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Reviewed By: Giani Runi On: February 19, 2004 01:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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All I can say is - wow! Although I'm not big on Yuri I do like yaoi and I love where this story is heading!
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Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 20:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH YEAH YEAH!!! I love it when you update; this fic is so incredibly amazing. Each chapter is something new, I look forward to reading each one. Please update soon when you get the chance!!
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Title: mwa!
Reviewed By: total On: February 18, 2004 08:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally awesome! I loved Kakarot! He is so....wow! Sooooo cool! I also read baout that little kid bugging you and I feel kinda sorry for you. Still. I suppose little poeple always try to bring big people down - don't they?
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Title: mack_muffy@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Monkey Pal On: February 17, 2004 19:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm. This was interesting. I'm not much of a yaoi fan,and I definately do not like Goku/Vegeta ones, but this. . . I don't know. I was getting excited to see what would happen between those two. I mean, I knew they were going to get together in the chapter, Plans, because Vegeta was sexually frustrated and you told me in an e-mail that Goku was going to hook up with someone. Now, are Bulma and Vegeta going to stay with eachother permanantly and faithfully,or is it going to be different? Personally, I'm strictly a B/V fan. Well, it's strange seeing Goku as a sort of sadist, and I can tell you're not much of a G/C fan. I liked it though. I don't like that Vegeta was being protective of Zuccini or whatever her name is. I don't like her, but she makes the plot interesting. I was really surprised with Frieza's plans. I hope Trunks doesn't become some Saiyan hater or gay freak or something. I just can't picture that hot demi gay. NOOO! I want him for myself! Oh well. It's your story. I like it so far, and I am really expecring a good lemon, but you're right. Take your time. The chapters weren't that short. I haven't read a good lemon in a long time. Please UPDATE! I LOVE THIS! You are an amazing author! I swear! I love almoste everything about Slave! Oh, and I am using Monkey Pal as a name because if I use Punky Monkey, even when I log in, it won't let me submit the review.
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Reviewed By: leonie On: February 17, 2004 10:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is just GREAT!! Although I'm not really into yaoi this story is just great!! And like other reviewers said: Don't let this fic take over your life.
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Title: Hmmmm
Reviewed By: WWF On: February 15, 2004 08:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sheer brilliance! I loved the relationship between Ilandra and her father. I was sorry to hear about that kid bugging you (I read the reviews he left at your site!)
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Reviewed By: leonie On: February 15, 2004 07:00 EST
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Too bad is was a short chapter. But I'm glad you updated. I hope you update again soon!! It's still a great story!
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Reviewed By: once again On: February 12, 2004 21:00 EST
Comment/Review:
nice fic
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Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 19:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhhhh, this just keeps getting more interesting each and every chapter!!! I love how Goku is all evil; the only reason he was kind in DBZ was b/c he got a bump on his head (or that's my understanding of it). Please keep writing more and more, but don't let this fic take over your life. You have much more important things to worry about. ^_^
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Title: Oddity
Reviewed By: Random Man On: February 03, 2004 22:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story, compeling fic, keep writing. However, I see a hole in the backround. If the avarage Sayian woman will not produce more than one child, and 90% would be male, societies numbers would dwindle. The population would be reduced by by 85% in each generation. Then, how the hell could society last centuries, or even build up to the numbers present in the story.
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Reviewed By: me again! On: January 24, 2004 03:48 EST
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Bwa ha ha ha! Brilliant in it's sheeridiocity! (Sorry I only just understood the whole Don Juan thing! lol!)
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Title: Bravo!
Reviewed By: Lady Pesh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 15:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful work. With the time gaps between chapters, I would normally lose interest, but your fic leaves me hanging on every word for weeks. Continue taking your time. School is more important, and this fic is so great, it is worth the wait. A few spelling errors prevented a perfect set of 10s, but who the heck cares? Your story is superb; that's all that matters. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us.
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGE On: January 23, 2004 06:32 EST
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HI ITS NSBVEGETA SAYING THANK GOD FOR THE UPDATE I WAS GOING TO DIE!!! COOL GOKU IS HERE THAT MURDERING ASSHOLE HOW DARE HIM KILL MY BABE BARDY GRRRRRRRRRRR! AND SOME YURI ACTION TOO EH ?? LOL! UPDATE AND AND NEXT LEMON LEMON LEMON!!!! LATER!
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Reviewed By: charmedstar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 23:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the fic is great i love storys like these i hope there are more
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Reviewed By: bimbo n ditz On: January 20, 2004 10:39 EST
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g8 work once again plz update soon!!!!!!
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