| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: ASM On: April 02, 2004 07:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon!
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Title: It SUX
Reviewed By: Christyx On: April 02, 2004 01:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't say this is a great V/B fanfic....mainly because there is no build up and it sounds like many other "Bulma is slave on Vegetasei" fanfics I've read. The only difference is the constant S/M which gets boring after having readit in EVERY FREAKING CHAPTER!!!
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Reviewed By: A Senile Muppet On: April 01, 2004 04:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey chicka, just stopped by to say that I love this fic and I hope you'll be updating soon! I want to see something happen between Ilandra and Bulma! They seem to be falling in love...it's cute!
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Reviewed By: bimbo n ditz On: April 01, 2004 04:23 EST
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plz plz plz update soon!!!!!!! this fic rocks!!! surfs up!!!
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Reviewed By: greenchicken On: March 25, 2004 17:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I hope that you don't give into controversy and end up writing this like every other V/B that is in the top 10! I like the...wrongness of this fic!
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Reviewed By: inu_obsessed_chic not signed in On: March 25, 2004 15:56 EST
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Ur fic is absolutely amzing! I luv it, but plz dun rite a lemon on Goku and Vegeta! I dunno how much more i can strees dat! I also dislike yuri, but i won'st say anything... Ur fic is great and everythin, but did u have to make Goku so... Violent? Ur riting is amzing and I only wished dat u would update more!! Who cares if da chappies r short, as long as u update rite? N e wayz how did u get sooo many ppl to review? I'll review again if u so happen to update k?
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Title: lazy me
Reviewed By: Lazy meeee On: March 15, 2004 07:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the girl/girl stuff.Please updated soon with more on Illandra! She sounds hot!!!
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Reviewed By: Fire Kitten (too lazy to log on) On: March 15, 2004 05:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love the story, except for the part when bulma finds ilzndra attrative. that was gross. why did you write the down? and vegeta finding kakarott attrative was also very gross. dont let anything happen between those two. so, what else do you have in mind for this story. i'm dying to know. bye.
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Reviewed By: qbt On: March 14, 2004 21:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more soon! Fantatsic later chapters!
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Title: How about this!
Reviewed By: Desire69all4u [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 18:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why don't cha make Bulma run away from planet cold and in the process damage and steal lots of plans of Freeza's then give them back to Vegeta in forgiveness! Eh? Well if ya don't fin be that way! ....but in all happiness I love this freakin' story! You rock! But I still find Bulma's slight attraction to Ilandra disturbing..how about you make it soo that never happen's again...kay?
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Reviewed By: PiccoloLover #? On: March 08, 2004 17:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more and write quickly. Please. That's all I have to say.
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 05:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its great i cant wait to see what happends to bulma o god i hope they dont take the baby away man i would feel so sorry for her well please please hurry n write more ^-^ Storm
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Title: Hey.
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 05:35 EST
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Reviewed By: Setos_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 22:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy!---I came to see this story, with three updated chaps! *Does happy dance* Great job VG! I really love this story! Keep up the good work, and update soons!
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Reviewed By: bimbo n ditz On: February 22, 2004 06:15 EST
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plz plz plz update this soon! well done 4 the speedy update, now plz plz plz write more!!!! surfs up!!!!!
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