| "Unwanted" Reviews/Comments [ 221 ] |
| Pages (15): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 › » ] |
Reviewed By: kate18 On: February 27, 2005 04:54 PST
Comment/Review:
That was a realy sad end. There must be a sequal. You cann't end the story like this way.
|
Title: OMG!!
Reviewed By: Mallie 3 (not logged in) On: February 27, 2005 01:50 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't wrote a review for this story yet, but I am going to now since this is the last chapter. I had to look at the very bottem because... Well I had to let the two little words at the very end... 'The End' sink in a little bit. I think... there might be a sequal... I am sencing one...maybe...could be!? Love the story PLEASE maybe a good sequal because I couldn't believe that he died! I really threw me for a loop let me tell you!!!!
|
Title: Great story
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 22:43 PST
Comment/Review:
Okay, so I haven't reviewed in a long time... sorry... but I wanted to say, this was an excellent story and I enjoyed it very much. The ending was sad (understatement!) and the pace, I felt, was perfect in the last chapter. A very good mix of somber realizations and dire circumstances pushing forward the climactic ending. Personally, I felt gratified that it took to this point for Vegeta to truly and honestly understand the depth of his feelings for Bulma. I loved his last words to Kakarrot -- just perfect. And Bulma's reaction... shock. It will take time for the realization to really set in. So I loved that you brought Trunks back in to the scene, to in such an innocent way help her to start to deal with all of her emotions and what has happened. I'm sad that he died... but I'm happy with the ending. It was in keeping with the tone of the entire story. I think it would have felt too cliche if they ended up together especially after the care you put into building their "non" relationship. I say, leave the rest to our imagination. I'm sure she will tell Trunks the truth, and Kakarrot will eventually struggle through his guilt to share Vegeta's last words with Bulma, and she will have a long good cry about it all. But for us, I think leaving it at her telling Trunks all about him is a great place to leave it. Fantastic story, and again I'm sorry about not reviewing more often!
|
Reviewed By: Lady Lotus On: February 26, 2005 22:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Amazing! I love that you totally threw me for a loop! ^.^ I was bouncing in my chair saying, "NO NO NO!" when Vegeta died. Oh man. I really hope there's a sequel! As always, you're work is AMAZING! *~ Lady Lotus ~*
|
Reviewed By: Ragey On: February 26, 2005 21:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww, what a sad ending :(, oh well, i guess we all need some tragedy in our lives...nevertheless, this story was hell good! I sense a sequel ;), lol...jkz! cheers, peace out
|
Title: Unwanted
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 19:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how sad of an ending. but i guess it's over. i just wish that they got a chance to say to each other that they loved each other.. not sure if i want to see an sequel this was a very good story and i'll miss them together.. maria
|
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: February 26, 2005 18:33 PST
Comment/Review:
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh surley yo plan a sequal
|
Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 17:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I must say that that wasn't quit the ending I was expecting. I kinda just blinked when I saw "the end" when I was finished reading. Either you just didn't want to write this story anymore or you are planning to write a sequel...because this totally leaves too many unanswered questions. Don't get me wrong, it was really good, but the ending was rushed if that is the REAL END. It was like the climax and then the denoument in five seconds, lol. Please write a sequel, it would make it a lot better!
|
Reviewed By: sakismurf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 17:04 PST
Comment/Review:
well although it's nice to have a sad ending for a change, it seems like you kinda cooped out. Will there be a sequel?
|
Reviewed By: good chapter On: February 26, 2005 16:52 PST
Comment/Review:
I just really don't know what to say about that... it was good but too many unanswered questions... I really want to see maybe if you plan on going somewhere with this because that just lacked too much in the end then most of your stories... not just the ending but the way that it ended...
|
Title: ....o.o *faint*
Reviewed By: Pan_Chan_Breadgirl On: February 26, 2005 14:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...That was a good ending in such a bad way...waaah! I reaally hope there's more! It's so sad! But it's so inspiring and deceitful and wonderous.....*chants for a sequel* I like this fanfic even if the ending isn't perfectly happy (though reading of Bulma & Vegeta's odd love for one another made it happy even in its tragic end!). You'll always be my fav fanfic writer =)
|
Reviewed By: Kendra On: February 26, 2005 13:22 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes yes good ending I smell sequel.............please please please and yes we fanfiction lovers never get enough
|
Title: Unwanted last chapter
Reviewed By: Bulma75*(Not logged in..) On: February 26, 2005 13:10 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO! NO, NO, NO!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU DID NOT KILL HIM & JUST END IT LIKE THAT! That was horrible. And wtf? Bulma barely seemed mad at Kakarrot AT ALL. I usually enjoy your stories/writing very much, but this chapter was just all wrong. I mean, if a character was gonna die goodness at least a warning would have been nice and I wouldnt have gotten so attached to this tale and expected atleast an ending where they are ALIVE. This was really just upsetting, the worst ending possible. I dont mean to flame, but that's just how I feel. Seriously lol I refuse to accept this ending.
|
Reviewed By: Mely On: February 26, 2005 11:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no!!!! Poor Bulma and Vegeta! I hope there will be a sequal in the making. You did a great job with this story.
|
Title: Amazed
Reviewed By: star-brella (not signed in) On: February 26, 2005 10:57 PST
Comment/Review:
NOOO VEGETA!!! ::cries:: NOO vegeta died...i can't believe this....stupid Goku. I can't believe he actually killed him. and what about trunks? He'll never know the truth about Bulma and vegeta being his real parents ::cries some more:: It was so beauifully written, so touching, so sweet yet sad at the end. U did a very great job on this fic, from the beginning to the very end. So is there going to be a sequeal or no?
|
| Pages (15): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 › » ] |
