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Reviewed By: crazyhelga (not logged in) On: October 30, 2004 20:30 PDT
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Wowza! That was one dilly of a whopper to lay on Vegeta. Hmmm... I wonder if he'll figure out it's his kid... he did say that the kid was around sevenish and he probably knows that he was the only one who was with Bulma.. ahhh! I hate suspense! Great chapter by the by! Update when you get the chance.. loved it! Peace! Stacey ~ Crazyhelga
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Title: Unwanted
Reviewed By: mlf On: October 30, 2004 17:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MAN THIS SUCKS I REALLY HATE CLIFFIE'S...what happened to bulma please don't let that nut touch her...and vegeta man i know that he's hurting but come on.and kakarotte he's an ass.just a innocent kiss OH PLEASE ...update soon.....maria
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Reviewed By: kakkabrat1 On: October 30, 2004 16:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
figures, right after i remember this and decide to demand you update, you do so the very next day, only to leave me with a bigger cliffhanger than before!!! Argh! Update soon, or I'll poke you in the eye with a Hot Cheeto!
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Reviewed By: kakkabrat1 On: October 29, 2004 23:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your ficsare great, but I need to know what'll happen next in this fic! Please update soon, or at least e-mail me and give me an idea of when you'll be updating. My email is: kakkabrat1@aol.com
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 19:29 PDT
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bwahahaha, evil. update soon, you haven't in almost a month!
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Reviewed By: cococatia On: October 04, 2004 19:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have nothing to say except that your fic is the greatest of all, you have to update soon!!
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Title: chpt 14
Reviewed By: Aurelia19 On: October 03, 2004 12:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter! I never expected the reason bulma resisted vegeta was due to having already given birth to his child..such a nice twist!!! :D looking forward to how the story will progress, ganbatte!!
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Reviewed By: Kaibun On: October 01, 2004 22:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! I thought you'd given up wiritng entirely when you stopped updating on ffnet. But then i read your bio and you explained what had happened and i can't tell you how glad i am that you have kept going. this story is absolutely brilliant you have so much talent and originality its unbelievable. The thing with Trunks was an amazing twist and i can't wait to see what happens. You'd better get Bulma and Vegeta together or i will seriously die! this story is brilliant, all of yours are and i'm so glad you're still writing. you rock!
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Reviewed By: Jessica B. On: September 28, 2004 07:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So that's the secret she's been keeping! I should have known! Of course she wouldn't have gotten rid of the child when she was younger! Of course! It all makes sense now :D. Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for the next to come out!
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: usagi768 On: September 26, 2004 13:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awesome! So she had a son with Vegeta 7 years ago? This is getting so good! Please update soon! This is so awesome! I can't wait until Vegeta finds out. It is his child right? Usagi768~
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 14:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wooooooow!!! That was really good. I hope Vegeta and Bulma get it together and get together soon (but I'm a horrible romantic). Anyway, wonderful; I can't wait for the next one!!!!
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Reviewed By: crazyhelga (not logged in) On: September 23, 2004 21:19 PDT
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Great job LGV! I can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve for the next chapter... You always keep us at the edges of our seats and begging for more, and I wouldn't have it any other way! Well, keep up the excellent work and update as soon as you get the chance. Peace! Stacey ~ Crazyhelga
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Reviewed By: BlueRain32 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 19:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't get enough, awesome story. Why couldn't I have read them more slowly? I need to read more LOL. Please if anyone knows of other great Bulma/Vegeta fanfics e-mail me or list them. I haven't found any quite like Lavender's.
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Reviewed By: Venuss On: September 21, 2004 13:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love it, the plot is awsome!! please add me to your update list, bulma_secrets@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 10:26 PDT
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Well, that was an interesting turn of events! A new twist and Kakarrot's secret still to be revealed! Update soon!
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