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| "Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 1095 ] | | Pages (73): [ « ‹ 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 › » ] | Reviewed By: peachykeen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 21:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:o) chapter 16 was the cutest thing i've ever read, i wish i went on a date like that*sniffs* meh, keep up the awesome work!
| Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 20:21 PDT
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Purity and Torrent were just as brilliant as this one, but I think Chronicles is rapidly becoming my favorite. Thank you for sharing it with us.
| Title: It's a fill in the blanks question.
Reviewed By: Aitu---- ___ signed __ On: September 28, 2004 19:07 PDT
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Awwwwwwwwwwww. Holy heart melting, tender moments, Batman! What can I saw, those last two chapters were adorable. They brought multiple smiles to my face. =) Not only are you an excellent writer but you also have fabulous taste! (The tweed coat) hehe. I also imagined Kagome wearing matching tweed slingbacks, hehehe. (Yes, I'm a dork, but a nicely dressed dork, hehe) hmmmm. I lost my train of thought- -Sorry! Too much rowing today-- could have done without that last 1000 meters. Anywho- Loves it, as always. Take care, ---Aitu
| Title: LeeLu
Reviewed By: leelu821 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 18:16 PDT
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Ok, so I'm stupid. I didn't see another chapter posted! But, YAY! That was great! He survived a restaurant and he can ice skate. I want him more than ever now. LOL. If this doesn't draw them closer together, I don't know what will.
| Reviewed By: LeeLu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 18:10 PDT
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Oh god. The little girl inside of me is giggling away at that lil' 'date' idea. I didn't think he'd actually go through with it! See?! He is getting soft! YOUR MAKING HIM A SOFTIE!! LOL But I guess that's ok. I don't mind that! And I do want to know where this date is going to take place. Is he really going to take her out to dinner? InuYasha? In a restaurant?? Or a movie theater??? Bah, I can't see it happening...
| Reviewed By: GranolaBar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 18:01 PDT
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This chapter is as great as your other chapters are. You have a lot of talent for writing. I probably have like none... but oh well, all that matters is that I try and I enjoy it. I can't wait to see what Kagome and Inuyasha do on their date. Until the next date! ~GranolaBar
| Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 17:13 PDT
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I have just finished reading "Scars", and drying my own tears. I am at a pause. That particular chapter moved me so much... to think that his only scars leave him physical and emotional pain... I don't think I've ever read such drama that moved me to the point of sobbing. I've had tears in my eyes reading many other angst dramas, but that was just beautifully written and certainly pulled on my heartstrings.
| Title: great fic!
Reviewed By: ScarletRaven1001 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 16:04 PDT
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hiya! i am so glad i decided to read this fic, it's incredible! and on the diary, it's a rare thing for kagome to actually allow inuyasha to read it. it's kawaii! haha! and i love how you keep everyone in character. continue writing, coz i will absolutely continue reading! ja!
| Reviewed By: Aphae On: September 28, 2004 15:55 PDT
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::Laughs:: I love that InuYasha is reading Kagome's diary, with her full permission. It's unique and highly amusing. I discovered another reason I love your fanfics, everyone is still in character!
| Reviewed By: peachykeen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 15:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah...so the updating god has updated again, hehe awesome :o) I just finished reading chapter 15 and i thought it was very cute, it would be kinda neat if something like this acutally happened on the show...i wouldn't really know of course cuz i'm in canada and we don't get a lot of inuyasha episodes like the states...*le sigh*...meh... Can't wait to see what happens next!
| Reviewed By: inuyasha fangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 14:30 PDT
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awww nice/cute chapter dang its a cliffy -_- owell ^_^ up date asap, i can't wait to see what happends on Inuyasha's and Kagome's date. ~Melissa~
| Reviewed By: QueSaraSara On: September 28, 2004 14:06 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have really enjoyed your writings so far. You said in an earlier chapter how this was a good ol' fashioned love story. Good ol' fashioned love stories take time, but they are always worth the wait. I believe this fic will be the exact same way. I appreciate the way you update so frequently, it's almost unheard of nowadays. And I like best, your conciseness. I've never once thought you were superfluous in your writings. You always get your point across and then stop beating the dead horse. I really like that. Just know, for every grumpy or demanding reviewer, there are several of us: the grateful, patient ones who are willing to wait and have faith in where you're taking us. Or rather, where the characters are taking you. ;) I usually don't leave reviews but I felt it important enough to let you know, you are appreciated. Keep your chin up and keep writing the good write. :)
| Reviewed By: LeeLu On: September 28, 2004 10:26 PDT
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Just a simple kiss on the cheek, huh? Ok, good enough for me. At least their getting just a bit closer everyday!
| Title: Chronicles
Reviewed By: Sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 09:31 PDT
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I don't review very often, but I felt I had to respond to some of the comments I've read in the reviews, and my response to the story to date. I am fairly choosy about the fic's I follow, and try not to nag the authors about updating. Writing is a skill I don't have, and how you guys/gals do what you do is beyond me. I just love the fact that my mind benefits from your creativity. The same thing is calling me to review as has captured so many others. When he growled at her text book, I cracked up. I remember doing that myself while I was in college. Course, my text books were taking me away from playtime with my young son (at that time, he's 21 now) so I know EXACTLY how Inu feels. You have done some exceptional work in this fic showing the growth and development of Inu and Kag, both in themselves and with each other. You tell those idiots who are demanding lemons to go find a one-shot and leave you alone. Even I can tell that you can't have a lemon before it's time for one, and there may never be a time for one in this particular fic. Who knows, according to what I've read authors say, these stories write themselves, and wind up going where they want to go, kinda like riding a horse when you've lost the reins. This is a GREAT story! Don't change anything about your style. I've read your other stories, and I loved them too. If I've never reviewed before, then I'm sorry, I should have reviewed to make sure that you were properly encouraged. Thanks so much for listening.
| Title: It's Great
Reviewed By: RadiosNmyHead [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 07:29 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is amazing so far! I really enjoy the interactions of the characters. This is quickly turning into one of my favorites. Your ability to write these characters is amazing. Keep up the work!
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