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Title: Chapter 18
Reviewed By: crazyhelga [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 10:52 PST
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The end? The end!?!?! No way! Just as Vegeta realizes his feelings for Bulma he gets killed by his own brother! And Bulma realizes her feelings for Vegeta! Ahhhh! O.O! Please, please, please, please, please, please tell me that there is a sequel! Well, despite the HUGE loop you threw us for this time the story was excellent (just as all your other stories are). I can't wait to read more from you and hopefully there will be a sequel in sight.. oh how I hope. Ugh! I hate angst but I can't get enough of it (it's like some sick addiction).... excuse me while I go blow my nose... hehehe! Excellent job! Keep up the great work! Peace! Stacey ~ Crazyhelga
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Reviewed By: miaka16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 10:48 PST
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I should've written reviews for this fic a long time ago cuz I've been following it for a long time....problem is I have bad short term memory....long term memory....-.- But I will review now...I'm having trouble accepting this ending....I think I'm having more trouble than Bulma did..... It was one of the most beautifully heartbreaking endings I've read....it has been one wonderful fic and I wanna thank you for working so hard to bring all of us readers such a wonderful piece of literary work... ...but I would like to say (bleh..I hate asking this)..that I would be a very happy girl if there was an epilogue....a happy epilogue if you catch my drift ^_~ But if this is definitely IT..then it was still wonderful...you rock!
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Title: Holy Crap!
Reviewed By: Solafide [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 18:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Crap! Keep writing, and I won't stop reading.
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Title: Review of Chapter 17
Reviewed By: Crazyhelga [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 13:19 PST
Comment/Review:
Sorry it took so long for me to review. My brother decided to camp his ass in front of the computer for hours on end, leaving me no time to get on at all. Anywhoo.. I loved this chapter! Vegeta finally lets Bulma know how he feels and she blatantly rejects him and then we find out that Kakarot is decieving everyone and is about to kill his own brother... please tell me there's a catch to this! hehe... well, you keep pulling them out of your sleeve and throwing me for a loop, but the trickier a story is to figure out the more I fall in love with it! Please continue the brilliant writing and don't leave us hanging for too long! Peace! Stacey ~ Crazyhelga
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Reviewed By: SOrceresssfujin On: February 15, 2005 16:48 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MOR EMORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: bvgirl On: February 14, 2005 17:37 PST
Comment/Review:
Great chap but it took sooooo long. U R such a great writer. I love all your fics. PLEASE Update soon.
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Reviewed By: momojigi On: February 13, 2005 18:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! Finally an update it took you soooo long but it was worth the wait but i don't think i will be able to wait that long again. You are such a good writter. I just LOVE all your fics. You have to update soon.
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 08:09 PST
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Oh, my! Well, I've never seen two people so determined to be unhappy. And Kakarrot! I can't believe he's betraying Vegeta! I hope you can update soon.
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Title: Unwanted
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 03:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN I HATE CLIFFHANGERS !!!!!! you know maybe you should've left them in that room for a while just so they could have worked things out better. i can't believe his own brother is going to betray him. this story gets better and better each time i read it. so please update ASAP...maria
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Reviewed By: eshfemme On: February 13, 2005 01:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First update of the new year for you! You made us wait so long! Please don't make us wait that long for the next update. I love how this plot twist was so subtly set up so when it did happen, you're left smacking your head as to why you didn't see it yourself! Please please update soon!!!!! Your story here is such an enjoyable read! Two months is a horribly long time to wait. T_T
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Title: Favorite Author
Reviewed By: Mystery Star [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 23:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are one of my favorite authors. I am always excited when I see an update of yours. I have actually been reading your fanfics for a long time. I like everyone of them. Please keep giving us your great stories. Thanks!
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Title: amazed
Reviewed By: starbrella (not sighed in) On: February 12, 2005 20:51 PST
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wow, so after so long, you have finally graced us with a fic...yay! I'm happy about the update but not so happy about how late it took!!! I love this chapter as well as this fic and all your other fics! Keep up the great work, I so have to know whats going to happen next now that Vegeta and Bulma went through that whole arugment they still didn't decide on what to do. and Wow i can't believe that kakkarote is plotting against Vegeta. and that he really doesn't love Bulma n e more. plz plz plz plz update really really soon!!!!!! #1 fan, Star-brella
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Reviewed By: Mely On: February 12, 2005 19:42 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! Great! Great! You are a master at this!
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Reviewed By: marvenball On: February 10, 2005 08:41 PST
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you have to update soon i'm diing to read the next part.
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Reviewed By: Jeck On: February 02, 2005 02:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great fic. I love your AUs because you're always so creative about it. I like how even though this AU is medieval like with Ward, you still differentiate it enough to make it unique. I love how you've characterized all the DBZ characters in this AU even though in the anime, they'd be OOC. But they're close enough. I love Vegeta in how bad ass and vulnerable he is. I like how you took Goku and Radditz's character too. Everything fits so well. I can't wait to see how you take the plot too. It's all believable and doesn't seem contrived. I'm really anticipating your next update! Please update soon!
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