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Reviewed By: nikethana On: January 28, 2005 18:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! puhleaze update soon!
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Reviewed By: kainee On: January 26, 2005 00:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update! I love this story's AU! It's so angsty and nice. It inspires me too. Please write more-- I want to know what happens!
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Reviewed By: kainee On: January 26, 2005 00:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update! I love this story's AU! It's so angsty and nice. It inspires me too. Please write more-- I want to know what happens!
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Reviewed By: kainee On: January 25, 2005 20:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update! I love this story's AU! It's so angsty and nice. It inspires me too. Please write more-- I want to know what happens!
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Reviewed By: Vegetaslindalou On: January 24, 2005 12:11 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are the Best I have read all your fics. I think Surviving Together is my all time favorite, but I do like all of them. You are a very talented author, and by the looks of it I am not the only one who is hooked on your stories. Please keep up the great work and update real soon!!! We can't take not reading the next chapter after getting so involved in them.
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Reviewed By: marvenball On: January 10, 2005 19:45 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! You have to update really soon i can't wait to read the next part. You should definitely start updating faster it would be fantastic.
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 16:29 PST
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ok so this is actually my review for unspoken... mm is being ridiculus and won't let me review so I came to this one to give you props for the new chapter... I love this story and that one and can't wait for your next update of either of them... I love how they are both going along... Now who is this that has encountered bulma... and what was the reasoning behind radditz... was it really lust or was he trying to feel her out and find out how loyal she was to vegeta... dang you just left a huge cliffy dealing with all that... and then wiht this story... bulma is starting to fall hard for Vegeta... dang... He knows about their kid and she is wishing he would save her... I think she is going to love him regardless... and another cliffhanger... comeon... what is going to happen to bulma in both... ahhhh
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Reviewed By: Kaibun [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 23:42 PST
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that was kool! i havent read this story for ages and there were 2 huge chapters when i came back! yay! you better get bulma and vegeta back together soon! i cant wait for vegeta to kill nexus. and its gunna be good when everyone finds out who trunks is :D please update soon this story rocks!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 06:50 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, my. Things are really getting interesting now, aren't they? I feel so sorry for everyone, but most of all for Trunks. I'll be anxiously awaiting the next update!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 17:39 PST
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Awwwwe, don't leave me like this!!!! I need more!! Lol, well, Bulma's mother is crazy, and she's locked in a room that's identical to Vegeta's old room. Weird. Please hurry and update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 08:16 PST
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Reunions, indeed! So some secrets are out, but more left to be revealed. Great chapter and I hope you update soon!
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Title: Unwanted
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 06:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm sooo happy that vegeta now knows the truth as to trunks...now he has alot more to fight for then just bulma...i've waited a long time for this chapter and it's all that i expected to be...i fall in love with this story everytime i read it...and for bulma's mom please i hope in someway that bulma would be the one to get her back for all that she did to her family...please have a very merry christmas and a happy new year...maria
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Reviewed By: 3oclock_Tangerine [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 18:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this a lot. I await your next chapter with eagerness. Well, I've been reading it for a while, so I figured I should review...or maybe I did...hmmm, I dunno, here's another one just in case. Because I know you will feel empty and unapreciated if I don't, I mean, you only have a hundred and fifty reviews. You do a very good job capturing the characters. If they were in those times, I could imagine them acting just like you have made them. Yokudekida! ---3oTan
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Reviewed By: Starslight (starbrella not signed in) On: November 30, 2004 20:02 PST
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OMFG!!!! THIS is the best story i've read ever! (even though i say that about every story you wrote) ::sweat drops:: can't help but love all your fics! Your such a great writer! Do u have n e idea how many times i've cried while reading the 15 chapters? ::whips tears:: And HOW DARE YOU LEAVE ME A CLIFFHANGER?!!! GRRR YOu better update soon or i'll start reviewing every day to get u to update lol. ::smiles innocently:: great job on this fic! Keep up the great work and UPDATE SOOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: mona On: November 28, 2004 05:58 PST
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!^_^
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