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Reviewed By: bobmeave On: August 11, 2004 19:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
an other really good chapter i am so excited i can't wait to read the next one and the next of unspoken. Update soon please!!
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Reviewed By: mona On: August 08, 2004 19:13 PDT
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON... IM DYING OF WAITING!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: meavebob On: August 03, 2004 20:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
an other really good chapter i am so excited i can't wait to read the next one and the next of unspoken. Update soon please!!
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Reviewed By: LisaB (not logged in) On: August 01, 2004 07:46 PDT
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Hmmm . . .now what's Nexus up to? And how long before Kakarrot's secret is known? A great chapter and I look forward to the next.
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Reviewed By: Namoi and Kakkabrat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 21:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found out you moved here, so I got to read two chapters in a row! YAY! I love your story and I hope you update soon.I think you are one of the best writers I have come across, please review my story it is Called " Dragon Ball Genesis " I also Have moved my fiction to this place once I found out yours were being erased because of content. Well I love your story, I hope you atleast like my story. Always, Namoi and Kakkabrat
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 19:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so aorry I haven't reviewed in so long. Things have been crazy around here. Anyway, these last chapters were amazing! I can't wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: me On: July 27, 2004 19:53 PDT
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man, i thought that kakkarot was going to fall for chi-chi!!! oh shit, bulma's in for it now!! what it this secret? i MUST know!!!!! and what is nexus up to now?
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 18:24 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it is quite obvious that Kakarrott is hiding something from Bulma. It also seems as if Bulma is having a hard time putting her emotions in order. The ending of the chapter was unexpected and leaves me wondering how Vegeta will deal with this threat.
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: July 25, 2004 22:01 PDT
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ahhh... what will happen now... nexus has a plan and bulma and vegeta are going to face off with each other... ha ha.... Its amazing how two ppl can be in love and not even realize it...well lets see the next chappie soon...
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Reviewed By: 4\ On: July 25, 2004 21:06 PDT
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hmmmmm i think the child of that lady has somthing important to do with Vegeta and bulma.... well i guess we all have to wait till net time. Keep up the great work >>>favorite fanfic so far
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Reviewed By: Bulma75****** On: July 25, 2004 17:30 PDT
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stop beating around the bush lol just get to the good stuff already! (Ie, this child of whoms real identity we all are pretty sure about! ) Dying over here! Update SOON!
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Title: Unwanted
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 25, 2004 14:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooooohhhhhhhh it's getting ssoooo good please update..i ca n only hope that bulma finds the PASSION that she seeks.......later .maria
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: crazyhelga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 13:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I loved the ending of it, but I can' wait until the next chapter come out so update soon! I wonder what's gonna happen between Bulma and Vegeta, and with Juuhachigou and Nexus and Juu's son. Oooh! The suspense! Peace! Stacey ~ Crazyhelga
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Reviewed By: spini On: July 23, 2004 08:58 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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WOW!! Again an amazing chapter!! I wonder what´s all about the plan of Nexus and Seripa...Only you know! lol love ya
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 19:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my, Vegeta is being quite the hurtful bastard, isn't he? I almost feel sorry for Bulma, almost, but not quite. She should realize that her realality with Vegeta is more promising than her fantasy with Goku.I think something's not quite right with him. Can't wait 'til the next chapter! You're doing an awesome job with this fic!
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