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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: i'm jagan-I On: September 20, 2004 04:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my gosh!!!! they have a son???!!!???!!! oh my gosh.... Trunks, please oh please update soon, i beg you, i'm dying in here pls... pls.... You knbow you're one of the best writers in this universe so please don't torture me like this, pls oh pls update soon... Luv u so ,much!!!! uuu tc olwez... uuu
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Reviewed By: subu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 15:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
although this fic is quite different from the others you wrote,I still enjoy it as much as the others you wrote, please don't stop updating.
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: Dazed Reviewer On: September 18, 2004 14:39 PDT
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Oh my gosh! I cannot believe Bulma had a son! That's why she got all serious and mad when Vegeta was saying that the chance of her getting pregnant after just one time was highly inprobable. I can't believe it! She gave her son to Ju-whatever-her-name-is and that's is why she kept in contact and that's why she was so fixed on them only writing eachother at scheduled times because she was so worried about Trunks.Oh my goddness. By the way, what's Bulma's last name? Does Trunks have her last name or the other woman's? And please don't let her and Vegeta get an anullement. You should have Goku find out that Bulma is not chaste and has in fact lost it to Vegeta and did it with him recently. But you should have her find out that he did something with Chichi. Why else woluldn't he want her to meet her? He seems so secrertive about them. And make nexus get hurt os make himrape bulma! that would be awesome. Was Trunks the secret she wasd keeping from vegeta when she said he couldn't find out until after their anullement so that she wouldn't be tied to him. You should have Kakarot not want anything to do with her. She and himdon't belong together.She belongs with vegeta. They fit eachother perfectly. Besides,it doesn't really seem like Goku still lov4es her. he's probably just trying to be with her because that is what his life was like. make him be in love with chichi or comething. but make chichi and bulma be friends cause wedon't need anymoree jealousy n rivalry.Please update soon! |
Title: Speachless
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: September 18, 2004 09:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this story is realy good, I like where it's going. poor trunks though. I hope Vegeta Will get over himself and tell bulma how he feels
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Reviewed By: kikyo7089 On: September 17, 2004 19:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, the end of that chapter was a shocker. I had no idea. Please update soon!!!
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Title: Unwanted
Reviewed By: mlf On: September 17, 2004 17:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really don't want Nexus to be with bulma...oh how terrible that would be.i know that she loves him deep down inside..this story gets so hard to read somtimes...i fell for him so much..really great story.can't wait for more...maria
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Reviewed By: kendra On: September 17, 2004 16:16 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well if you thake out the flash back and reflection of bulma and vegeta you don't have much of a chapter. And with a *spoiling* title you don't bring anything thrilling to the story.
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Reviewed By: Sandy02 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 15:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God I love your work ^_^ Awesome chapter! Keep 'em coming! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Bulma75*** On: September 17, 2004 14:09 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE update soon. Great chapter. Knew it was Trunks all along. Great side plot.
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Reviewed By: Rachel Y On: September 16, 2004 08:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! I love the drama, but did vegeta really have to have THAT problem??? i can't imagine him being anything but perfect in that field... Anyway, i still love it all the same. Please update soon, i understand you may be busy, but we've been waiting for a while. PLZ!!
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Reviewed By: merlinis me On: September 10, 2004 22:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow what a chapter you have to update soon cause i can't wait!!!!
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Title: Awww...
Reviewed By: Sandy02 On: September 07, 2004 09:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww... Wow... Events are finally unfolding! ^_^ (I finally find you! I didn't realize you had stopped posting at FF.com until I looked at your profile -.- stupid me) But ah, whats going to happen? Is Kakarot married? Does Bulma have a child? And does Nexus now have that child under his care? Arg >.< Good story, awesome plot, wonderful writing. -Sandy02- -KittyKatRascal-
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Reviewed By: mona On: September 07, 2004 01:27 PDT
Comment/Review:
please update!!!!
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Reviewed By: hinagiku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 15:52 PDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Vegeta. I wonder what happend between Karkarotto and Chichi..
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Reviewed By: venus legacy On: August 28, 2004 04:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a briliant chapter i can't believe it ended like that i was so shocked i thought they would part on good terms but it seems you've surprised your readers yet again. i don't know why but i feel more sympathy for Vegeta than Bulma for Bulma is asking of Vegeta something which she hasn't even given him herself. She seems quite hypocritical to me yet i still can't wait to see how this develops. I can't wait to find out Nexus' plans for jucachigou and the mysterious child.
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