| "Emergence" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] |
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 19:56 PDT
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It's kinda scary, how perfectly happy everything is right now. Either the story's almost over, or something is lurking in the darkness. Cover your nose, Boo, we will leave no crevice untouched!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 15:02 PDT
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Such waffly goodness!
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Reviewed By: jka On: October 27, 2005 14:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow very impressive!
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 00:46 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really like realistic stuff,rehabilitation is the most grueling experience, most times Kagome is injured in fanfics she is just magically healed, not considering the revive stuff. Your story is good an compelling, though I did not like what happened to Kagome in the hospital. For instance most therapies have more people in the area, and knowing Inuyasha it would have taken a lots of sits to prevent Inuyasha from ripping the bastard to shreds as he deserved. Aside from that is great. I can guess what sango and Rin talked but it is kind of fuzzy. Please keep updating
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 22:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good story you have going here! Can't wait to read what is coming next! Til then... :)
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Reviewed By: vbollman(not signed in) On: October 26, 2005 20:40 PDT
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Wow. Thank you. i've read and reread this story and the only thing i can think of to say is wow. keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: vbollman(not signed in) On: October 25, 2005 06:29 PDT
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Thank you for updating. I noticed a few mistakes but not many, with in the first few paragraphs you put 'ever' instead of 'never'. and a few other little mistakes like that. other then that i loved it. I just can't wait until put up the next chapter. thanks. luvs ya
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos On: October 24, 2005 19:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy your story. You show the trauma of the recovery process well and bring out the characters emotional depths. I can't wait for you to continue.
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Reviewed By: neko youkai On: October 23, 2005 20:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm so glad you've picked this story up again. i really enjoy reading. you seem to really understand the characters and even as you bend them to your will, you keep them as i imagine they would be in such circumstances. keep it up! i can't wait to see what you come up with next.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: snowluva420 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 20:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, this fanfic has brought tears to my eyes. Not many have done that, and I have read a LOT of fanfics. this one just has a beautiful plot and it just seems... so... enjoyable to read! I cant wait for another chapter. It's been a while since you've posted one, but I can wait patiently for a while. All I have to say is THANK YOU for creating such a beautiful piece of... well... art! I love it so much and please post soon!
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Reviewed By: shiba inu On: October 02, 2005 06:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that fanfic was really freakin' amazing,creative,and fantastic! In other words it was awesome. The humor in it was great as well. Sorry,I don't really have a way with words.
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Reviewed By: KuraiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 15:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. Just thought I'd let you know. Please continue!!! Please!!!!
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 00:28 PDT
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The kiss goes too quickly from accidental collision to genuine kiss and is missing the "shock" stage inbetween. Inuyasha can be quick to react, lighting reflexes, instinct and all that, but I don't think anyone can be so quick to get over the surprise of very suddenly finding yourself kissing the love of your life for the first time. But other than that, good chapter and good kiss.
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Title: Very sweet
Reviewed By: Amie On: September 28, 2005 16:47 PDT
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This was a very poignant chapter...I'm happy that Kagome will remember their first kiss, too! Loved the charm bracelet scene, and the charm bracelet itself. I'd like to have one just like it! ^-^ Thanks for writing!
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Reviewed By: iamfireofinuyashascurrentlynotloggedin On: September 27, 2005 19:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yayayayayay. you updated so soon! compared to other people, you're a speed demon. anyway, i just wanted to let you know that this chapter was fantastic. you are so great at capturing the mood and having the characters say exactly the right thing. thank you for blessing us readers with your gift of well-written fanfiction. till next time! ~fireofinuyashas
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