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| "Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 1095 ] | | Pages (73): [ « ‹ 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 › » ] | Reviewed By: D. Nine-Asher On: October 13, 2004 22:05 PDT
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What's making Tetsusaiga blue? Hmm... I hate to sound like Miroku on an extremely bad day, but...is it sexual frustration? ::wink, wink, nudge, nudge:: LOL! BTW - I loved the kiss between Miroku and Sango. It was SO perfect. Enjoyed Sesshomaru gracing us with his 'divine' presence, too. WHAT is up with that guy? You never see him, and when you do, it's for like, five seconds! I'm startin' to suspect he spends all his time making himself look perfect for those rare five seconds. Don't get me wrong, I love 'im, but... ::whispers:: Betcha' Jaken has to maintain his hair and 'nails', LOL. Can you see it? "Jaken, this Sesshomaru has a cryptic message to deliver - pick up my pelt at the dry-cleaners." Whew, sorry, it's laaate! Anyway, thanks so much for all the super hard work - it shows. ^_~ Dev
| Title: chappy48
Reviewed By: blazingnymph7 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 21:49 PDT
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wow! looks like BakaYasha is finally wisening up. There may be hope for him yet, although I really think that the only way that he will figure out the full potential of the sword is w/ Kagome's help... Oh, By the way i actually think it was extremely hilarious what Kouga told Yasha.We may have to start a separete score for those two: Kouga-1,Yasha-0. sorry Yasha, maybe next time;p
| Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 13, 2004 21:08 PDT
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Wow. That review was kinda demanding, but not all that much. I agree with you all the way. I watch both Eng and Jap translations and the Jap version is definitely not for lil' kiddie's ears. I love the Jap versions cuz they're so much funnier with the "baka"'s and such. The Eng version sux cuz of censorship laws or whatever. They're nothing compared to the Jap! And I just have to say that you're so awesome when it comes to making a point and standing your ground. You rock! *waves* Oh yea, and Wee! good chapter! LOL
| Title: wow!
Reviewed By: a_cute_bunny [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 21:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy wow! I can't believe how good this story is. As for the girl/person who told you not to use wench so much, I liked the name sneaky wench so much I changed my aim handle to something like it! with credit to you of course my esteemed co-writer. is there any way that you can have the characters actually admit their love for one another? maybe not to each other but at least let them admit it to themselves? its killing me to know they love each other but they won't admit it. I litterally yell at my computer screen when they won't admit they love each other. I think my boyfriend is going to call an asylum for me when I read this story. he thinks I'm crazy. update soon! I dont mind more than one a day!
| Reviewed By: MouF [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 21:06 PDT
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*drum rolls* And it's Kouga that finds out Tetsusaiga as change! Go figure.:-) And what does Inuyasha find so fascinating with Kagome's nose??? LOL I loved the final tought from Miroku in chapter 47 LMAO
| Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: October 13, 2004 20:50 PDT
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Holy confusion, Batman! What's up with Tetsusagia? I knew Myoga and Totsai were up to something but what is it. Poor Inuyasha, like he doesn't have enough to figure out on his own. By the way, do I smell a showdown around the corner? Inuyasha's nifty new sword power, Miroku's "Monkinator" abilities, now Kagome's gonna get some training - please tell be some serious butt kicking is on the way. Thanks for all the updates.
| Reviewed By: laptawenzel On: October 13, 2004 19:59 PDT
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Mmmm, fluff. Thanks. Why can't Inuyasha relax and let Kagome increase her power? He needs to realize that it's to his advantage if she's stronger. More power is more power and they can do more damage as a team.
| Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 19:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* I love the fact that you feed my neurosis and update often enough that I don't have to obsess! I hope you can continue at this pace until the end. I hate it when I get into a story only to have the author lose interest. By the way I am amazed that you can update this often with such good work. I have read many authors that let quality suffer for speed - you are the fastest author and one of the best writers I have followed so far. I, however, am curious - is the story done in your head or is it unfolding for you as you write?
| Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: October 13, 2004 19:35 PDT
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yey! Aitu loves Inuyasha/Kagome reunions! That was happy. =) minus the feeling that all those bad guys will be showing their faces soon. Great job, as always! Loves it. ---Aitu
| Title: Kawaii!!
Reviewed By: firehairedpixie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 18:21 PDT
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Sango and Miroku are so KAWAIIIIIII!!! *giggles* I'm also suprised that it was InuYasha that put a halt on his and Kagome's *ahem* activites. I think maybe that Kagome is a bit more of a hentai then she would like us all to think. :-) But I definately think that the comfort level of doing THAT in a tree would be pretty low. And just what is Katosan up to anyway? I mean it doesn't look like his threats are working, or are they? Hmmmm. Anyway, yay for the update, I kept myself awake just to read it!! Damned head cold from hell.... And yay for Kagome wanting to learn more control over her powers, a girl can never be too strong. :-)
| Title: Chronicles
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 17:10 PDT
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Oh man, Talk about Passion Interruptus, I'd be thinking about pushing him from the tree too. LOL. OK, Gotta love Sessho the Misterious dropping hints, and my visions of Inu flashing back and forth over the topography of Japan looking for Katosan is a riot. I'm having to take notes to keep up with the subplots weaving in and out of the story line. You have a story in the future (Nephew, Fang, and now Katosan), story in the past (the diarys, the southern lord, Katosan, Miroku and Sango, and all based around Kag and Inu. Woman, you are giving me a headache. Did I ever tell you I love this kind of headache? I'm keeping notes cause, due to my busy life, I can't read as fast as you update, SO I'm doing the best I can, and I find that if I'm a little patient, you answer all my questions before I can ask them! This is certinly long winded, but I wanted you let you know that I AM paying attention. If I've missed anything, I'll catch it when I go back and re-read this fic from the beginning this weekend coming up. In the meantime, don't slow down or stop updating. It won't take me long to catch up, and When I Do, Mahahahahahahahahaha, I'm sure I'll have questions. No threats, only questions, not even threadening questions. Only one comment, tell Inu that in a tree isn't so bad, ya just have to find the right shaped fork!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: laptawenzell - not signed in On: October 13, 2004 15:33 PDT
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Ooh. Creepy chapter. How did Katosan get to Kagome's time? He either waited through 500 years, which means Inuyasha failed to kill him (boo). Or, just as bad, he can travel through the well (choke). Bad news, bad news, bad news! Hey, Katosan, stay away from that tree! What are you up to? Hurry up and get killed already!
| Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 13, 2004 15:32 PDT
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I KNEW IT! I knew that was Katosan as soon as he knocked on the door. But I don't get it...if Norimitsu has the diary and has poison claws, could he somehow be related to InuYasha and Sesshoumaru? NOOOOOO! That can't be! But then how does future Sesshoumaru get the diary in Kagome's time? Oh man, too many questions wracking my brain! But so many interesting ideas to think about what could happen!!
| Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: October 13, 2004 11:37 PDT
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Holy cow, what the hell is Katosan doing in the future?? Since you didn't give me a straight answer on the can't-exist-in-two-places-at-the-same-time theory, then does that mean that he jumped down the well? Is Katosan gonna actually turn out to be an ally. Is Norimistu really that much of an ass? Is Sesshomaru gonna 'help a brother out' so to speak? Hopefully all this and more in the next exciting episode of Chronicles.
| Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: October 13, 2004 09:47 PDT
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Loved the chapter. I just have this feeling that something bad is going to happen. Gah. Can you tell us now what it was that Sesshoumaru's wife was thinking way back in chapter whatever it was? I've just been feeling like someone is going to break the well and Kagome and Inuyasha will be seperated and it will be sad. Please tell me I'm way off, hahaha. Yey! Sexxhoumaru was in this chapter! hehehe (No, I have not yet stopped the giggleing over that... it might take me awhile) Cannot wait for more. *waits* *cannot*
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