| "Emergence" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] |
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 17:05 PST
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I hate stories where the whole plot is based on misunderstandings so I really enjoyed this chapter where Inuyasha and Kagome talked things out and they talked with Ayumi and Hojou and got them set up.
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Title: Very Kawaii!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: November 09, 2005 11:45 PST
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I loved this. The carnival thing was aorable & Eri...that skankazoid! The lime was nice too, although i wasn't sure if Kags "got hers" at first, heh. Very good fic.
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Title: chapter 15 - review
Reviewed By: mare On: November 09, 2005 11:28 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nicely written chapter. looking forward to the next one.
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Reviewed By: A FRIEND On: November 09, 2005 08:51 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter was great. I am so glad that she finally told off her friends. And Hojo will be happier with the other girl anyway. Great Chapter hope to see that you post soon. Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: vbollman(nsi) On: November 09, 2005 06:16 PST
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Cool. It's about time those friends of hers get the right idea. thanks for another great chapter.
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Reviewed By: vbollman(nsi) On: November 06, 2005 19:13 PST
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I'm really sorry i havn't reviewed. my computer has been down and this is the first time i've been able to. I just love your writing. And i truly hope that you continue to do so. I'm so glad that Kagome recieved some of her memories. will she ever recover the ones of inuyasha and her other friends?
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Steph [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 16:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very happy that you are still going to be posting. I know that it dose get frusterating when not many people review. I have two stories out on fanfiction under the user name stephmote and I didnt get many reviews either. Keep posting though. This chapter was really cute. I liked how you brought her father into the story. I saw a few errors but nothing that was to majore. All and all this story is one of my favorits and I do recomend other people read it. I would like to see you post a little bit more offten, but if not I understand too. Keep up the good work, and regardless if people dont review this story is very good.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos On: November 06, 2005 15:41 PST
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please don't fret too much over the small number of reviews, some of the best fics i've read (this one included) seem to get small numbers of reviews. don't know why. maybe people think it's so good that you don't need the encouragement? you have a wonderfully realistic point of view and you give a true voice to the characters. you take the relationships forward in a steady and believeable pace and you have a way with making the background and motivations behind the characters actions (some of the stuff we would already know from the anime and manga) seem fresh. so as far as having someone want to read if you post on wednesday...you have one faithful minion that looks forward to reading each and every chapter.
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Title: so dependable
Reviewed By: harpersong [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 13:41 PST
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With such a busy life sometimes I come home and open all my favorites looking for a chapter or 2 to read before bed. I just recently found your story and wanted to say thanks. Thanks for not abandoning the fic even when responses are low, and thanks for updating so often. It's a really cute story I look forward to following, and I get giddy when I see new chapters go up ^.^
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Title: Nice Chappie
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: November 06, 2005 13:30 PST
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I like this story quite a bit. I think you write them well in the relationship. I realize the frustration of not getting feedback (which is why i always try to review) but I hope you continue to post, even if things don't change much. I'm sure you have plenty of loyal readers. Well done.
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Reviewed By: Chibie On: November 06, 2005 13:24 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhh... what's happening?!? I wanna know what happens next! Please update.
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 11:44 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for updating so soon! :) That's too bad that you're not getting may reviews... this story deserves a lot. This story is very original and enjoyable. I love reading it when you update. Hope to see you update again soon :)
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 11:25 PST
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Just wanted to let you know that i've got you listed as a fav auth, and that as soon as I get an email that another chappie is up, I'm on it fast! I really think this is a great story, and beleve me, you shouldn't rely on how many reviews you get to prove how terrific your story is. I know, I've got a couple up, and sometimes it's a bit slow getting reviews too! But don't worry, this fic's a keeper. So be proud of it!! I love it! Now, on with the next chapter!!
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Title: Really sweet story!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 08:30 PST
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I usually read this on AFF, but now that I can find ithere, i wanted to leave a review. This is a really great story. Good luck with the awards.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos On: November 04, 2005 06:37 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
beautiful as always. you showed kikyou in a light that few people choose to show her in. i'm not fond of her but i can see her pain and motivations. and you just had to tease with prospect of prewritten chapters. please humor your faithful minions and post again soon.
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