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| "Emergence" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] | | Pages (12): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 › » ] | Reviewed By: theknightcallsmyname [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 08:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading your story, and wanted to tell you that I absolutely loved it! I hated to see it end. You did an excellent job portraying the characters, and I loved how you had InuYasha interacting with Kagome's mother. It was very special :) I read the long author's note you posted near the end, and I have to say that you did nothing wrong with your story - I had no problems understanding what you were portraying by having InuYasha leaving Kagome behind to hunt for the last shard with Kikyou. You did just fine with your writing, so it was no fault of yours that someone misunderstood :) Anyway, let me say again that it was an excellent story and I thoroughly enjoyed the ride.
| Title: Finally Finished Reading This
Reviewed By: animegamergirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 23:54 PST
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Hey!!! Once again you amazed me with the way you wrotethis story and I don't know how people can talk to you about your writing when I understood it all lolz!!!! I can't believe it took me a while to read this whole story since you are already done with it, but it was REALLY good and I'm sad that it had to end but I'm also happy^_^ Keep up the good work and I believe you have gained a new faithful fan!!!!!!!^_~ Newest fan: animegamergirl or Jackie^______^
| Title: From Beginning to End
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 22:20 PST
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That ending was so sweet and perfect for Inuyasha and Kagome, especially the last lines. I can't complain about the time Kagome missed with Inuyasha during her pregnancy with the twins since he finally got to experience it with their new youngest son. Honestly, your story was so captivating, original, and touching that I was enthralled with it until I got to the end. The plot was well planned and the conclusion was pleasing and more than satisfactory. You did a great job and I hope you write many more stories in the future since you have talent. You really did a great job with the characterization since all the characters felt like their true selves. Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 20:45 PDT
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That was an awesome story! It had some nice lemons in it which I compliment you on! They were not over done but still made me a bit excited if I must admit it. They story itself was better than I expected and I really enjoyed reading it! You are a talented writer and I thank you for giving me something good to read.
| Reviewed By: luna_sea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 11:42 PDT
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I meant to comment before when I oringally finished this at 6am but I was so excited to see what else you had that I forgot ^^;; sorry! Anywho! That was a beautiful story. ::sniffles:: I laughed, I cried.. I screamed "YOU BAKA!" until my sister thought I was crazy... ::laughs:: it was great! I'm so passing it along to my friends next time they ask me for something great to read ^.~ Keep it goin' darlin'! YOU ROCK!
| Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 17:58 PDT
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Your story has won First Place for Best Angst Fiction from the Feudal Association. Your award can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/aug2006awards/Best-Angst-Fiction-1st .jpg The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
| Title: awsome
Reviewed By: yashamaru1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 17:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great write once again... you are truely talented with your writing... shoot I Wish I was... I will be honored if you would read my story... only one chap now... but I would really appreciate it if you told me what you thought of it and what could be better... thank you again... Ja Ne
| Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 21:31 PDT
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Congratulations, this story has been nominated for Best Angst Fiction at the Feudal Association. Voting continues until the 22nd of September and membership to the group is open! Feel Free to join us! http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com ~Dark Avenger (aka The Daimyo)
| Reviewed By: inuyasha daioh9 On: June 25, 2006 19:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
honestly.......there are literally no words to express how...how...see? all I can really say is that this story is amazing. I had to stop myself from crying at some moments. I even listened to some of the music from the show when I read some parts. I just thought that is this was in the show, this song would play at the beginning of this other part, do you get what im saying? ...uh..yeah. well, I originally read this on fanfiction.net, and then I thought, oooo...(oh, and pardon me, please :D)..there's an UN-edited version on mediaminer?? oh ho ho...jk jk... on some times, when I finish reading the story, the author is all thanking the readers, and reviews and what knot(yes, I put knot on purpose. eets what i eez. lol),some mention a certain story....*wink wink* and, they highly recomended it. I believe one said, "Thank You everyone for reading my fanfic, but if you want to read THE BEST INU STORY EVER(other than the actually story of course...what?), then read Emergence by inufan-625. You guys should totally read it!" I was a bit skeptical when I first heard that, but I was a bit interested, so I remembered the name of the story so I could check up on it when I wasn't busy. uh, heheh, sorry... I just love this story so much, that I could really imagine this to be the the story. well, at least after naraku dies, from where you start it off. heh, I remember after I read the part where the motorcycle hit Kagome, I was all, WHAT THE HELL IS THIS?!?!?! WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF!!!!!!!!!! WHAT KIND OF FREAKIN STORY IS THIS? PRO KIKYOU?!?!?!?! lol that's how I get when things dont go they way they're supposed to be...Inuyasha*Kagome forever...although I wouldnt be compaining if it were me and inu....>_> hey, I know that all of us peoples want an Inuyasha of our own....*_*doggy ears....its always the ears...lol well, any way, I would just want to say that they should totally make this into a movie. like, Inuyasha the Movie 5(is there a fifth one already? I know only of four.):Emergence ...okay, I couldn't come up with a cool title, so sue meeee!!!! waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh!>_< or, they should at least do this as the last part of the show, like I said, above, after they kill naraku.(oooo! like in the second movieee! the kiss!! the kiss, the kiss, the kiss! squeeeeee! aw damn it........ I just realized that your story is over.....weird.>o< my gosh...well, I have to agree with all these super coolio peoples who have read this(reading this humongously awesomeness story makes them the coolio peoples that they are...see how that works?[= ), story. It may very be the best Inuyasha FanFic ever. I say that it could compete with the real anime. But, then again, the anime/manga is the original, so the win of the original is inevitable. hmm...like, Goku against Frieza; you know he's gonna be all, whoosh wooo, kaBOOM!! zooooom pow wap bop, ur dead, frieza!!! with that spiky golden hair of his, that flows up in the air with his very power by its self...-oh! eh, hahahahah, im sorry, this is supposed to be about inuyasha. hah, my love for anime knoes(yes, I typed knoes. eetz who i eez. lol) no bounds when it comes down to Goku and Inuyasha....wait. did that make sense? -___-? well, thanks for making this story, im glad to knoe that there are moms who love inuyasha! now if only my mom was like that...eh. I didn't know that there were moms who were so so so so cool that they could be all, hmm. I think I'll make a story on ff.net. I think i'll call it....Emergence. lol that would be weird if that's what really happened. hahahahahahhahahahahahahahaha! okay, well: Arigato, inufan-san. Your work is greatly appriciated.
| Title: wow
Reviewed By: KAZ1167 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 17:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I just...wow. I've been reading this story for the past three days, and I literally had to be physically removed from my chair in order for me to stop. I'm stunned at the fact you only have a 140 so reviews. This story is amazing and it deserves more credit than it has recieved. I can't wait to read your other stories!
| Title: Fantastic Author and Fantastic Story!!!!!!
Reviewed By: ladida [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 01:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have no idea why this fic does not have much much much more reviews because I absolutely love it! Honestly, you are very talented, there are not many writers who can really come accross and touch your heart the way you're fic did mine. Really, I absolutely loved it, and there are certain chapters that really meant alot to me, and i'll review more later when i remember what they were and what i was gonna say but you are great! THank you soooo much for sharing this fic inspite of the lack of feedback from people. =D
| Title: wow
Reviewed By: bigbluemonkey555 On: May 27, 2006 20:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... just wow.. I spent the last 7 hours reading your entire fic from start to end... I just couldnt seem to step away from it. It made me happy, and some parts brought me to tears. I really must commend you on your ability to create such a well developed story while still keeping the characters for the majority true to the manga. You really capture the relationship between Inuyasha and Kagome very very well. I really dont know what else to say, because there is so much i could say about this... Just know that im going to be reading your other stories. I really hope they are as good as this one. Keep up the amazing work!
| Title: Short and Sweet
Reviewed By: Emrald of My Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 12:51 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay! I finally found your story again. I haven't looked at any of your stories recently because I have had lots of school stuff to deal with. Anyways, I like it! ^_^ You really know how to write and give a lot of details. And you had a conflict! ^_^ a lot of Epilogue's that I've read were just...plain? I dont know how else to put it. I think after you finish your other stories you should write another one! I just can't get enough. I'm very surprised that you dont have many reviews. Oh hell, more than I ever get but still not as much and that surprises me. You have an excellent talent and deserve more praise than I can give you but you can absorb all that through other readers. Anyway a good way to describe this Epilouge is Short and Sweet. So please continue to write and post. Feel free to email me and Kungfuonyou_9@yahoo.com or kungfuonyou9@aim.com I would enjoy hearing from you! -EOMH
| Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: April 21, 2006 19:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sad to see it end finally... This was a very beautiful and touching story, Literary Goddess and so beautifully masterifully crafted!!! I have really truly enjoyed every single moment of it!! I wished it was a book so I could re-read it everywhere I go. The heart pounding thrill of the action and fight scenes, the heart pausing angst and tearful sorrows, the anger and frustrations of inablities to communicate or facing injustices, the WAFF of the tender expressions of love scenes and interactions, the yearning of being seperated from a loved one .... and not to forget the steamy.. -Lord I need a cold shower. Let's go melt an iceberg- white hot love scenes!!!!! It was all brillantly painted and deliciously detailed!!! I humbly bow to your talents, Literary Goddess. I loved this story!!!! KUDOS!!! Thank you for writing it and sharing this with us. You Totally Rock!! Now I have questions or concerns to express. Please don't be cross with me but the ending left me going 'huh?'..... Kagome was expressing her insecurity towards Inuyasha's feelings - his happiness. He was looking out into their yard and being distant towards her. Yes, I do agree whole heartedly they love each other unconditionally. They made love in the deepest sense and Inuyasha told her he loved her and their childern, but honestly it felt like he didn't address her concerns fully or re-assure her. I guess I felt it was maybe missing something. I maybe was reading it all wrong which I fervently hope so. I look forward to the chapters for Unfettered next. Please keep up the most excellent work!! Love your stories and again you Totally Rock!!!
| Title: Wonderful!!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue not signed in On: April 21, 2006 18:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh that was great! i love the way you ended this story. it is absolutly wonderful your a talented writer. love it love it love it.
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