates are taking so long guys! I will try to be quicker witht he updates!
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Reviewed By: golbatgirl1 On: November 11, 2004 00:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this Fic. It's #1 on my list so far...Keep writing...and PLEASE UPDATE IT SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to know what happens to Bulma.
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Reviewed By: bob brown [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 20:39 EST
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veryvery good, byt where are the promised updates -hmmm?
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 16:48 EST
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Oh very nice ^_^ Bulma is sooo sub bonded she can't escape. Liking it! Here is my question.. is Vegeta having fanstys of his own.... beyond thinking about his little play toy? BTW thanks for writting this.. I love a good AU and this works for me LOL. BDsm is so much more than what people think. Nice that you show the struggle she is having to break the bond.... keep it up and update soon please.
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Reviewed By: blue beetle On: October 25, 2004 20:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah...maye you should try writing some more plot and a little less sex? This is really bad because you put two girls together and then you make Vegeta get married! What's next? Vegeta and Goku? You write likea whore!
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Title: still waiting......
Reviewed By: carla121 On: October 25, 2004 16:44 EDT
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OK, we've all been patiently waiting for the next chapter to this fic, but I want it now (whining). PLEEEEEASE write soon.
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Reviewed By: vegeta_goddess On: October 14, 2004 06:54 EDT
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Sorry 'bout the lack of updates lately people! I will try to update soon!
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Reviewed By: Carla121 On: October 13, 2004 17:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't like this chapter b/c I just didn't like Bulma's character. She's kind of a bitch. I mean, I didn't like her attitude, killing a helpless baby just b/c she thinks Vegeta's an ass. Whatever. I also didn't like that Vegeta got married to Zucchini, and that you gave me inside info into her head. I wanted to continue to think of her as a bitch. lol So, while I think this chapter kind of stunk, I WILL continue reading this fic, if only to read the ending. Happy writing.
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Reviewed By: Blingbling clown boy On: October 13, 2004 17:11 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I woul really lie to know what inspired this fanfic? Dreams? sexual fantasies? Hmmm?
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Reviewed By: Carla121 On: October 13, 2004 16:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the name of the dark-haired woman, it's pretty. I've enjoyed reading this, b/c after chapter 29 or so, I noticed that it picks up the pace again. The only thing I've been noticing that you often do is confuse the characters' names. For example, you often write "Ilandra" when you mean "Zucchini". (Great parallel to Vegeta by the way;) Other than this one and a few other spelling mistakes, nothing is wrong with this fic. I do hope you'll continue the storyline, and write it well.
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