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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: October 05, 2004 17:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what a great chapter. I have to apologize for not reviewing like I should but I must say I have enjoyed the ride so far. You are a true talent. I can't wait to see how Inuyasha and Kagome deal with this now. What's he gonna do? Why the hell does Sesshomaru want Inuyasha's fang? What's the deal with Waku. Can't wait to find out.
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: October 05, 2004 17:43 PDT
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Where to start. How about the end... There were confessions of loooooooooooooooooove@!()#*$ hehehehehehe. Oh wow-- what a giant cliff hanger. Must. Read. More! I just giggled and giggled at the "Inuyasha 1, sneaky wench 0" thingy. At my house my roommates are doing that all the time, for example: Light bulb 0, Autumn 1. hehehehe I'm glad to see that it is so popular. We also run around saying "I win!" And the pouring of the broth in to the Ramen: PRICELESS! hehehehehehe. Well, now that I'm all giggled and aww'd out... Buh-bye, take care, happy writings! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 16:54 PDT
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THat was a beautiful chapter. I like the end about Kagome facing everything else without fleanching but when it comes down to how she feels, she scampers away. I love it! I hope you update again soon! your really good at it.
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Reviewed By: Sharpieg On: October 05, 2004 16:43 PDT
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I know, I know.. I haven't reviewed in a while. I'm a bad reader! But I still love your story.. I'm curious about the other diary... the one in the past.. shouldn't they try to find that one, in case its in bad hands or something?? All the time-space continuum stuff hurts my head! hehe Anyway, love your work, can't wait for more! :)
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 05, 2004 14:17 PDT
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I was right! I'm getting good at this predicting thing. LOL. Yay! He kissed her again! *dances around in circles* I don't why I'm so giddy about it, but it just makes me happy to see them together! ^o^
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Title: notzathros
Reviewed By: laptawenzell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 13:16 PDT
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Really enjoyed the new chapter! I love the way I and K are growing closer and the way she cares for him. Nicely written kiss! Thanks.
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Reviewed By: marta178 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 06:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:3 :3 :3 :3 The kiss part was so kawaii!! :3 :3 :3 :3 Will inuyasha be reluctant in reading his mother's diary? I hope not. Why are this wounds so difficult to heal? untill next chapters!! ja ne!!
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: October 05, 2004 06:00 PDT
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Awwww, that was cute! In a painfull sort of way. Can't wait to see more of his momma's diary! Keep up the great job Sue!
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 20:27 PDT
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This is such a cool fic. I like it, I like it. You have truly seem to have put effort into this fic, and it shows. I can't wait for your next update. I hope that is soon! ja mata!
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Reviewed By: GranolaBar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 19:04 PDT
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Inuyasha's mom's diary is gone? Is it because of traveling through the well? That got me thinking. And I still wonder about Inuyasha's sword... what's wrong with it? If there's is something wrong with it that is.
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Title: Sueric Rocks.
Reviewed By: RadiosNmyHead [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 17:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm gone for three days after you said you were only going to post one chapter per day, and there are eight new chapters! Not that I'm complaining... I'm really interested in Sesh's mate. What's her deal? Anyway, I'm seriously enjoying this fic, and I am so impressed by your ability to update so quickly. You never cease to amaze me.
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 04, 2004 17:00 PDT
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It's gone. DUN DUN DUUUUUN! And the plot thickens! Hmm...So could this have something to do with time? Ya know, like they got the diary in Kagome's time, so they can't read it in InuYasha's time cuz it really shouldn't be in his hands at that moment. OH!! So the Shikon jewel won't be purified for another 500 years!! Oh I hope I'm right this time. I like predicting these things! Makes me feel all smart and stuff! LOL
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Title: I appear to be signed in, but $100 says that I'm not...
Reviewed By: Aitu- -wasn't signed in after all On: October 04, 2004 16:29 PDT
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(Not really sure why mm.org even logged me in last time, haha... I'll never understand this site's temperment.) That wasn't very nice (the so non-straightforward that they're zig-zagged answers to the questions)... =) But it was extremely funny! hehehehehe. I'd like to see Sesshoumaru as the toothfairy. Perhaps for Halloween? Ah, more twist and turns, twist and turns, la la la, twist and turns. Loved the chapter, loved the chapter, so much that I've broke out in song, la la la. What happened to Miroku that he got a bruise? I bet that he could use a cruise. And what did Inuyasha say to Shippo when they went out side of the hut, he came back without any major cuts, la la la. *end song* yea, that was getting sickly annoying to me too. Gggggggggggrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeat job! ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: wolfdemoness69 On: October 04, 2004 13:56 PDT
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you should really consider writting a lemon for this story.
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 04, 2004 12:14 PDT
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So wait...InuYasha's fang is Tetsusaiga, right? After Totousai fixed it when Goshinki broke it in half, he used InuYasha's fang. So, technically, it's no longer his father's fang, it's InuYasha's. I'm confusing myself here. LOL
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